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Mon, 04/15/2013 - 17:16
#101
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Kidnapped!

I was thinking that Gwen should be kidnapped by Khazaim. It will be very convenient for my story.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 17:21
#102
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
XD!

Good, lol. XD

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 17:37
#103
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
Well then

I can arrange for you to be kidnapped, but it will require some powerplaying on others' behalf.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 17:39
#104
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Err

Aekuryi...Equinox already saved Chrisstopher....

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 17:40
#105
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
Distraction

Well the mayhem Axis brought down should help with the kidnapping.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:04
#106
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Ultimaknightz
@Thinslayer

Maybe I could make him disguise himself as a normal guy like that, but will only show his powers when his friends are in a terrible plight. I really like the idea of magic and stuff, and I actually wrote 1035 words for my application. Most detailed application you've ever gotten, yes? Anyhow, he does have major setbacks.

-He doesn't have any armor. One hit from a troika and he'll be sent to the emergency room. Heck, even a Calibur would be able to injure him badly.
-He doesn't have any weapons.
-His powers have major drawbacks. For instance, a bow shooting arrows is much slower than a gun shooting bullets. His teleportation takes part of his health everytime he uses it.

Isn't that already underpowered enough? If I had to follow your suggestion completely, I would have to change his backstory completely, and take out an hour's worth of writing for his abilities. Please, Thinslayer. I'll make it so he seems like the helpless guy in the beginning of the story, but will still join the main group. He'll get into a lot of trouble when fighting(because he won't show his powers yet and he's bad at using weapons other than his own), and his friends will have to protect him. Once his friends need a lot of help, he'll reveal that he has powers by destroying his opponents.

So basically, he'll use this simple loadout:
No armor
Calibur

That's all. He'll still have his magical abilities, though he will only start to show them when he or his friends are in deep danger. So please? Please? Please? Please? I know you have a kind heart. So please? Please? :P

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:10
#107
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Thinslayer
More story written!

@Aekuryi: I've already performed the kidnapping of Gwen. Khazaim (the big, hulking knight in Boosted Plate) knocked her and Ensar our, then hauled Gwen to the Al'truis for a mandatory chat with Kyrto.

Kyrto is in for a world of hurt. xD

@Gzilla: I would like for Gwen to meet Axis some time soon. Perhaps his is Kyrto's second in command?

@Ultimaknightz: Okay, I give in. You can have him with the stated setbacks. :D

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:16
#108
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Ultimaknightz
@Thinslayer

THANK YOU

It's time to start writing. WOOHOO :D

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:34
#109
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Callis-The-Wicked
ERRR

EQUINOX STILL SAVED CHRISSTOPHER I NEED AEKURYI'S POST REDACTED!!! O_O!

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:48
#110
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Aekuryi
I already posted this buuuut

Powerplay is fine :D
And I'll edit out saving.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:56
#111
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Who was powerplayed?

I thought that Ultima was powerplaying Gwen when he said that a voice demanded that Jason move out of the way. Since "the voice" is sufficiently ambiguous, I decided to take a creative liberty and make it Kyrto who bellowed that.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 20:03
#112
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Aekuryi
You did

You powerplayed Ensar to be knocked out by Khazaim. Which I'm fine with.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 20:13
#113
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Ah, okay.

So you were referring to my powerplay, not Ultimaknightz's. Glad you're okay with it. :D

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 22:43
#114
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Ultimaknightz

Did you see Gwen's reply to Jason?

@Aekuryi: I like Ensar's character. You gotta post some more about her. I'm thinking of creating another character just to interact with her (be he friendly or otherwise).

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 23:00
#115
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
BORED

Someone. Post. A. Story.

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 23:02
#116
Ultimaknightz's picture
Ultimaknightz
@Thinslayer

Yeah. I'm preparing the post. Until I finish the post and post it, please don't post anything about Gwen moving on in the arcade. :3

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 03:49
#117
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Infernus-Dragneel
Dr.Durp

Chrisstopher's gender still remains unknown for the characters of this RP, so don't act like you know it all of a sudden.

Oh and Seatus, I don't hate Equinox or anything, just wanted to make it look funny to the fact that Equinox was the one who actually saved him?

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 07:41
#118
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Infernus-Dragneel

I've been pretending that Chrisstopher is a "he" for that very reason.

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 19:42
#119
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
REVIVE

Someone, move the plot along.

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 19:56
#120
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
I uh might

Probably later tonight. Probably not though.
Dunno. Tomorrow. I'm not very reliable am I?

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 20:30
#121
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Ultima's post was...underwhelming.

I was hoping that Ultima's story would be much more powerful. Looks like I'm gonna have to get things moving...

But I've got writer's block. Someone else post while waiting?

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 20:44
#122
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
Well,

I already posted, waiting on someone else to too.

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 22:14
#123
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
:D

Ensar will be able to have someone to communicate with once a certain SOMEONE accidentally wakes up the futhamuggin Son of the Snarbolax, who came to this dimension because of visions from the Structure...

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 23:19
#124
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Callis-The-Wicked
OMG

Finally found a pic that looks like Equinox! FINALLY I don't have to draw anymore crappy pics XD HERE HERE HERE HERE!!!

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 00:14
#125
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Not Bad!

I like that Equinox! It's actually kinda close to how I was imagining him. :D

Man, Ultima's post was so terse that I'm having trouble bouncing a story off of it. :P

*hint* *hint*

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 00:21
#126
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Awwwe XD

The troubles of roleplay XD *holds up flag of first world problems*

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 03:53
#127
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Archemiday-Thebard
Arch the bard or arch the

Arch the bard or arch the angel? What do you guys want"

@seatus equinox looks like ragna? I'll go get the leftover parts from nu when you lose your arm. I also imageing the arch drive looked like rawegnas glove, but blue instead of red.

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 05:42
#128
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
Dr.Durp

We should have a bard, we need moar bards :3

By the by.... I had been trying to keep up with the story but I still don't get one point, who was the long haired man Equinox mentioned?

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 06:13
#129
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Liminori's character. He (Liminori) thinks I've abandoned him.

^^^
ALSO, Ultimaknightz, redact your last post. I already said the form disappeared, I thought that was enough for you guys to know it was an illusion. Seatus is shaowing himself to warn tue Morai of where they're adventuring to

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 09:25
#130
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
@Houndoom

You couldn't have followed the morai in, they were in an elevator? Maybe have him take an alternate elevator?

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 09:58
#131
Houndoomwars
@Gzilla: Don't you think

@Gzilla: Don't you think someone might have noticed someone who didn't belong? if not, Anubis was just being safe. As for not taking an alternate elevator, he wanted to keep an eye on the army.

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 14:55
#132
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Callis-The-Wicked
So.......

I have about two posts that are clashing with my entries, and probably confusing the readers. First off! Post #42 Or somewhere around there is Aekuryi's, I already saved Chrisstopher. And Ultimaknightz's post about attacking(the illusion of) Seatus. He isn't real, so he couldn't have possibly done any of the things Ultimaknightz said, because his form disappeared after the six seconds it was there. People, you HAVE to READ, MAH POSTSSS

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 15:44
#133
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
Hypocrite :3

I already edited it out. So that makes it one. I think.
What happened was that Ensar only found Christopher's blood.

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 16:25
#134
Liminori's picture
Liminori
SORREH!

Haven't posted for 2 days in a row. Yes, I'm Too dedicated to these forums. . . Now, what to post. . . .
(I am ARG!)

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 20:05
#135
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
NOW....

We simply have to wait for Aekuryi (Ensar)to respond...

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 20:31
#136
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
Hmm

Which will either happen tonight or tomorrow.

Wed, 04/17/2013 - 21:31
#137
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Lol...

*a white and red Snarbolax sits at white table and chair in the middle of the forest with a Chromalisk nomming one of his ear as they watch Finder's Keepers, tied with a rope and gagged, float down the river in a canoe. White and red Snarbolax, along with the table, the chair, and the Chromalisk, all suddenly fly backwards into the forest.*

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 04:19
#138
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
Dr duarp

Another note for Seatus: Chrisstopher isn't really evil nor does he? hate Equinox, but I tried to make him? as realist as I could... For a person like him?

And did anybody find this whole thing somehow depressing?

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 06:13
#139
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
XD....

I know that, and I find humor in it x]

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 16:00
#140
Liminori's picture
Liminori
Aaah!

(Save me from the Mecha Kiwi! )

So. . . Anyone feel like when you get back, and nobody's posted for a while (Like maybe 4-9 hours) That the forum's sorta dead?
Edit: Click* Click* Click* Sigh. . . I wish there was a "Future" refresh button.

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 16:03
#141
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Hypocrite...

You post almost NO RPs in the RP. Partially, the silence is your fault :3

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 16:04
#142
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
Uguu

I'll post soon-ish.
Well, I can't really say when I'll post. Doctor Who is very addicting.

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 17:48
#143
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
And also

Regarding my most recent entry, I know it was just an illusion, but there still was the scent. It wasn't a *full* illusion, but it wasn't fully real either. Sort of. I dunno. It's your call, Seatus.

Thu, 04/18/2013 - 18:40
#144
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Mmmh

Seatus' power is quite strong. Probably strong enough to leave a scent.

Fri, 04/19/2013 - 09:46
#145
Dewca's picture
Dewca
Long time no see...

Sorry guys but i can only post on the weekends. You know school and stuff... So yeah! Better get started! I will have to catch up though...

Fri, 04/19/2013 - 22:04
#146
Liminori's picture
Liminori
Muahaha!

I've been posting all week, and I have school! My secret? I wake up about 35 minutes before I need to ride the bus.
As in, (Bus= 7:20, Me= 6:45) I probably need more sleep.

Reads newest IC post. DAAAAAMN AEKYURI!

Sat, 04/20/2013 - 00:39
#147
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
@Thin

I have asked many times for Ultimaknightz to redact post #59 for the good of the readers, but he has ignored my wishes. I would like to point out a powerplay on my character. Permission for overwrite?

Sat, 04/20/2013 - 02:33
#148
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Infernus-Dragneel
Poor Gremlin kids!

And as we all know now...

Chrisstopher is very, very bad when it comes to the term of "Saving Money"

Sat, 04/20/2013 - 03:02
#149
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Oh....

I just thought he took le money from kids XD

Sat, 04/20/2013 - 05:01
#150
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
Bad gremlins get what they deserve!

"I don't need it anyways,"

Chrisstopher forgot to tell those kids that he didn't have any money at all XD

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