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A Knight's Tale (CONCLUDED)

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Wed, 06/19/2013 - 17:19
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Sintag

It all happened so fast. One moment, you're another Knight. Sitting around. Having fun with friends. Enjoying yourself amidst the normal hustle and bustle of Floor #2 on the Skylark. The next moment, you're fighting for your life as everything you thought you knew comes crashing down.

Let me explain myself.

My name is Sintag. I'm an Azure Guardian. One of the few privileged individuals lucky enough to serve with the best of the best. Valiance, Leviathan Blade, Azure Guardian Armor, Aegis...Truly, no gear was better than this. Myself and a few friends were just having a normal day. We were busy chatting about our next destination, Cradle. It seemed to be a normal planet. Wildlife was hostile, but everything was in this universe. If the wildlife was an insurgency, we were the police. Most of our contracts focused primarily on making sure other worlds were safe or eliminating hostile threats. Everything was fine until we felt a rumbling. I had assumed we'd entered an asteroid field - This has happened before. Then, someone came over the PA system and notified us of the news.

The Skylark was crashing, we were all to go to the Escape Pods. We moved quickly. Parts of the ship began falling in, inspiring panic into an otherwise calm place. I saw an armed blast bomb roll into the Blast Bomb storage, and in shielding myself and two other people, my Aegis was blasted into shards. Throwing the now-useless bracer off my right hand, I saw cables holding back something from flattening us. I climbed up and sliced them, but dropped my Blade and saw it shattered underneath the door. This left my Valiance. I used it's bayonet to slash through a jammed escape pod, but mistook the strength of the metal and broke the barrel, effectively rendering the gun useless. A very fast piece of debris, possibly thrown around from the tilting, slammed into me, shattering my armor and helmet, leaving me with my old Proto Armor (I kept it as a reminder I was not invincible.) Putting it on and readjusting the seals (It had been years since I last wore these), I didn't feel very protected. Suddenly, the back door, near the escape pods, opened. Reality ensued.

I was sucked out due to the high pressure and flung fast from the Skylark. I wasn't exactly trained for this, but as I freefell, I noticed an empty escape pod. I sped my fall towards it, and got inside. I prayed for life I wasn't going anywhere dangerous. I was unarmed, in poor armor, and in bad shape.

The pod hits the ground. It bounces, rolling, and comes to a complete stop. The only thing permeating the stagnant, mechanical air?

Silence.

Sun, 10/27/2013 - 14:56
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Sintag
Chapter 2: A Tale of a New World and Reawakening

I awoke in the pod. It hurt to move. I saw, on the right hand side, that the Punch Gun was OK. It's slug generator had been broken in the fall, but that was expected. I saw a second shell. I shot one hinge, reloaded it, and shot the second one. Clicking empty, I discarded the Punch Gun and kicked the door out, then climbed out to overwhelming brightness.

I saw that a helmet had been left there, and I swapped it out for my old, too-tight helmet. It's com unit was operable, so I sent out a distress signal. Much to my relief, I heard a familiar voice. Rhendon got in contact.

"This is Rhendon. Who's on the other line?"

"Rhendon. This is Sintag on the other end. My weapons are destroyed. I'm requesting a Proto Drop near my location. I'm near my pod. Transmitting it's coordinates now."

"Roger, Sintag. A Proto Drop is headed your way. Be on the lookou-" There was a small explosion. "DARN IT! Not again! This is the...Look, your Proto Bomb exploded in loading. The rest of it survived. It should touch down in three, two, one..."

A small pod blasted near me. It opened, revealing a blast crater in it, a slightly scorched Proto Shield, a Proto Sword, and a Proto Gun. Sheathing the sword, holstering the gun, and bracing the shield onto the armor, I was ready for battle once again. I set out, walking with my sword in my right hand, my shield held tightly in my left wrist. This equipment would do, but clearly I could use better.

"Rhendon, the equipment arrived."

"Good. Good. I'm detecting biomasses moving your way. You've got incoming enemies, 2 o'clock."

"Rhendon, your scanner must be going nuts. I don't see anything."

"That's a good first sign of identifying what's headed at you. Raise your weapon. Those will be at your location VERY soon." He warned.

Immediately afterwards, I saw a lizard-like thing approach me. I withdrew my blade, readied myself, and tensed.

Time to wake up, Sin.

Thu, 06/20/2013 - 02:30
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Hearthstone

Good, good. Really great. :)

Thu, 06/20/2013 - 02:53
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Hogmos

Great!

Thu, 06/20/2013 - 04:11
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Mayaura
nicely written

i enjoyed it

Wed, 01/22/2014 - 11:04
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Sintag
Chapter 2: A Tale of a New World and Reawakening (2)

I saw it crouch backwards and fling a tongue at me, like a chameleon. Rhendon came back over my com unit. "We call those Chromalisks. They camouflage themselves to remain invisible. Defeat that thing before it disappears." Wasting no time in getting to the action, I firstly dodged the tongue. I had to admit it, this was exciting. Finally, something to match my skills. I then closed in on the Chromalisk and slashed it with my sword, knocking it backwards and eventually leaving it down and out. Rhendon interrupted me again with more bad news. "We've got mechanical forms moving FAST towards you. From the looks of it, they're burrowing through those holes you see in the metal."

Readying my gun, this time, I first checked to see if it worked. Taking aim at a block off in the distance, I made sure the safety was off and clicked the trigger. A satisfying pull, followed with a small "BANG!", and off went a small green bullet, flying straight ahead. It flew some distance and fizzled out. Figures. These guns weren't exactly Valiances, and certainly the range didn't match. I took aim at the first disturbance in the metallic flooring, and fired. I heard the sound of metal bashing into metal, follow by a nigh-unearthly sound. I then saw something glowing rising from the ground.

I quickly saw what appeared to be a sharpened stick-like arm, followed by a metallic body arising from the rest of the hole. It was horrific-looking, making me all the more tempted to open fire, which I did. It raised it's arm and, with deceptive range, slashed me, which caught me off my guard, injuring me with a small cut on my right arm. I quickly saw it preparing a second strike, but this time, I raised my shield up, defending myself from the arm. I then saw it had swung too much, and, seeing my chance, stabbed it repeatedly with my sword, wrecking it. I saw what appeared to be embers of our Heat Storage room. This must've picked a few up. I quickly collected them. Warm to the touch. I stored them in the armor.

It was after this (And some walking) I encountered Rhendon in what appeared to be a small hideaway.

"Ah, good, Sintag. You've finally arrived."

"Good to see you too, Rhendon."

"Let's get down to business. The Proto Bomb was the lst we had, and, well, it exploded, so you're still going to lack one. Also, there's a Rescue Camp right over" - He pointed northward - "That a-way. Get to there ASAP. I'll come after you once you radio safety."

"All right, Rhendon."

It was eight uneventful hours of walking until I had made it there.

I finally approached what appeared to be a series of pitched up tents. I walked inside and discovered other Knights, all of them in bad shape. One had a gaping hole in his armor, caused from an attack, he told me. The power was offline, so everything resembling a machine was offline. I radioed Rhendon. "Rhendon, Sintag here. I've reached the Rescue Camp you mentioned. Things don't exactly look good here."

"The Gremlins must've stolen the generator again. See what you can do. Ask around. Someone's got to be in the know. Also, about those Embers you grabbed. Here's the good news. Quite a lot of things here have those and they seem to have worked their way through the planet. You should be able to use them to make your weapons and armor more proficient. Here's the bad news. The entirety of our Heat Storage Room went sky-high when the Skylark blew. You'll have to collect a lot of Embers to re-power everything to it's former level."

"Oh, joy."

"Not a lot I can do here, Sintag."

"I'm aware. Sorry for the attitude. I was just annoyed."

"That happens a lot with you."

"I'm aware, Rhendon."

"OK. I gotta make my run to the Camp now. Rhendon out."

"Roger."

I then looked and asked around. I saw another knight approach me. "Hey, you there. Want to help me out?"

"Pray tell, with what?"

"We lost quite a few recruits last night. Wanna help me avenge them?"

"While I'm not typically one for revenge, I'm more than up for taking down a few more opponents. Let's go."

On the way over, introductions were made. I already forgot this guy's name, though. Seriously.

"I have a spare Proto Bomb. Here, take it."

I was overjoyed to see a bomb in my hands again. Giving it a few light tosses, I took the gun out, put it in a backpack of things that wouldn't travel with me, and then held the bomb in my right arm. It was very light, I found out, and made of some sort of plastic for the outer shell, the inner shell containing a small explosive. Not very powerful at all. As I stepped over the gate, it sprang up from behind me, trapping me with a small group of monsters, my sword, and my new bomb.

(End of Chapter 2)

Thu, 06/20/2013 - 15:14
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Hexlash
This is great!

This is really well written! Keep it up! I like the setting and how it is set up! You have a couple mistakes, but I'm too lazy to point them out, jsut keep doing what you do!

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 15:42
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Frostrex
Brony on!

Just a few things I don't understand with this. Don't get me wrong, this is a great fix. But I can kinda see you're going for the realistic side? Correct me, if need be.

Here's the list:
How did Sintag have enough time to change out of broken armour? Broken armour would be a lot harder to get out of then good condition armour.
How did Sinatg fall towards Cradle, when you mentioned something about the ship maybe getting stuck in an asteroid belt? Is Cradles gravitational pull that strong?
And lastly, how could Sintag get a Proto Drop when the ship was destroyed?

I understand that it's fiction of course, so anything goes, but please, don't take these as hate criticisms. I'm liking the fic. It's a nice change of pace from emotionless robots.

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 17:35
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Sintag
(Addressing your concerns, Frostrex)

Pretty good examples of what TvTropes would call Fridge Logic right there.

Concern one, how do Knights instantly change armor (OK I know armor doesn't break in Normal SK)? Arsenal Stations/Haven.

For Sintag, at the time, he was aboard the Skylark, which, until he crash-landed, was indeed acting in as Haven. (See now, Fridge Logic fighting Fridge Logic makes my brain hurt.)

Concern two, Sintag only assumed they got stuck in an asteroid belt. The reality was the tearium core explosion creating the rumbling. (SK Lore is a bit hard to decipher regarding this sort of thing, so I had to dig a bit to find this. OK who am I fooling, ask Feron in the Arcade.)

Concern three, Sintag actually transmitted the coordinates of the escape pod he was in. I suppose I didn't exactly make it clear enough.

Your concerns have been noted, and thank you for enjoying the series thus far.

Wed, 12/11/2013 - 20:18
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Sintag
Chapter 3: A Tale of Bombs and Giant Swords

As the gates sprang up, several monsters appeared from seemingly nowhere. I wondered for a few moments how in the world they appeared that quickly. Then one of them, a wolf-like thing with a maw filled with...Actually slightly dull teeth, advanced towards me. It reared up, but having learned courtesy of the Chromalisks, which, oddly enough, were nowhere to be seen, I sidestepped it just as it's jaws clamped into what was now thin, thin air.

I then withdrew the bomb. I was, at the very least, trained very basically in using bombs (You charge them, you set them down, boom, everyone dies). Arming the bomb was easy enough, just had to haul it around waiting for it to arm. I then set it down and watched the fireworks. Monsters were scattered. Several were now dead. Several more stood back up, more than ready to face me down with the angriest look on their faces. ...Well, about as angry as animals can be, anyways. Two of those wolf-like things charged me. The other two looked ready to charge me, but collapsed and died.

I took my sword out and slashed one across it's face, inflicting a scar upon it and killing it this time. The second one actually managed to bite me. I yelled out in immediate pain, and, this time, backed off. Blood was now flowing from the wound to my waist, and I cringed. No doubt it was going to be infected soon. The second Knight noted my pain and I saw him take out a cylinder from his pouch and seemingly strap it to a suit of armor, using quick bindings he must have picked up from basic training. I then refocused my attention when I saw the wolf preparing to lunge a second time, rearing it's legs and crouching back as if to gather momentum. I sidestepped it and this time stabbed my sword directly into it's back, killing it with no further ado. The gate lowered.

"You got hurt pretty bad in that fight. Here. This USED to be a spare suit of armor, but the addition of this little Vitapod here ought to keep your butt alive. Hopefully also cure that infection you may or may not have."

I looked over and saw he had led me to a tent, presumably to change. I quickly slipped into the new threads, and felt better basically instantly. This "Vitapod" - Is that what he called it? - Made me feel a lot better. I felt and looked better in the suit. "Oh, also, this. We got a few too many Hatchets in and around camp, so we figured we'd repurpose them as weapons. Suppose this ought to help you." He then tossed me only the biggest freaking sword I had ever seen. I caught it and tumbled backwards. I groaned in pain as I attempted to hold it up. "It's...Kinda heavy..."

"You'll get used to it." The other knight spoke of my complaint.

"Eventually." I grunted in pain again. This actually had a slight burning feeling in my hands. Of all my years of wielding a Leviathan Blade, this was the only time a sword actually HURT to use it. No wonder they had too many of these things.

We walked back to camp. Sunset was ending, FAST. Another Knight approached me with a new task. "We need a new generator. Given your progress in beast-slaying, we figured YOU should go do it. Nothing personal, you're just the best fighter of all us...Wait a minute. You're Sintag, aren't you?"

I smirked a little at this. "The one and only."

The other Knight nodded. "Then you're only the perfect man for the job, Sintag. Follow me, please."

I rolled my eyes, less as a "Yeah, whatever", and more as a, "What am I, everyone's errand boy?" The other knight noted this. "Yeah, well, enough of that. Every second matters here. Faster you go in, faster we are on the grid, safer we are...And the faster you can reach Kora." The guy had the most devious smile on his face.

Gulp. He knew?

Let me explain myself here. Kora and I were the best of friends in training. We formed an almost nigh-ungodly ability to form a plan and act on it VERY quickly. Kora had long helped me since my training days. She became a Com Agent, preferring to be sidelined from combat. And don't tell her this, but I also formed a crush on her.

Seriously, don't tell her.

(END OF CHAPTER THREE)

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 18:21
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Awesome chapter!

Good work, man! Been monitoring you for the past few chapters. This is teally good work.

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 18:44
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Sintag
Chapter 4: And your enemies at a safe distance.

I leaped into the hole, felt a slight "THUD" as my legs hit metal. I then saw four of those cylinders to my left. "Those are Vitapods!" The knight was yelling to reach me, creating an echo. "To your right is an Arsenal Station! Feel free to exchange weapons and armor there!" I quickly changed the Bomb for the Gun. As hilariously overpowered as that thing was, I needed a more mobile style, I figured. So I stepped on a grated platform, since it drew my eye.

Nothing happened.

Another yell. "Oh! Right! I almost forgot something. Let me just...Ah, here we are. I then saw him slowly lowering something down on a rope. "This is an Energy Tank. Use it."

I picked up the Energy Tank and examined it in my hands a bit. It had a circle with a horizontal line inscribed into it. Clicking the button, a light blue mist FLEW OUT AT ME. I clipped it onto my belt.

"All right, now try stepping on that grated platform again! Those are the elevators we use to go down or up from the Clockworks!"

"Wait, WHAT? The hell are the-" I had stepped onto the platform and was being lowered. "The hell are the Clockworks!"

"Wot! Wot was th-" The voice was cut off.

"Ah, crap..." I turned around, ready to face the terror that awaited below. Actually, never mind terror.

I was going to die of boredom and tedium.

There were.

Absolutely.

No enemies.

IT SUCKED.

SERIOUSLY.

In fact, as soon as I saw an unkempt green...Thing...I was actually slightly relieved. And then, Razwog, as he called himself, sent enemies at me. A froglike robot that walked on four legs. Those laser-sharpened stickarm things, or, as I heard them called throughout camp, Retrodes, stalked menacingly. And then a treelike thing with a giant wooden club for a left arm and a puny right arm that forced me to smother a laugh.

I sent about almost methodically destroying them. I shot the frog-like bot in the eye until it's systems shut down (Rather explosively), repeated my method of killing Retrodes (Read: Wait until they fire their laser (BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAH) and then stab the heck out of it), and then dodged around the treelike thing's massive arm before attacking it, slowly whittling it down until it went up, much like the Retrode, in a comical number of small explosions. I then saw electricity float on up to Razwog's console, giving him a horrible shock and, more importantly, overriding the gate that held me ahead. He ran off, like a coward, swearing vengeance. "Yeah, right. You, and what army, you freak?" Anyway, back to the gate. Down it went, with a small generator replacement floating there. ...Wait, how was it floating?

No matter, I decided to myself. I then ascended to the surface to find that power switched on. It hit me.

Razwog's console was the generator.

So then...What did I just grab?

(End of Chapter 4)

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 19:41
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Chapter 4 1/2: Haven Ongoings

Haven was hustling and bustling with activity. The auction house dealt new weapons like candy to those who could open their wallets. The alchemy machines were put to so much heavy use it was a wonder they still worked. The bazaar went unused, sitting in almost pristine conditions. The Garrison was still being set up.

Kora paced and paced, wondering about how the Order was going to re-establish itself, wondering about the recruits, wondering, wondering, wondering. She was a busy woman, you know. Recon was scarce at this point and she was willing and able to jump to anything that seemed remotely interesting to keep herself occupied. She was sitting alone in a grassy knoll in the Bazaar, taking in the sunshine and Snipes.

Most importantly, her thoughts drifted to the Rescue Camp. She wondered who was going to make it out to Haven alive and able to serve. She wondered who had met their ends there and prayed that no one else was lost.

As if to answer her pleas, Sintag came onto her com unit.

"This is Sintag, contacting any Com Agent willing to pick up. Is anyone on this channel?"

Kora sighed in relief. Of all the people, Sintag, her best friend, was the one she hoped to hear the most. She was deeply worried for him, as a friend. She was unaware he was alive and was about to, depressingly, mark him off as "killed". She got onto his channel first.

"Sintag? Sintag! It's good to hear from you."

"Wait, Kora? You survived?" Over the line, Kora could hear Sintag breathe a sigh of distinct relief. She grinned a bit and laughed a little.

"It's, ah, it's good to hear from y-you." Kora could hear Sintag stuttering. Typically, he didn't stutter much in his speech. She seemed to do this to him, for some reason or another. She surmised she was having an effect on him. It was cute how he did this.

"Anyways, so power's back online in the Rescue Camp. Save for those crazy enough to look for trouble, we're probably not going to lose anyone else."

"That's excellent. Really, it is. how did it turn back on, though?"

"Take a wild guess, Kora." Sintag's voice sounded more playful, like a cat with an endless ball of yarn.

"You did it."

"You're welcome." Sintag left that one off with a laugh.

"Anyway, I hear Rhendon made it as well. Speak to him. He might have things planned for you."

"Will d-do, Kora. Sintag out." Sintag dropped off the channel.

Kora sighed, tears of happiness welling her eyes. She contacted Feron, who was keeping track of the survivors.

"Feron! Sintag's alive!"

(END OF CHAPTER 4 FOR REAL)

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 02:11
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Hearthstone

Hm...

I remember a story similar to this one, following the actual start of the game, when the pod crashes down, and Rhendon and all else.

Anyways, good work :)

Sun, 06/23/2013 - 12:10
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Sintag
Chapter 5: The Long Road

(Right, I'm switching up my style here since first-person view can get quite a bit boring done wrong. It'll persist for a few chapters, but I'll switch back on occasion.)

Rhendon was ending his run to the Rescue Camp. He saw, in the center, a strange light-blue light, several Knights surrounding it, among them sintag, looking at what he recovered with a quizzical look on his face. Rhendon walked up to it, a quizzical look on his face as well. "Well." He stated, finally breaking the silence, "Perhaps Spiral HQ could analyze this...Well, whatever it is. Because none of us can." He was right, and everyone knew it. Then, another Knight walked up to them. "Oi! You two! You know where Haven is?" As if to finish the sentence, Rhendon answered. "No idea."

The knight gestured for Sintag and Rhendon to follow him. "Right across that bloody great big chasm!"

Sintag spoke up. "Yeah, but how are we going to get there? It's, well, a chasm. How are Rhendon and I going to get to Haven?"

"This." The knight stated, attracting their attention to the elevator nearby. "I suspect it leads across the chasm."

"And if it doesn't?"

"We'll fast in your memory. Unless Spiral HQ sends up those chocolate-like treats, in that case consider yourselves gone and forgotten."

"REAAAAAAAAAAL nice incentive, pal."

"Right, but tracking the gate map...It looks like you'll arrive in or around Haven."

"So you want Rhendon and I to investigate?"

"Exactly."

"Ohhhh....Kaaaaaaaaaaay."

Rhendon finally spoke up, relieving the awkward silence.

"I'll haul that thing you picked up from Razwog, Sintag. Just worry about yourself."

"Roger."

And so Sintag and Rhendon stepped onto the elevator and descended into the Clockworks.

"Heh. Long road ahead, eh?"

"Not exactly."

Kora popped up on Sintag's com unit.

"OK, Sintag. Judging from the Rescue Camp, the elevator that Knight suggested DOES lead to Haven. Be warned though, it's activity has been lighting up like a string of fireworks these past few minutes. Constructs off the charts. Something's gotta be leading them."

Sintag answered, stuttering somewhat. "R-Right, Kora. We-We'll keep an eye out."

Kora replied back to his slightly stutter-y respone with, "Kora out."

And so they pressed on.

Mon, 06/24/2013 - 08:27
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Sintag
Chapter 5 1/2: Sintag's POV

I took the lead, with Rhendon following close behind, warily keeping his Blitz Needle readied up to blast anything that moved aside from us. We stepped onto an incredibly large button. We then saw about 40 tons of TNT followed by a button FOLLOWED BY WIRING appear. All of it was in bombs. All the bombs had a strange symbol on it. I memorized it. No doubt it may prove useful. Then someone stepped out. It was Razwog, the same Gremlin who, hours earlier, I had one-upped by destroying all his little toys.

"We've already met, you." He pointed an unkempt and messy finger at me. "So I'll get right to it. Hand me the artifact, or I'll blow you, this floor, and the artifact into a million tiny little ashes!" Rhendon sighed in anger. "We don't have much of a choice, Sintag." He walked over and placed the artifact, his eyes filled with rage at being in a hostage situation. "Perfect." Razwog stated, simply. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have problems to eliminate. Forty tons and two of them, to be precise." He then hit the button...

The floor erupted into fires. Nothing was safe. Rhendon was dragging me along, with myself, who was scared of fire, too petrified to move. I began crying in fear. When I was a young kid, a fire has devastated my home and family. Since then, I have always been scared to death of fires. Rhendon knew this well and carried me along with a look of sympathy in his eyes. I stopped crying and stodd to my feet, and began RUNNING AT A CLIP. Rage replaced my fear.

I was going to find Razwog.

And I was going to kill him.

Rhendon has trouble keeping pace with me. I stepped onto the large button, and he was panting, sweating (I suspect that was from the fire) and clearly out of breath. Razwog delivered the artifact to something or someone, it was too shadowy to see the other side. He turned around.

"Kek! How did you get here? You were...I did...NRRRRRRRRGH! Fine! If you want to be persistent, I'm going to finish you both MYSELF!" He took out a flamethrower and stepped, overconfidently, to the arena. I looked at him, rage boiling over in me. Razwog sent in several more machines - I suspected he withheld them from our first fight - But they were gone within moments due to having caught the malady of getting SMASHED. I then looked back over at my foe and without warning charged him, knocking him over. A few more machines came in, trying to help, but they too fell victim to the Hatchet's killing power. I then withdrew my Gun and shot down another Retrode, aiming for it's eye-things. Back out came the Hatchet. I was getting used to using this thing. It no longer hurt to carry it.

After that, Razwog stood to his feet, but was smashed by me and riddled with holes, courtesy of Rhendon. I dropped my sword down. For evoking a childhood fear, this was simply personal. I lifted Razwog by the collar with one hand and beat him down with the other. Eventually, Rhendon had to tear me away, worrying this was inhumane. I looked at Razwog. I had beaten several bruises into him and blood was trickling from his nose. I took my hatchet and smashed him downwards one final time, ending him. Rhendon closed his eyes and spoke. "Requiescat in pace (Rest in peace). You monster." I calmed down and realized what my anger hath wrought. I quietly vowed to never become that filled with hatred again. We had to press onward, though. Eventually, we found a small water generator. Activating it, the floor was now doused in water. Rhendon and I walked through the corridor. Along to greet us came a truly massive figure in size and armor.

"Feron." Rhendon spoke. Was this really THE Feron? My childhood hero, Feron?

I quietly smiled a bit for two reasons. I had met my hero, and our journey was over.

"Rhendon! We had a huge amount of activity here. What the hell was going on?"

"Some Gremlin by the name of Razwog detonated the entire floor. Sintag and I barely got out of there alive."

"Well I'm glad you both made it. Now come on! We've got work to do, and this floor is crumbling!"

We all bolted for the elevator and went up. I smelled the fresh air again, a kind departure from the stagnant, smoggy air the Clockworks had to offer. We then walked forwards into a new place. Haven.

"Wait, what about the Rescue Camp?"

"Right, now, concerning those recruits. We've collected what data you've analyzed. We're going to send in a squad of Knights to rescue them. You've saved them all, you two. You should be very proud."

"Unintentionally, but, ah, OK then, Feron."

Feron laughed, quite heartily. "But that's besides the point. Welcome to Haven, Sintag. This will be your home."

I stood ahead and gazed at a bustling town. It was a big place. "This is Haven, eh? I think I'm liking it already."

Feron simply smiled. "Good thing, too."

I took several steps ahead and entered the main town. Ahead of me were tons and tons of Knights. Friends or foes, I had yet to determine.

But I was finally having the sense I was home.

At long last, too.

END OF CHAPTER 5

Fri, 08/16/2013 - 14:43
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CHAPTER 6 PART 1: Adjustment

I stepped into town a bit. I then took on a full-on jog when I saw someone that stopped me dead in my tracks and then some. It was Kora. She greeted me with a purely friendly hug that made my heart race faster than Usain Bolt riding a rocket cheetah. I began to stutter and was actually beginning to sweat. "I'm so glad you're alive!" She practically smothered me.

"K-Kora." It was hard talking since she insisted I be smothered in the hug. She relaxed somewhat and let go, remembering that she was a friend and not someone who had fallen into head over heels love. "Yes?"

My mind practically spoke up, but since I didn't have the nerve, the words went unspoken. "When c-can I g-get a tour?" I was blushing like hell. This might have tipped Kora off, but if it did, she said nothing to me. I then looked around and felt a tap on my shoulder. Turning around, I saw an impeccably dressed man. "I don't suppose I could aid you?"

"Lead on, I guess."

"Follow me." The man gestured me to follow him. "The name's Bechamel. I'm the local Accessorizor around Haven. I'll tour you around the Bazaar." He seemed a nice enough fellow. "Over here, and here are the weapons merchants. Practically nobody buys from them, though, but they DO sell some nice things every now and then. Check back daily, their stock changes up. Over there and there are the general goods dealers and armor and shield dealers. Since your armor and shield are both crappy at the moment, I'mma give you some money and send you to buy some better stuff." He put a bug into my hand. In it were 300 crowns. I walked over and bought a Mining Helmet and a Fencing Jacket. I took the comlink off my old Helmet and attached it to the Hat. I slid on the new Jacket and it felt a lot looser than the old stuff. I looked into my wallet and discovered 150 more crowns. With those, I bought an Iron Buckler and slid it onto my back, ready to jump from Haven to a fight in the blink of an eye.

"That's all you'll need to know for the time being. I suppose HQ will want to send you out on missions and all that, so I'll link you through to Kora, your assigned Com Agent." My heart skipped a beat when I heard that. I practically felt like tumbling over. Things looked up.

"Ha ha. I can see it in your face. You DO have a crush on Kora." I was about to speak up. "No no, I won't tell her. Your secret is safe with me, amigo. For now, take in what you have learned. You'll need it."

I walked off and returned to the main square. There, a filled to the brim crowd of Knights stood ready around a massive structure that was handing out weapons, armors, helmets, and many other things, like candy. I had to admit, I felt a slight pang of jealousy. I shrugged it off, though, and walked around, genuinely taking in the new sights. I went north to find myself in a massive building. I saw Feron, a Geo Knight (I could easily recognize them due to their distinct crest), and several other things. Then I saw the elevators. Four of them. I then saw a pair of hands encirle my face. Thinking it was Kora, I quickly turned around to see another girl hugging me. "Hello there!" She then let me go, realizing she hadn't introduced herself. "The name's...Well, I shouldn't tell you my name. I'll just make you work for it." She winked at me, obviously trying to hit on me. I blushed a bit but quickly repressed it. She saw it, though. "Hee hee...You're so adorable." She reached around and hugged me again. "I think we should help each other out. What do you think?"

I had nothing to lose. "Sure. Why not." The girl grinned, overly happy, and jumped at me, ensnaring me in a squeeze. I tumbled over onto my back, and she continued rubbing up against me. "Oh. By the way, the name is Tina. Nice to meet you....Ahhhhh, what's your name?" She got off me and helped me to my feet, but not before coquettishly kissing my hand. "The name's Sintag. Good to meet you, Tina."

"Great! Now, let's see here...Ah. Skies Under Cradle...Hmm. I'll form the party and invite you, OK?" She then quickly poofed away in a blink.

Kora popped up for my line. "I see you've met Tina. She can be quite the tsundere. Let me explain. Normally, she's a stark cold individual. But it seems as though she's taken quite a love at first sight liking for you. This'll work out, I promise."

"Thanks. After that experience, I sincerely doubt things'll magically sort themselves out, Kora."

"I try."

I suddenly was teleported to Tina's arms. She then quickly helped me over to the elevator and we descended down. I was somewhat used to this.

On the ride down, I took a good look at Tina. Long, blonde hair tipped with a dyed shade of blue. A rather adorable face with the most chibi and cute features. A slim figure. She couldn't help but notice me and squeezed me. She grabbed me and held me in her arms for a few seconds before letting me go. With a peppy spring to her step, she hopped off the elevator and got onto that same massive button Rhendon and I had ran into numerous times. We both stepped down onto it and it lowered down, sending up a gate. Tina led the way.

I quickly followed behind her peppiness and had to admit it was kind of contagious. I had a bit more pep and vigor to my attacks and was somewhat more vicious. The jacket I was wearing helped my Hatchet-ing things to death while the Miner's Cap kept me safe from some attacks. We worked well as a team and made our way to the next elevator. We repeated it, but it was a ling and tedious process. When we reached the final Elevator, Tina grabbed me and snuggled against me. "We make such a good team. Maybe we should stick together." She gave me an iron ring that corresponded to one she wore on her wrist. When then deposited what Heat we had gathered to our weapons and armor and went upwards for Haven. When we arrived, we received a transmission. "Kora, please, I know this. Let me be with my Sinny."

Sinny? Really? She already had a nickname for me? REALLY?
I gulped. This was...Well, frustrating to a small extent.

"Right, Kora. Right. Got it. Yup. OK cool. Thanks!" It was simple and for ONCE in my life stutter-free. Finally.

I then collected my things and deposited them into the backpack. Things were looking higher than ever. That is, if this maniacal tsundere wasn't completely smothering me in affections.

Oh well. I guess I just gotta live with this circumstance.

END OF CHAPTER 6, PART 1

EDIT: Hooray, fixing. =.='

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 09:22
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CHAPTER 6: PART 2

Tina and I were, despite her overwhelming affection for me, becoming fast friends. She seemed to be quite smart regarding Haven and even gave me a better sword than my Hatchet, something she called a "Bolted Blade." I sheathed it after slicing the air with it. Only marginally heavier than my Proto Sword, which was quite lightweight. I sheathed the new sword into the sheath that I once placed the Proto Sword in. Leaving the arcade since I ran out of energy, I quietly kicked the ground, unsure of what to do next. Tina led me to a small, tranquil garden full of birds or, as the other Knights were calling them, Snipes. We sat down, myself taking in the sights. It was a lovely place. How Tina found this, I'll never know. As soon as we both had sat down, though, Tina was squeezing me. She really had no self-control over herself, I thought.

"Sinny, you look kinda pale. What's the matter?"

I looked down. I was turning a shade of pale, yeah. I suspected potentially I had an illness from one of our missions, courtesy of what Tina called a "lichen".

"Why is this happening?" I think, however, we both knew the answer to that question. During that mission, I ran into a thorn bush to escape enemies (My shield was broken, to be fair) and must have gotten infected with who-knows-what. "Oh no. Tina, where are the medics?"

Tina only responded with nervous laughter that turned my bones to ice. "Over in the Garrison." She helped me up and helped me walk over to the medics.

After that, I passed out.

I reawoke, it must've been hours later, with Tina sitting in a chair next to my bed, staring at me, a worried look on her face. When I sat up, she got up and sat at my side. "You're alive? That's good to know. ...Hey, I got something for you." She pressed something into the palm of my hand. It read like so.

"Dear Sintag.

I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. If you can, please head to the Hall of Heroes once you've re-acquired a Calibur, a set of Cobalt Armor and the Helmet it goes with, and a Defender. We have things to discuss.

From, Jorin."

Jorin? Oh man. I knew that guy. Back in training, we were always neck and neck. It seemed, however, I had kind of overshadowed him. Since he beat me to Haven, he got the title of Cobalt Knight, it read. I felt a pang of envy for my old rival, but then remember he's been spending his whole life in my shadow. It was time for him to earn some respect. Even if it meant being a political bodyguard for our stand-in leader.

I didn't want to leave the bed yet, though. I don't know if the doctors had me on anything as of yet and didn't want to risk it. A few minutes later, Jorin walked in.

"Hey. I heard of what happened to you and, figuring you'd want to check if the doctors had you on anything, I decided to just visit myself. So. How've you been?"

"Oh, real joy, Jorin. First off, I'm happy you're in the Hall of Heroes. Seriously. Second off, I've only crashed into the planet's surface at about X miles an hour, been bitten on the waist, blown up, nearly lit on fire, and potentially poisoned. Nothing too big or anything like that, nope."

Tina spoke up. "And he has me." She hugged me, and I winced in pain, causing her to let go. "Sorry, Sinny."

Jorin was, I could tell, smothering laughter at that last word. I looked at him with relative annoyance. "Anyways, I was wondering if...You wanted my position."

I looked at him. A fast way to my former rank, and then some! It seemed like a dream come true!

...But then I remembered. Jorin had long been under my own shadow, eclipsed by me. I could tell he wanted to earn some respect. So I did the right thing.

"Jorin, if you bring that idea up around me one more time, I will accuse you of not being a true Knight."

Jorin was pretty happy to see this and quietly left the infirmary without another word, leaving me alone with Tina. She soon got up and left for the chair and resumed her quiet stare. I fell back asleep.

When I awoke, I was deemed fit for duty. Seemed all that had been were some minor toxins. Nothing major or anything, would have caused flulike symptoms and paleness to the victim. I got up and noticed Tina's iron ring, which she had given me, on my wrist. She must have attached it while I was sleeping. Either way, she's the only one I'd trust in the field for now. Maybe that's what these symbolize. A lasting trust between two partners. It felt odd and uplifting.

(ALSO, END OF CHAPTER 6!)

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 17:00
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Sintag
Out Of Context Talk: #1

Hello, my name is Sintag.

When I set out to make A Knight's Tale, I wanted to make something a lot more on the realistic side. Rather than have wonky, robotic characters the whole way through, they begin seemingly predefined, but their character gets broken, emotionally, mentally, and, oh yes very much so, physically, which I wanted to illustrate.

So I'm taking a break from writing for like a week or so. How about that. One week with no chapters. That's probably the longest time I'll go without writing in this thread.

Originally, I was suffering a major breakdown concerning some people (Not naming names here since Hyperion would use his high-quality firearms to shoot them out(Bonus points for getting the reference(Why hasn't anyone else thunk of it))) and considered full-on canning it.

I then realized maybe time to pick up the fragments would work better for me. So yeah.

I'll give it a week, see if I can't create new ideas and genuinely try to implement them.

So, adios. See you on Tuesday of next week (That'd be July 2nd). At least then. If not, I'll put up another OOC Talk and ask around on potential character personalities. But no "Here's a guy with no weaknesses and all strengths." Yeah-no. Those aren't belonging here. NOPE!

Wed, 06/26/2013 - 11:46
#19
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Hogmos-Forum
Great

So far your work has been really great.

Wed, 06/26/2013 - 16:02
#20
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Sintag
OOC Talk 2: Character Applications

Well I figure now that the prologue has been done with I might as well ahhhh Y'know go ahead and ask y'all to make some characters. I will credit you within the fanfic's context and add you in as "Character Maker" when all this is said and done (This may be a LONG time!). I know I said "No Updates" but I figured I could have you guys help me along with some more of those OC's because they're important. Thank you.

Also, as noted above, no emotionless, robotic, godlike (Or all three if you dare to be a rebel) characters. Those will...

A. Be nerfed. I'm a fan of dealing the nerf as needed. Strong character? Fast as a glacier. Fast character: Weak. Strong AND fast character? Cannot use a gun to save their lives. Accurate gunner? Takes a while to shoot. Fast gunner? Can't hit the broadside of a barn with a Callahan. Someone who does all four? See B.

B. Rejected outright. I am NOT a fan of doing this sort of thing, but if need be, I will pull out the REJECTED sticker. You WILL not be added in as a character and you WILL not be named among the character creators in the credits.

C. Be accepted, but quickly killed off. Oh yes, there will be killings. If I have to (Either because I'm getting overloaded with overpowered characters or I let one slip and their creator overpowered them), I can (And often will) kill them with no remorse in a sadistically creative way. And if their creator made their character invincible, the Bolt of Divine Retribution shall smite thee.

You're welcome. :)

SO ANYWAYS ALL THAT SAID/DONE HERE'S A CHARACTER SHEET. BA-BOOM. (NOTE: I may/may not read yours. If I don't I got no time fo' dat. But I will read it later. Thanks.)

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Affiliation:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Personality:
Weapon Preference (You cannot prefer everything):

Now get crackin', because those OC's won't make themselves!

-Sintag

Returning 7/2/13

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 05:14
#21
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Hearthstone
APPY!

4 years from the actual guy...

Name: Kyrie

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Affiliation: Arbitrary, will depend on YOU to write of him :)

Strengths: Strong and fast

Weaknesses: Easily gets countered when off-guard and gets tired early

Personality: Little aloof and little loner type

Weapon Preference (You cannot prefer everything): Acheron and Glacius

...Dimensions Collide! /laughs

Anyways, I hope you can write more! :)

EDIT: Actual App, you can use this as reference.

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 02:39
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Hearthstone

P.S.

Nerf him if need be. Also, sometimes he trips :)

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 03:43
#23
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Hogmos-Forum
My App

Name: Alfred

Age: 22

Affiliation: Spiral Order

Strengths: A really Good gunner and good speed

Weaknesses: Defense and close combat

Personality:Quite friendly but with a brazen attitude towards superiors.Very shy in front of female knights.

Weapon Preference: Storm and Umbra Drivers,Biohazard,Argent Peacemaker and a combustor for close combat.Standard gunner gear.

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 11:30
#24
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Sintag
(About Character Creation)

Skye, mind slightly clearing up your OC? It's not that I can't read it, more like I can't understand it. Mostly the first half of the "Strengths" line. Thank you.

Hogmos, you're accepted, WITH A NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERF!

Sword: Attack Power Decreased: Medium
Sword: ASD: Low
Sword: CTI: Low

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 19:48
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Playerman
:P

Name: Carter (Male)

Age: 25

Affiliation: The Spiral Order, but doesn't see himself as really a part of it.

Strengths: Very strong and fast, with both sword and physical attacks (kicking)

Weaknesses: Obviously enough, guns - fights with no shield, so he'll get hit by some things (explosions come to mind)

Personality: Intelligent - Prefers sarcasm as his means of humor - Introverted, prefers to go solo - Especially has trouble communicating with females, will unknowingly makes a barrier from them (blocks them out of view with another person) - Will place other's lives in front of his, which surprises them often - Sits around a lot (eyes follow something like a butterfly), will usually notice something important, but won't interrupt someone else talking - Fights with honor, won't sneak up on the enemy or bash them 'til they stop moving - Has a habit of poking things.

Equipment: Gran Faust (wields one-handed), Solid Cobalt Helm, Vitasuit Deluxe. He can start with another weapon, but I'd prefer the Gran Faust :P

Weapon Preference/Specialty is really just heavy swords.

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 21:31
#26
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Hearthstone

Will do.

...as soon as I get internet access after school XD

Sat, 06/29/2013 - 11:09
#27
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Sintag
Character Updates

Carter has been accepted in as is. And about the weakness to girls thing you and Hogmos share - Boyohboy can I exploit those or at least make it comical.

Also Skye has been accepted, with the nerf of slightly decreased HP.

Update arriving in about three days, people! Keep your eyes as peeled as mashed potatoes. Or peeled carrots. Or keep as wary as the average Minecraft player is of Creepers.

Sat, 06/29/2013 - 17:46
#28
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Hearthstone

Acceptable. Well, it seems logical to decrease health because of low Vitality, though. XD

Sat, 08/10/2013 - 09:13
#29
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Sintag
Also, suppose I ought to make the sheets for my own characters.

Not messing with some characters because canon in main SK.

Name: Sintag

Age: 17 4/5 (He's basically 18)

Gender: Male

Affiliation: Spiral Order

Strengths: Good swordplay and mostly accurate gunner, moderate HP, moderate defense, moderate attack speed and charge time. Rounded out person.

Weaknesses: Easily caught off his guard, does not know many other weapons than the Order's weapons, CAN NOT BOMB AT ALL WITH ANY DEGREE OF SKILLS

Personality: Typical "Get-the-job-done" fellow with his needs and all.

Weapon Preference (You cannot prefer everything): Swords and Guns, but cannot use a bomb to save himself.

Name: Tina

Age: 17 9/10 (Also basically 18, birthday is two weeks before Sintag's)

Gender: Female

Affiliation: Spiral Order

Strengths: Great swordsman and quick as hell gunner. Moderate HP. Weak Defense. Slightly decreased charge time for both.

Weaknesses: Defense (Can take SOME hits, but Sintag will outlast her easily unless he's been injured), inaccurate with gunning.

Personality: Tsundere, Type A (Mostly tsun (cold), but Sintag brings out dere (warm) side.) Somewhat aggressive, but very influential speaker and easily capable of turning a crowd to her assuming she's currently in "dere". If in tsun, will not speak if she can avoid it and is generally cold and hostile towards others. If in "dere", perhaps overly affectionate and constantly snuggling the person she desires, constantly with a smile on her face. Perhaps a bit extreme.

Weapon Preference (You cannot prefer everything): Swords and Guns. Can bomb, but is shoddy at it and does NOT like to.

Mon, 07/01/2013 - 17:55
#30
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Sintag
Chapter 7: Early Update

THE FOURTH WALL SHAN'T PROTECT YOU!

I rose from my bed and noticed something else that moderately surprised me. An empty light-blue and white capsule. "This is a Remedy Capsule. We were prototyping these before the crash. They're effectively a cure-all formula. One use and then all your medical troubles go away." That's right. We were making these pre-crash. Depressingly, who knows where they all went now. They must've been scattered everywhere post-crash.

I remembered several things that were in the prototype stages. Health Capsules. Vials of all different statuses. The Remedy Capsules. Mechanical Knight Kits that would assemble a Mecha Knight in moments for your protection. I wondered where all this tech wound up after the Skylark blew. It'd mostly be in the hands of the monsters I've been encountering. Freaking fantastic, I thought to myself. But we also developed new tech based on Cradle's mysterious tech. The Vitapods were a dead-on example. Pre-crash, no one had even mentioned them, they must have been filled with some sort of elixir that made you feel better than you were.

Oh well. What a nice incentive to kill EVERYTHING! Mwahahahahahaaaaaa...Hoo. OK. Sanity resumes.

Tina suddenly run at me and hugged me, taking me off my feet and spinning in circles with me lodged into her arms for a slight thrill ride. At the end of it, she let me go, obviously dizzy. She staggered and stumbled right into me. I hugged her until she didn't look tipsy enough to fall into anything dangerous. She clung onto me a few seconds after that, but let go.

"Hey. Sintag. I got news for you. We're both out of Energy for today, but I spoke with someone. He says our Energy Tanks will regenerate over time. Give it some time - He said 22 hours - And we'll be back in action."

"Oh. Well. That's, well, pretty awesome." I spoke up. I was, for once, actually quite interested in the talk of Energy.

"Isn't it, though?" Tina's eyes sparkled in happiness. She obviously was interested in this subject.

I suddenly had the urge to walk to the main square. Upon doing so, I bumped into another Knight. He was dressed in an old Western style hat and poncho that distinctly brought back memories of watching Clint Eastwood movies. He was carrying a revolver-style pistol (I was admittedly EXTREMELY jealous), two new guns he referred to as Alchemers, and a gun that, according to him, was a stolen piece of Gremlin tech. He introduced himself as Alfred. I immediately smothered a Batman joke. I then felt a light bit of awkwardness between Alfred and Tina. Tina seemed to become stone cold. Alfred was just, well, shy. "Er...Is there any way I can, y'know, work this out?" At this, I felt a light hug from behind thanks to Tina. Alfred simply shook his head no. I heard him speak up.

"And you are?" He seemed to actually be plenty friendly, but I forgot to introduce myself.

"Oh, where are my manners? The name's Sintag. The knight who is hugging me is Tina."

"Your relationship with her...?"

"Well, let's just say she's smothering me. More or less."

"Doesn't appear that you're resisting."

"Well, she's kind of my only field partner for now."

"Ah. I see."

I soon began trying to walk, but Tina's slightly taller height and, admittedly, amazing physical strength, let her pluck my feet from the ground. She kept me airborne for a few moments before putting me back down and letting me go into town. Just before I got to the square, Jorin contacted me.

"Right, Sintag. Now. Spiral HQ doesn't EXACTLY authorize Knights to give other Knights missions, but given I'm working with the other Heroes, I am authorized to give you a few missions. These missions will let you acquire your old Cobalt gear, Calibur, and Blaster. The Blast Bomb should come in a very little bit."

"Roger, Jorin."

"Right. I know you're outta Energy for today, though. Consider this list of missions I'm transmitting your way to be a shot at regaining your old gear. Complete them, and a few pieces of standard Cobalt gear - NOT AZURE GUARDIAN - Will be sent to you. Fail them, and, well, they'll remain ready for you to take on. And before you go, I STRONGLY advise you to gather a team - These levels are going to be brutal without help of any kind for you."

"Roger."

"OK. Oh, by the way, the Hall of Heroes is always opened up for you. We're still setting up the recipe shops, but if you want to, feel free to pop in for a visit. ...But right now, it's just myself, Daxen, and Remi. Also, Lieutenant Barrus made it."

I smiled a bit. Barrus and I were actually pretty good as a team - We had helped hold out against several attacks, working basically solo, on an offworld planet near our own. Him and I were a good team. If a bit snarky.

"I'll hop in once the recipe shops are rigged up and ready, Jorin. For now, well, I'll be seeing you later."

"OK. Transmitting missions to you now."

I received an updated list of new missions. Tina dragged me to her garden spot. Alfred stopped quickly and synced comlinks with me, allowing us to talk via a private channel.

Tina sat me down in her garden secret area. I found myself slowly drifting off in the peacefully calm atmosphere. Tina quickly adjusted herself, holding me as I fell asleep, then giving me a bedroll and preparing one for herself. We both drifted away in the garden. The dreams were peaceful. And I slept.

Tue, 07/02/2013 - 03:39
#31
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Can I add something to Carter? He can recognize people's personalities and feelings quickly after observing them (see what annoys/pleases them).

Doing pretty good so far.

Thu, 07/11/2013 - 21:33
#32
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Chapter 8: Dia de Muretos

"Your first task is simple, Sintag." Jorin's crisp, clear voice punctuated the start of a new day. "Every day we're on this world, we lose more and more Knights. Sometimes, we can recover the body. Other times...We can't even recover a scrap metal piece or gear. This time, we were able to recover a sword. Whatever you do, unless it is a severe emergency, DO NOT, and I REPEAT, DO, NOT, use that sword. It's meant to be delivered to the grave. Beaming it over to you now." At this, a sword and sheath landed at my feet. "Did it arrive?"

"Yup, Jorin. So I'm headed to the Knight's graveyard, outside of Haven."

"Yup. complete this mission, and I'll return you your Calibur, Blaster, and a Blast Bomb."

"I read you, Jorin."

I picked up the sword and roused Tina from her sleep. I then got up onto my feet. I then hopped onto the channel Alfred and I used to communicate with each other.

"Alfred, I've been given a mission to return a sword to the soldier's graveyard to honor a fallen Knight. If you're not busy, I'd like some help."

Alfred got back on the line.

"My apologies, sir. I can't aid you at the moment. However, you have my support."

"Close enough."

I got off the channel and set out for the elevator Jorin described. It was, admittedly, a good deal out of the way. Tina followed close behind, echoing my footsteps five behind, occasionally running up alongside me, and on one occasion hugging me when she got ahead of me. If what Kora said was true, Tina was an extreme example of a tsundere. Overly cold when not near me, overly warm when I was nearby (Boy oh boy I knew this firsthand). We both stepped onto the elevator.

"Jorin, this is Sintag. Would it be acceptable to take backup with me?"

"Sure, fine, whatever. You're already doing some things the Order wouldn't describe as "legal" here, but I see no reason against taking in backup."

"Uh...Thanks, I guess."

"Well, I'm already a bit annoyed with Remi's blowing everything up mentality. And Daxen is rambling on and on about how he needs a challenge. Dear God. Sometimes I swear he really wishes to hunt other Knights for the thrill of the sport. Either case, go ahead. Head down."

Tina and I rode the elevator down. I felt her slide her arms around my neck and felt her rub up against me. I looked at her, and all that reflected in her eyes was pure FEAR. I began to carry her, causing her to blush and wrap her arms around my neck for reasons more of stability than romance.

"Thanks, Sin. Really." She snuggled into my arms. "I feel safer."

She then withdrew her gun, and it looked a heck of a lot more different then my Super Stun Gun (I got one the other day, courtesy of learning the ropes from other people.) It was yellow with a large barrel down it. "I'll defend you. Just focus on getting that sword to it's grave."

"Thanks, Tina." I then stepped off and felt a chill go up my spine. Good thing Jorin authorized backup. Tina snuggled into my arms again, obviously trying to make herself comfortable and remind me she was there, that I could trust her to stay. Just like the iron ring...

As we walked throughout, I periodically had to set her down to get a statue moved or other menial tasks, but I always resumed carrying her. She, in return, shot down everything. I noted her gun was VERY fast, but also extraordinarily inaccurate - To the point where she had to empty the round up really close for it to all connect.

"Sorry for the bad aim. Hard to aim with one arm as it is, but this gun makes it worse."

"Eh, it's doing a good job of shooting down stuff, so, really."

"True."

We eventually got to the grave. I placed down the sword on the stone. And then all hell broke loose.

I'll describe this as best as I can here. A statue showing a horde-headed suit of armor with a gargantuan sword suddenly broke free, like it's stone was a piece of plastic. It then proceeded to charge both me and Tina. It brought the sword down to bear on me, and I felt DIZZY. Not slightly dizzy, but ground-moving-under-you dizzy. I walked, feeling like I was going to puke, and Tina suddenly hit it in it's back. "The back's the weak point!" She yelled out, to alert me. The statue-like thing turned it's gaze on her, and I got my bearings and charged it. It was about to bring it's sword down on Tina.

I smashed it's crystal with a well-aimed stab to the back. It suddenly went up, exploding, neighing like a horse, and then it went still, into a statue. Tina gave it a light kick, and it crumbled into dust, revealing small hearts that, according to her, restored energy to our armor, some Crowns, and what appeared to be some kind of light greenish dust. She then walked with me to the elevator, smiling, her face radiating confidence and pep. We then ascended, having no further reason to stay (And wishing not to).

I radioed Jorin. "Jorin, we're back on the surface."

"Good work! Good news, too. I was able to convince HQ to double up the rewards. Beaming them to you now."

Two Blasters, two Caliburs, dark grey iron blades and all, and two Blast Bombs, each a dull grey, appeared before us. I sheathed the Calibur and holstered the Blast, putting away the Blast Bomb. Tina did the same. Apparently we both preferred it. Tina, though, also put the Blaster away. "I'm a fan of my own gun. But hey, never hurts to have a spare, huh?"

She then hugged me. Jorin spoke up.

"I'll assume those reached you. Now, your next task is simple."

END OF CHAPTER 8

(Note: Playerman, yes, Carter WILL come in at some point in the future. Just not now since his equipment (Which WILL BE DE-LEVELED TO MATCH THE PROTAGONISTS) would STILL be overpowered.)

(PS: Well apparently "Iron ring" is an engineering term in America. More you know. But seriously.

The iron ring Tina gives Sintag is kind of a memento from her to him. It's meant to symbolize their friendship.)

Tue, 07/02/2013 - 23:42
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Playerman
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I'm gonna guess he'll appear around the time you go for the Jelly King. :3

Wed, 07/03/2013 - 03:13
#34
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Hearthstone

/clap

All I can say for now, since... well, let's not talk about that.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 22:15
#35
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Sintag
Chapter 9: The Value

After the terrifying experience at the Soldier's Graveyard, I was in the infirmary. Minor bruises dotted me from that sword attack. The medics were skeptical when I relayed my story back, but nonetheless treated me for injuries. My mind ran back over Jorin's next task.

"You now have the power, time to get your defense back. We lost a knight named Wilson in the Scarlet Fortress. We haven't been capable of confirming a death, but he's still in there. Go in there and rescue him. If you manage this task, you'll regain your Cobalt Helm, Cobalt Armor, and Defender. Depth 9. Take any gate."

Tina and I set out for the Arcade, Tina holding a holographic map before her. "Jorin's correct. No matter which gate we take, we'll end up at the Scarlet Fortre-" We were cut off and teleported to Jorin. He was wielding Azure Guardian Armor, a Leviathan Blade, a Valiance, an Aegis. My old gear. I bowed respectfully before him and he explained.

"This is the Lobby. That elevator ahead of you has been pre-programmed to take you to the Scarlet Fortress. Over to my right is Basil. He'll sell you some pretty good recipes, along with some that you really won't find anywhere else. See him for special recipes. His stock changes every time you meet him, too."

"Thanks." I pulled Tina, who fell flat on her rear, to her feet. Jorin then warped away.

"I've also reprogrammed your comlink to teleport you to Haven, the Lobby, and before the console in the center of the room."

"All right then."

We set out on the elevator, myself and Tina.

I stepped out first...And almost immediately felt a sharp YANK backwards onto the elevator. I nearly stepped into a pit of spikes without looking. Tina grabbed me by my collar and had stopped me from stabbing myself in the foot. She then withdrew her gun and, holding it in one hand, stepped off (And dragged me along) when the spikes retracted. She then pulled me up to my feet. "So. Mind if I poke in?" I groaned. The pun was horrible. The fate I had if I stepped onto those spikes, well, I'm not going to be the guy that discusses what exactly happens. Let's just say it'd be incredibly, incredibly painful.

We then saw several kind of enemies. Orange furry beasts, with green eyes, like grass, or acid, mending their friends. Tina told me to prioritize those first. More statue-like things, some zombies (Noticeably absent from our fight in the Graveyard - I was moderately displeased), and MORE SPIKES.

Then came in three new enemies. The first one looked like a dog. Of course, the only two differences between this thing and a dog are simple. These can't move. Dogs don't fire high-energy plasma bullets. The second one looked like a kitten. One difference here - Kittens don't have such unusually deadly tendencies to lunge everywhere and nom your face. And a Gremlin wielding what looked like an amalgam of a wrench and a hammer. Truly, nature was being deadly.

I took aim with the Stun Gun and shot out the Gremlin's legs, incapacitating him. I then slashed the ghost-like cat out and quickly slashed away the dog-like turret gun thing. Gun Puppy would do for now. I DID get shot, once, in the knee, but I wasn't about to complain. Tina didn't make a "But then I took a bullet to the knee" joke either. Kind of have to thank her for that one.

We stepped around a corner, guns ready...

And Wilson just sat there.

"Eh? Rescuing? Me? Well, to make a long story short, I managed to get here through that secret passage." He then pointed it over. And now that I think about it, IT REALLY WOULD BE HELPFUL IF WE WERE INFORMED ABOUT THAT. Thank you.

Tina and I stepped onto the elevator and radioed Wilson's squad he was safe, just too caught up in his studies.

Once we hit surface, Jorin radioed in again.

"Good work, you two, good work! OK, sending you both a Cobalt Helmet, Cobalt Armor, and a Defender in three, two, one..."

A shield landed before us. I replaced my old Iron Buckler, which looked ready to fall apart. Then a helmet. Replacing the com unit on it was easy enough. Then some armor, which I put on.

"OK, now, as for you two. Remember Bosco, the guy with the broken-down Mecha Knight? Well, he put in a request to see you both."

We walked over to the Bazaar and met Bosco.

"Hey there, you two. Well, I'm sure you know about crafting stuff at this point, but I want to take it up a notch. This sword, well, it ought to help you." He then tossed Tina and I an old-looking sword. I spoke up, for the first time in a little while.

"This old thing? I don't know, Bosco. It looks...Beaten."

"Yeah, well, trust me, kid. You're going to adore what you can do with this soon enough. Trust me on that one."

I radioed Jorin again. "OK, so he gave us an old-looking sword, that, according to him, is extremely adaptable. Anything else?"

"Well, yeah. Two things. First off, we have an emergency. Come to the Hall of Heroes. Either case, it's also time for your 2-star clearance, which gives you the right to progress beyond Depth 9."

"OK, will do."

Tina and I walked into the Hall. Things looked, well, bare. Only Jorin, Daxen, and Remi were there. All three looked beaten down. Their gear was damaged, save for Jorin's. Lieutenant Barrus walked forward.

"Well, you two are both outfitted in standard Cobalt gear. Head, to toe. Let's see here. Helmet, check. Armor, check. Shield, check. Weapon, check check. That'll about do it."

Wow. They REALLY simplified the process down.

Jorin tapped me on the shoulder. "OK, now, regarding that emergency. We have a GIGANTIC, emphasize the whole thing twice, wolf-like...Shadow...Running amok. It's playing havoc with our ability to get into Tier 2, and is that aside a major pain in the rear. However, it's also immune to standard weaponry. Even our best recons could only set down the Beast Bells we use to corral it. No one's even come close to killing it. But it needs to be gone from Tier 1. Tell you what. You go down there, you eliminate that beast, and I'll have Barrus clear you for Tier 2 missions. But be warned. Nobody and nothing can damage this thing conventionally. You'll have to think as fast as you slice to emerge alive. Think you can do it?"

"Jorin, I don't just think we can do it. I know that...We're out of energy wow."

"Get used to that. It'll happen way too often."

"Greaaaaaaaaaat."

END OF CHAPTER 9

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 16:09
#36
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Hearthstone

Nice!

Mon, 07/08/2013 - 12:34
#37
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Sintag
Chapter 10: A Tale of Shadows and Bells

I stepped out from the elevator. It was 22 hours since Jorin gave Tina and I our objective. Tina followed closely, readying her gun, with her sword kept near her off hand. A wolf-like creature popped from the ground to attack us, but was halted quickly with a rapidfire burst of bullets from Tina's gun. I then looked over and saw a strange bell. Several wolf-like creatures surrounded us near it. I fired a shot from my Blaster through the crowd, hitting and activating the bell. Every one of those wolf-like creatures looked horrifically stunned and ready to collapse from the bell's frequencies. I won't lie, it kinda hurt. But after that, they went down like flies.

We continued on without incident, knocking off, really, whatever got in the way. We stepped on a party button. And then out emerged this gigantic black mass with blood-red eyes. Spikes adorned it's features. And it was charging. FAST.

Snarbolax
Huffs. Puffs. Bites your face off.

Tina shielded herself and got in front of me, but the knockback was so great she was launched backwards, bowling me over and sending us both flying. Had it not been for that gate, we would've been launched clear out of the current floor. I came to, but she was knocked out COLD. I sighed and began to look at the powered armor. Not a lot of damage dealt, just a few scrapes from the gate. I then looked at Tina's armor. It was flashing 0%. No wonder she was out cold. Our armor is programmed to knock us out should it ever fall to 0%, so as to help troops. My armor was blinking at a steady 75%. I looked back at Tina and then linked the gloves.

This was a new medical practice being done by paramedics. They discovered if you link the gloves together by simply holding the injured person's hand, the armor would share exactly 50% of it's remaining power to the downed person. I took Tina's right hand in mine and hoped, no, prayed, it would work. Soon enough, both armors were blinking orange at a 37.5% charge. We'd have to be cautious from here on in. Tina's eyes shone as she got up, slowly, to her feet. "I had a dream where I took a nap..." She then looked at her charge, and I relayed back what had happened in the last ten seconds. "Ohhhhhh. OK cool let's keep going c'mon."

I got to my feet, made sure my gear was still on hand after having been bowled over by Tina, and pushed onward. Periodically, I had that nervous, almost frightened feeling of being watched. This was obvious after Tina and I split up to cover more ground. On the way over, Alfred contacted me.

"I see you're headed into dangerous territory there. I've only been to the Gloaming Wildwoods once, and let me tell you I got out of there ASAP. What made you and Tina forge in?"

"Mission."

"Always a mission, eh?"

"Basically."

Alfred then got off the channel, leaving me alone with several wolf creatures, or as I heard them being called around, Wolvers, and a few Gun Puppies. Again, the feeling of being watched creeped over me. I wished Tina was at my side right now - I was this close to becoming freaked out. I then realized that's what this Snarbolax wanted to happen. It wanted me psyched out so that way I wouldn't be focused. I steeled myself and looked the beast, straight in the eyes. And did it dig like heck.

I then returned my eyes to the battlefield and, withdrawing my blaster, took down the Gun Puppies from range. The Wolvers charged, trying to bite me, but I stopped them with steel meeting bone. A gate lowered and I saw a big golden key. Blatant Macguffin being blatant aside, I grabbed the key, held it over my head, and placed it down into a locked gate, causing it to drop down. Tina returned moments later carrying a key as well, with some minor wounds from a thorn bush. We stepped onto the elevator and went down to the den of the beast.

We then walked in, and there was a pad with a heart floating above it. We stepped on one and were restored to 100% charge instantly. There was a party button.

Stepping on it made it drop down.

And out came Snarby.

(END OF CHAPTER 10)
(Yes, Alfred WILL get in on the action. Same time as Carter.)

Mon, 07/08/2013 - 17:00
#38
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Sintag
(UPDATING CHARACTERS A BIT)

Sintag can also sense his opponent's tactics and counter them in some areas. Naturally, if he can't fully concentrate, he can't use this ability.

Tina can Shield Bash without a full shield (Power decreases as such)

Tue, 07/09/2013 - 07:34
#39
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Hogmos-Forum

Love it!

Tue, 07/09/2013 - 23:21
#40
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Sintag
Chapter 11: A Tale of Thorns and Combat

(This is how every chapter will be started from here on. A Tale of X and Y.)

The Snarbolax immediately dug itself underground and, as it moved, several large spikes began appearing. I myself was too stunned to move, but Tina tackling me out of the way brought me back to reality. I got to my feet again, and saw a spike flying right for us. I raised my Defender, taking the full impact and staggering back several steps. Tina saw the Snarbolax approach her and put her shield up, the only thing she could do. I took aim with the Blaster and fired. It only pinged off the Snarbolax's shadowy coat, drawing it's eyes on me. Before it could react, Tina saw she and Snarby were both near a bell. She shot at it.

Snarbolax instantly turned yellow. It was very dizzy. I fired again, and the shot connected. Snarbolax didn't cry in pain, but the burnt fur and plasma wound told me everything. We had to daze it before attacking or else we'd be taking shots at nothingness. Tina kept herself on the bell, but she took more than a few shots at Snarby's hide, damaging it quite nicely. It roared and turned back to black, though, and resumed it's assault with the jaws that bit and claws that tore. One spike caught my Mist Tank perfectly, snapping it in two.

Tina held her shield up and kept herself planted on that bell. Snarbolax eventually picked to charge at her. She carefully held on, and rung the bell. We kept this sequence going, taking turns, sometimes having to revive each other. It really didn't make much of a deal here. Snarby, really, wasn't tough at all. When he went down, several fangs fell from it's mouth. Eight of them. Tina and I took four apiece (Subtle nod if you know where to look) and went upwards to a transmission from Jorin.

"You did it. ...Holy crap. Patching Barrus through now. He'll want to speak to you."

Barrus's voice popped through on the line.

"Well, well, well. You two killed the Snarbolax. Needless to say, I am impressed. Take the day. You deserve it. Now we can get to Tier 2, and you can take up missions there as well! ...And don't worry, we're setting up some recipes that'll improve your current gear to match. General warning though. They cost quite a bit in Energy. More than a Mist Tank can hold kind of cost. Speak to the Energy Knight. He'll know what to do."

Tina's right arm slid around me, slowly. When the communications ended, I ducked only marginally too late. Tina's resulting hug smothered me. "You know what was nice on the Skylark? Getting to take a few WEEKS between planets. I suppose this'll do, though." Then just then three beaten-down Knights staggered in. I recognized these people. Echo. Zebulon. Izola. All three of them battered, bruised, hurting, and certainly not worthy of fighting. They wandered, aimlessly, to the hall of heroes, taking with them each a storage box carried on Izola's back.

Echo, I remembered, was THE fastest Knight I had seen. His speed and efficiency meant him as a Striker. His booster was modded by him to make him actually leave afterimages when he ran, confusing the enemy into attacking an afterimage. His swords were equally fast, and the enemy, frankly, couldn't see, much less hit, him. Zebulon was that one Knight that seemed to have something ready for quite literally everything. Even if it was just once (An old steam helmet for an extremely high-pressurized planet), he seemed to have it all prepped weeks, if not months, ahead. He knew damn near everything and oftentimes planned it all out. Which threats to counter, what environment, all the way down to what weapons he should bring. Izola was a Guardian. His menacing stance RADIATED tough, and he once even managed to make an entire village of monsters run away in sheer terror at the sight of him. Or, formerly. He must have taken quite the beatdown, because even his iron-like stance had been reduced to a staggering walk. He could barely hold up himself, much less his plate gear, because Zebulon and Echo were both having a hard time dragging him along. Eventually, two Knights came along and helped out with the process.

I looked at them all with a degree of considerable pity. All three of them were once great legends, reduced to barely managing to even walk. Tina looked at them with some sadness in her own eyes. We both felt bad for these people brought down to virtually nothing. She then did something that caught me off guard. She walked over to Echo and lifted him up, carrying him over her shoulder, doing the same thing to Zebulon. I walked over and acted as a crutch for Izola, and pulled them all to the Hall, where I knew they'd get medical treatment for whatever wounds they suffered. Izola murmured something about escaping from Gremlin captivity. Echo muttered about how he felt death hit him. Zebulon complained about not being nearly prepared enough for this.

After that ordeal, Jorin radioed.

"So it looks like three more outstanding Knights have joined us in the Hall. It's getting pretty lively in here. We've got the recipe shops set up, too. Seeing as how you have the whole day off and need Tier 2 Clearance anyway, I'll warp you and Tina here."

We arrived in a small building. I looked at their wares. All of it was pretty decent. One of Daxen's guns, something he called a Needle Shot, particularly caught Tina's eye and she purchased that without hesitation. I myself looked around, but, honestly, nothing really made me say in my mind, "I NEED THIS, SHUT UP, TAKE MY CROWNS." Oh well. I assumed this'd all be in stock next visit around. Barrus stepped forward.

"You two not only proved yourselves, you also took out that damn Snarbolax. You've more than earned the right to take up missions in Tier 2. But be wary - This is just the lull before the storm. What you went through, save for that big badass wolf was just training. This is where things REALLY get dangerous."

I grinned. "Barrus, I've fought with you, with only the two of us, on planet Karata. Danger's practically my middle name."

"Heh. Not so much here, Sintag. Take the day off, you both. Oh, and before I forget, it looks like your Mist Tank got trashed. No matter, here's a newer model. Less breakable. Comes fully loaded." He then tossed a silvery tank to me, which I clipped in place of my now-broken old Tank. I felt a lot better afterwards.

"Oh, also, I'm enabling the Dash Modules on your armors. This goes for you both. Now you can Dash and Shield Bash whenever you please. This ought to make everything easier, now won't it."

I smiled. Dash Modules were just being tested as a way to streamline Strike Thrusters, to allow our Strikers to actually carry a shield into a fight. They only worked in quick bursts, had some cooldown, and weren't as fast, but they were a good start. Tina and I both heard a voice come over.

-DASH MODULES: ONLINE-

New Moves Gained

Dash
Shield Bash

Barrus cut in. "No more news for now. Now, ah, enjoy the day off. You'll need it."

I saluted, and so did Tina, albeit I could tell Tina was only doing it to be polite. "Sir, yes sir."

We both got onto the elevator and went back to Haven. Tina smothered me in a hug for a few moments, but then suddenly got off me, BUT THEN playfully put her hands over my eyes, blocking me from seeing anything. I took her hands off my eyes and immediately felt my heart stop.

Kora was standing ahead of us both, smiling at me. Had it not been for all the success I had recently, I would've been bowing down, yelling "I am unworthy" to her. But this wasn't the case at all.

"Sintag, I need to speak to you." She then looked over at Tina. "Alone, please."

Tina quietly obeyed the order, but she seemed a little bit angry over having to do so. If she was, though, she didn't show it. My heart went THUD THUD THUD, skipped beats, and otherwise began messing with me. I blushed as Kora led me to the Arcade. She then looked at me and hugged me.

"I heard of what you just did. You should be proud of yourself, Sintag. I don't know any other Knight that would've had the courage to just stare down a shadow and then beat it in."

"Ahhhh, Kora. I had help." She hugged me a little tighter, and again my heart messed with me.

"I know, but when you just looked the Snarbolax in the eyes...Sintag, I felt something change regarding you. You...How do I put it...You became truly brave. You didn't cower. You didn't do anything. You just gave it one of the best stares I'd seen in a long time." she released me from the hug, but not before holding me in it for a few more moments. She herself blushed, although this was due to embarrassing herself. "Ahaha. I'm sorry about that."

This time, I was the one to deliver the hug. "Don't be, Kora. It's perfectly OK for you to hug me, y'know. It's all fine. I mean not that I, er, I, ahhhhhhh..." I wasn't stuttering, but now I was screwing up what I was saying! Come on, Sintag! Seriously, you should know how to conduct yourself! I mentally yelled at myself a little bit before Kora spoke up.

"If you're trying to say you have a crush on me, I understand. I mean, don't get me wrong, I still think of you as a friend..."

Friendzoned. FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC.

"But lately, Sintag, my opinion of you has changed for the better. Whatever happened to you since the crash, keep it up. Seriously."

I recovered my breath at this point in. Maybe Kora really did like me back, but I didn't know. This was frustrating beyond belief. Then all of a sudden from nowhere Tina, having overheard everything, came FLYING at me. I sidestepped only to realize that was a HORRIBLE mistake. Because now Tina was sailing into thin air. Right above one of the gates.

What hath I wrought?

END OF CHAPTER 11

Author's Note: Ohhhhh boy. I've been actually more or less planning this next chapter out for some time now. This is going to be oh-so very fun to watch.

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 03:13
#41
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Coelydragon
@Skye-Lightning #13

Would that happen to be Luguiru's Spinning a Yarn thread? It's a personal favorite of mine.

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 04:01
#42
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Playerman
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I have a bad feeling about this.

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 10:50
#43
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Sintag
-ON HOLD A BIT-

I don't feel up for writing Chapter 12 as of today. It actually, my shoulders hurt when I finished chapter 11 off. Hopefully you can forgive the delay...To my very limited fan base. ...Where all you people at?

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 11:08
#44
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Hogmos-Forum
Right here!

When is Alfred getting some action!

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 12:01
#45
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Sintag
Right back atcha!

When Sin + Tina go for Jelly King! ...Or actually Chapter 12 screwit IDC I want to kinda get Alfred fighting.

Thu, 07/11/2013 - 19:58
#46
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Sintag
Chapter 12: Alfred's Field Days

Alfred slowly paced around Haven's Town Square when Sintag just so happened to pop up over his line.

"Alfred! I don't know where I am in the clockworks, I've broken my left arm, and I can't find Tina here. Do you mind giving me a hand?"

Alfred looked at his Mist tank. Yeah, he had a good deal of Mist on hand. And he needed to upgrade his stuff. This was going to be win-win. He got back in contact with Sintag. "Don't mind at all. Hold on..."

Within a few moments, Alfred was right up near Sintag, who was holding his left arm. It was broken. "How did you...Break it?"

"Fell after Tina. She has to be somewhere on this floor. There's no other holes. Need to save her. Broke shield arm landing."

Alfred looked at Sintag's broken left arm. It wasn't moving and Sintag clearly made a makeshift sling for it. "Yeah. That looks like it hurt."

"It does, like hell. I'll keep an eye out for Tina. Scout ahead and alert me if trouble's incoming." Sintag withdrew his Calibur. "I can defend myself all right, but that's only holding true against one monster. If there's multiples, I'll yell for help. If we find Tina, we haul her to the elevator. Alive or otherwise."

Alfred stepped ahead and looked at his gear. A shadowtech and voltech alchemer. Those were all he had to defend Sintag, who himself was armed with a Calibur and Blaster. The duo stepped forwards and saw three Wolvers. Smelling fresh blood from Sintag's wounds, they charged at him. He stabbed one through the jaw, and Alfred could practically see the fear in the other two's eyes as they reared up to bite. Sintag rolled out of the way, but had to take a few seconds to get to his feet. The wolvers could only barely reach him by the time he slashed at the second one. Alfred, seeing his chance, aimed down the sights of his Shadowtech Alchemer and opened fire on the Wolver. It fell down and, engulfed in a murky blackness, closed it's eyes.

"TINA! Where are you!" Sintag yelled, repeatedly. He looked on the verge of breaking down, and it showed. Tears welled in his eyes, and although he wiped his eyes and kept moving, limping on one leg, staggering at times, sometimes falling over. His injuries showed more and more on his face, which assumed a half-snarl half-grimace. He staggered onto the next button and, when it dropped, fell over forward. It was obvious he was beaten bloody and back, and as he stumbled throughout, he clearly showed signs of looking closer and closer to emotional breakdown. Tina was one of the only field partners he could trust, and losing her would leave him basically devoid of a reliable friend and partner. He stopped for a few moments, clearly in pain. He then, dejectedly, walked to the elevator and hit the "up" button. "Kora. Bad news regarding Tina...Yeah, status unknown. No-Kora, look, it was an accident, all right? ...Fine. ...Yes, yes. I'm sorry. I'm so, so, sorry."

Alfred, on the other hand, hit "down". He wasn't nearly about to quit it. The next floor contained gelatinous, slimy cubes. Alfred opened fire with his Shadowtech Alchemer and watched the murky blackness envelop and annihilate the jelly matter. And as he did, he saw a particularly big (and purple) jelly carrying off someone that looked eerily similar to Tina. He charged through the horde, activating both Dash Modules at the same time and holding his shield out, only to be confronted with a Jelly clearly much bigger than him. Worst of all, it had engulfed Tina and was now carrying her away. Right then, she saw Alfred. She threw her gun, her best weapon, to him, catching him square in the cheek, bruising it, but getting it to him. Attached to the gun was a note.

"To whoever reads this,

I've been trapped by these jellies. Not sure how much longer I'll last. There's a giant purple one that seems to have taken a vested interest in engulfing me. If he-Oh no he's coming! HELP! SOMEONE! PL-"

The word is cut off. Tina must have been interrupted. Alfred turned back at the jelly, but it had simply vanished without a trace. He went to the nearest elevator, note and gun in hand, and went up afterwards. It was time to tell Sintag the news. Tina had just been captured by some giant gelatinous glob, and would need rescuing. Worse yet, this was the biggest Jelly he'd seen.

On the ride up, he reminisced about how he got here. He was protected by someone else on the Skylark when the core exploded and was one of the first few to get to the pods. When he awoke, he was right near Haven. Two people gave him his Voltech and Shadowtech Alchemers, saying that they already had spares. Killing a Gremlin led him to grab his Catalyzer, and he won the revolver in a shooting contest. The rest of his gear was hand-fashioned, but reliable stuff that freed his arms up, letting him shoot and reload "that" much faster. He reached the surface and stepped off. He contacted Sintag.

"Hey. I found whereabouts on Tina."

"And?"

"Captured by slimes. This'll require a rescue by all means."

"You mean those cube things?"

"This one was massive. I'll report it over to Barrus, see what he thinks."

"Right. You do that. I'll be recovering in the infirmary. See you in a few weeks."

"Yup."

Alfred hopped off the channel, walked to the infirmary, and gave Sintag Tina's gun and the note, which he read. "Oh dear. That's no good at all. Yeah. This is bad. This slime could be literally anywhere by now. ...So I guess we lost Tina. ..." Sintag silently motioned for Alfred to leave the room, which he did. As he left, he could hear Sintag break down into weeping sobs. He chose to try and ignore him, but Sintag wouldn't stop crying, understandably. Alfred wondered now if Sintag's mind would still be healthy. Probably not from what he heard. That was terrible news in of itself. Unbeknownst to Alfred, Sintag himself felt he started it and now took all the blame on himself. He quietly made a vow to himself that if Tina died, he'd go with her. That was his promise. Sintag took a look at the iron ring with the small gems on it, his last, final link to Tina, and prayed. He prayed, long and hard, that Tina would be OK. He then dreamed.

In his dream, he beat the jelly down. It glorped out, "Why?"

Sintag's response was simplistic, sadistic, and implied destruction. "Nothing personal. Just a dollop of REVENGE." Sintag was going to find that slime.

And it would feel hell.

END OF CHAPTER 12.

Fri, 08/09/2013 - 23:15
#47
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Sintag
Chapter 13: A Tale of Jellies and Accidental Kisses

(Hooray, I broke my naming code last chapter. And now I'm going to try to remain faithful.)

-TWO WEEKS LATER-

Sintag got out of bed. The biomedics worked fast. His arm was now fully functional and working for him. As he stepped back into his Cobalt Armor, he took a longing look at Tina's gun and swapped it for his Blaster.

-SINTAG'S POV-

I left my Blaster in my bag and departed. Barrus contacted me.

"I heard about what happened to Tina. After all that time, I don't expect her to come out of all this alive. I'm sorry for your loss, but we lose more Knights every day. Shrug it off."

"You say that like it's so damn easy, Barrus. What if YOU were Tina's friend, in my situation. Knowing she's in the hands of the enemy, being unable to save her. What if that happened? Would you remain so "cool" and "confident" like you do now?" I finally snapped. "Sintag, OUT." I got off the channel and gave myself some time to relax and chill out. Jorin radioed me.

"I heard of what happened to Tina. Amigo, if Barrus sends his Wardens after you, after what he said, I won't blame you for renegading on us one bit. And frankly, his attitude flat out angers me. I'm sending you some new recipes. These ought to make your gear worthy of fighting that giant jelly Tina got engulfed by. And for what it's worth, Kora says that no matter what comes through of all this, she'll always be your friend." I then saw the recipes, small bits of holographic document, float down to me. I linked them to my comlink. "Jorin? This is great and all, but I don't know where or what I can do with these."

"You remember alchemizing those weapons for Bosco, right? Same machine. Also, sending you a small package of Crystal Energy. It'll save you."

A small bag with the energy logo appeared in front of me. In it were several chucks of what appeared to be solidified Energy. I walked over to that machine, and quietly looked at the recipes, then downloaded them into my personal mainframe. I then toggled the machine to them and inserted in my gear and materials as required. End of it all, I had enough gear to take out that giant jelly. Then, someone bumped into me. I saw what he was holding. A large, green sword that had a greenish-blackish aura radiating from it. It had several bindings holding it for some reason. He carried no shield and wore the same armor I did down to the last detail. He simply folded his arms. "Well, looks like I have more fans then I knew." I told him of my plight. "So, what you're telling is, a jelly engulfed your friend and field partner and you want to go and horribly butcher it to death? ...Sounds like my idea of fun. The name's Carter. Not John Carter, just Carter."

I decided not to try the sarcasm thing and leave it to Carter. "The name's Sintag." I teleported to the lobby, and Carter followed. Alfred teleported in a few seconds later. "Right, so you're setting out to kill this thing? Consider my new gear and myself along for the ride." I noted Alfred did upgrade his gear. The guns looked a lot more dangerous and held three tanks of energy apiece. He was carrying the purplish one into this fight. I stepped onto the elevator and slowly took out Tina's gun. Staring at it, her laughter suddenly permeated my thoughts. I thought to myself. "Please be safe. Please." We then got on the button and a large variety of gelatinous cubes appeared. Some with thorns. Some were small and purplish. Alfred aimed down sight and annihilated the spiked cubes and helped me finish off what I myself was dealing with. Carter hung back. He had no shield on hand and this was obviously going to be a problem. As some slimes approached him, he took a step forwards and swung his giant sword at the slime, battering it backwards with more than enough force to actually seriously injure it. He took a second step forward and smashed the second slime in it's stupid little jerk abducting face...Thing. They don't have faces! And I just contradicted myself! WOW!

We then saw several stone blocks. We hit them all until we came across the last one. Hitting it caused a gray jelly to appear from below it. "ARE YOU SERIOUS! THERE WAS SERIOUSLY A JELLY UNDER THIS! WHY? WHAT MADE IT STOP, THINK, "Hmm, maybe if I put a giant stone block on my head and sat here, they'd suspect a thing!" AND THEN DO THAT!" I then realized this was no time to yell and stabbed it, only for my sword to skitter off it. Carter brutally smashed it's block away and stabbed through it. It writhed for a couple last moments before going still and dissolving.

We then walked forward, the gate having lowered. More jellies appeared and very long, tedious, boring parts dragged out that I hate mentioning and I don't like and I'm skipping them. Point was, we eventually reached the jelly's room. It was massive, purple, and it held Tina in the middle of it's form.

JELLY KING
Mean, fat, and tastes delightfully delicious

Alfred opened heavy fire on it with his Shadowtech Mk. II while Carter charged it. I held Tina's gun up and shot at the Jelly repeatedly. After several rounds of this punishment, the King FLUNG CARTER BACK, HARD. He flew into a block and crashed into it, obviously now knocked unconscious. Alfred hung back while I drew my Tempered Calibur and bumrushed the Jelly, slashing it. A lucky strike caught it's crown, damaging it. Tina awoke in the matter and created a hold for herself to breathe in it's gelatinous mass. She obviously hated this and she withdrew her Calibur and tried desperately to slash it's guts out. It didn't have much of an effect besides a Calibur being launched at me.

At this point I was too angry to comprehend defense. I put my shield away and caught Tina's Calibur on my foot, then, and I KID YOU NOT, kicked it, directly into the King's crown, breaking it off completely. It turned red and spun around, knocking Tina unconscious from dizziness. I then withdrew her gun. "Nothing personal. Just a dollop of REVENGE." Just like my dream. I clicked it, and held it outward. It slowly built up a charge and then I released the trigger, causing a shotgun like spray to pepper the King's squishy exterior. Within moments, it had lost all it's matter. It dissolved, slowly, into a puddle. In the midst of it was Tina. I walked through the puddle, wading through the matter, and slowly looked at her. She didn't stir. I caught her shoulders and shook her. No response. "Tina? TINA! C'mon, PLEASE WAKE UP, PLEASE!" I was yelling at this point. Tears flowed in my eyes. Had we all done this for naught? Was Tina really dead, as I feared? No. It couldn't be. I shook her again. She still didn't awaken. I broke down and wept. At was, as so is very done for the sake of drama, at this point Tina began to stir. "Are you...Crying, Sintag? Why are you sad?" She grabbed me and snuggled up against me. "If it's because of the mess I made by intruding on you and Kora, then I'm sorry. I deserved this." I stepped in. My voice shook, up and down in pitch and tone. I was overjoyed to see her, exasperated at thinking she had died, and still relatively angry. "Tina. What the hell are you saying. You didn't deserve to be taken hostage by some sort of gelatinous monarch. If you falsely give yourself that idea, one more time, you're personally not a friend of mine any more. Sure, you effed up. We all do. We all have our bad days, Tina. I'm just glad you're still alive." "Yeah, funny story. I slowly ate at that slime's innards to survive. They were actually extremely tasty. Also, I found this." She looked at what appeared to be an old cloak, stained pink due to constant exposure to her captor's insides. "I've taken a liking to it and it seems to work nicely for armor. It's also so very comfy. If you boys don't mind..." She looked for Carter, who had hidden himself behind me. "This is all mine." She then got up, but tripped and fell over in the rather slippery puddle of slime matter. As she fell over, she accidentally planted a kiss on my lips for about two seconds before falling over completely.

I blushed like all hell had broken loose and the four horsemen were raining down plagues. "Sorry, Sintag. Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry..." She apologized up and down, left, and right, and every other way you can name. I hugged her over my shoulder, understanding the accident for what it was - Simply an accident. I then tried to stand, only to fall over and accidentally kiss HER, too! This was actually tough to walk in! How did I do it so perfectly the first time! ARGH!

At the end of all that, Carter helped me to my feet, and Alfred pulled Tina from the goop. I then, leaning slightly on Carter, walked over the massive puddle of ooze. Blegh. It was yucky stuff to be in. But looking at how sticky and slippery it was, thought for a few fleeting moments it would make a nice suit of armor. Carter sat down and his eyes followed a small bit of jelly moving around, floundering in the puddle of goo. "Right, so, ah, accidental romance aside, do NOT expect me to want to do this often. I'm only making the exception because someone else's life was at stake here. That and I needed a distraction from the hustle and bustle of Haven. So, please and thank you, do NOT invite me in often."

I nodded and got up. I could see why Carter's eyes were following that bit of jelly - It looked like a gem! I walked back through the puddle and began plucking them from the oozing mass, but in the end all I was able to salvage were...Actually, sixteen of those gemstones. I gave four to everyone who helped, even Tina, who helped in her own way. We then stepped onto the elevator, Tina now wearing her cloak (Which looked so very cute on her, not going to lie), and Carter wordlessly wiping the jelly matter off everyone's weapons with a cleaning rag. Tina herself was soaked in jelly matter. She felt slimy to the touch. It was kind of disgusting, but she continued to smother me in affection, coating ME in oozing slime matter. I quickly put her in a shower once we got back to the Garrison and then showered myself, removing that slimy feeling.

It felt good to have Tina back. It felt really good. Even despite the accidental kisses. And then, as I changed back into my armor, I felt a light tap on my shoulder. Turning around, I was knocked three paces back. Kora was standing there, looking pretty happy. She then walked up to me and gave me another hug, holding me in it while she spoke up.

"You were...Brave. You, not only followed Tina when she fell through, you were humble enough to call for help, you saved her with some help...Sintag, I feel like I really like you." She ended off this short and sweet chat with a light kiss on my cheek. I blushed and fell over onto my back, obviously lovestruck, and very dizzy. It took Kora the better part of ten minutes to pull me to my feet, mostly because I was still as a statue and refused to move. She then gave me one more hug and left without another word, herself blushing greatly.

Damn, I was popular today.

(END OF CHAPTER 13)

Author's Note: If I've been moving through this a bit too fast, it's mostly by and large because I'm trying to get to the better stuff quickly. Obviously, this fanfic excludes heating items as part of the equation, for time reasons, and cuts off some filler missions, again, for the sake of actually finishing this or at least getting to the interesting stuff without purple prose being added in.

Even though this fanfic probably has a lot of it. Look to me for first-grade hypocritical humor.

Thu, 07/11/2013 - 21:19
#48
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Sintag
OUT OF CONTEXT TALK THREE

Well those were two long chapters all at once. Sorry for dumping that all on you at once.

Anyways, chapter 14 will NOT cut to boss. It'll feature a bit of a call-out given Sintag's outburst against Barrus.

So there's that.

But my shoulder now hurt. So good night.

Fri, 07/12/2013 - 23:31
#49
Playerman's picture
Playerman
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Carter's certainly a bit cocky-er that what I was going for. :P

Sat, 07/13/2013 - 01:51
#50
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Slip through the confusion; Find a solution.

:O

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