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Wed, 11/13/2013 - 17:58
#201
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Viorayne

The Jelly Cube:
Skylark Down's Moe.

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 18:02
#202
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Sandwich-Potato

Plot Twist:

After Shadows of the Void was Graveyarded, Moe was too. However, he rose as a zombie, who was eventually tossed off the ledge into the Clockworks by some sort of running gag Rube Goldberg mechanism.

He had a whirlwind adventure which resulted him in becoming a jelly cube, more combat-worthy, and still having speech impediments. I would pay to have a book about this. XD

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 18:12
#203
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Viorayne
;-;

Moe...Died?

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 18:45
#204
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Sandwich-Potato

Well, at the least, he was buried without having deceased and managed to escape one way or another. (Don't ask about the peanut butter in the wooden alpaca. Long story there).

And now I want to have an adorable pet miniature creature. ;-;

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 08:52
#205
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Trolololololololoe
Another app

Name: Q-Proto-00

Age: Recently Created

Race: Robot version of Evie

Gender: Female coding

Loadout: 2 Robotic pets that are similar to Light Seraphynx and Dark Maskeraith. She has an orb in her robotic head that supplies energy for the special magic she used. Uses Thunderbolt (Magic, costs 1 energy), Psi-blade (Magic, costs 5 energy), Needle-launcher (Magic, costs 15 energy), Spacial Slash (Magic, costs 500 energy), Time Roar (Magic, costs 2000 energy), Black Hole (Magic, costs 12000 energy. Sucks in everything on the floor and after 5 seconds when it is out, it implodes itself dealing tons of damage to all enemies/allies.) Leviathan blade (Sword, costs no energy). Energy restores 100 every minute. Base armor is similar to the collector and she explodes if the orb in her head is fully destroyed.
Robotic Appearance

Personality: Helpful, caring to gremlins, pretends to be kind to knights and strangers but betrays them, never gets tired, can be blunt.

Biography: When the collector was fully destroyed, some of the elite builders that created Metal Sonic started to build a robotic version of Evie and her pets but they where missing a part of Evie's DNA which was needed for her to move and talk which would also activate her pets. Her appearance looked so real even they lost the fact they where building a robot.

1 of the elite builders found a piece of her hair in the medical center and placed it in the robot. The robot started to move and said "Q-Proto-00 is built, where do you want me to go?" The builders where impressed and finished her coding off which made her be caring to gremlins and to betray any knights. They then said "Q-Proto-00, you will be called "Evie" when you get sent to depth 23, follow the people and then kill them. If you find your clone, just kill her." Q-Proto-00 started to go down to depth 23 and stood in front of a dark lair with chains when no-one was paying attention...

((OOC: The orb in her head (which is purple), has NO defense which means a few clean hits and Q-Proto-00 will die but she will act like Evie...))

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 08:49
#206
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Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

I'd much rather you didn't attribute things to my NPCs. Could you write a different biography please?

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 08:53
#207
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Trolololololololoe
Retry

Hope it is fixed...

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 09:00
#208
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Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

Well, that's a rather blunt fix, but it works. App accepted.

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 09:16
#209
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Viorayne

Would have been nice to see a different character concept altogether.
But oh well.

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 16:39
#210
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Thinslayer
@Topoyozariane

You weren't ignored, you just weren't paying attention.

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 16:58
#211
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Viorayne
@Thin

Do you control ALL Enemies?
Or just the Major ones? (Certain Characters, Snarby, Vanny, etc)?

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 17:11
#212
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Thinslayer
@Edolas

I control all the important enemies, which aren't always bosses. I'll try to offer up a list of what enemies I will most likely want to control:

  • King Tinkinzar
  • (Rabid) Snarbolax
  • (Darkfire) Vanaduke
  • (Ice) Royal Jelly
  • The Collector (derp)
  • Warmaster Seerus
  • Herex, the Whispering Venom
  • Schemer Razwog
  • (Red) Roarmulus Twins
  • the entire Swarm
  • Trojans (a.k.a. Dark Knights)
  • most Gremlins
  • notable Wolvers
  • notable Devilites
  • Mecha Knights
  • all slimes
  • all non-zombie undead
Thu, 11/14/2013 - 19:28
#213
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Sandwich-Potato
Wait, so...

all non-zombie undead

Does that include Kats, Scarabs, and Howlitzers?

The Collector

Uh yeah...sorry about that...

Also, do Gremlins hate Knights yet?

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 19:32
#214
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Thinslayer
@Sandwich-Potato

Forgot about Scarabs and Howlitzers. Those are not included. I'm undecided about Kats.

Gremlins have to hate knights by default. Ever since the knights landed, Tinkinzar made it clear to them that the knights are to be slain on sight. Not all of them "hate" knights, but all of them are ordered to kill them.

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 19:35
#215
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Viorayne
Knights...

By Knights, does that mean ALL Knights, or just the Isorans?
So will they attack Owlites/Almirians on sight too?

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 19:43
#216
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Thinslayer
@Edolas

Congratulations! You found a loophole. ;-)

Correct. Gremlins do not hate:

  • all Isorans
  • Almirians
  • Owlites

For example, Eva is an Isoran whom they do not hate. Gallon resembles the knights, so they might mistake him for one, but they otherwise hold nothing against him. And Creeperlucario's character (forgot the name) is not in the gremlins' gunsights.

Thu, 11/14/2013 - 20:49
#217
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Viorayne

Hold nothing against me...Ha, yeah...
*Mumbles* Stupid Herex and His Stupid Experimenting...

Oh yeah, what did Herex do to me when they captured Gallon?

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 13:18
#218
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Sandwich-Potato

Would they hate Strangers? We DID take them in, anyhow, and in the main story arc, the Twins were made to blow up Haven.

EDIT: Yeah, Deadly-Sin, Fennel's not buying that that's Evie.

-No sound of returning elevators.
-Highly unlikely she'd survive.
-No injury - remember, Fennel saw and bound a few.
-Probably more if I think of some, but those three are more than enough to bump Fennel past the Suspicious Sleuth into the Downright Disbeliever.

EDIT EDIT: Deadly:

-Fennel is not 3* rank. He's fought for years. He can use magic.
-A hunter or a scout would NEVER be caught unawares.
-The entire group could have easily countered you. Isn't that a power-play?
-Fennel didn't turn around. The robot was always in his sight. He just mentally noted a few differences with arousing suspicion.

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 13:13
#219
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Darkwatck
How...

Sin, how did a robot -mind your me that robots need an uplink to do what you did- get information on anyone when the Grimlens/Spiral Order does not have such data yet. On that note, you would not have been able to attack anyone on account of how many people where there...You keep make these asumtions that we are not going to do anything while you type, causing a fight scene were its not needed. Instead of fighting or trying to attack you could have simply just walked into the gate and headed down.

Its inconsistant is my point. Doing things the hard way causing us to have to fight and or destroy the character before we even knew anything. Honstly, after reading what happened to the robot, I want to see it destroyed and don't care about the Development of the character. To everyone around you just proved A) its a heartless monster. B) No one cares what will happen to it. C) its cannon fautter.

Sorry to have to say something, but its every time ._.

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 13:14
#220
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Darkwatck
Double Post

Rearguard this post. Double clicked a button ._.

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 13:19
#221
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Sandwich-Potato
Exactly.

I edited my post to warn Deadly, only to find that you posted.

(._.)/ I'll just sit and eat some cookies and watch the stick wars then.

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 13:43
#222
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Trolololololololoe
@Sandwich and Dark

I blanked out when I was posting it and wasn't really thinking...

Sun, 11/17/2013 - 23:48
#223
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Darkwatck
And like that

Its dead, the light has flushed out.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:18
#224
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Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

Why did you have Evie attack Sir Lorien?

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:24
#225
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Trolololololololoe
@Thin

The reason why is the fact she will betray Gallon later but she needs to show herself strong enough for Gallon to see she is an ally...

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:34
#226
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Creeperlucario
*sigh*

It's not really affecting me unless Lord Vanaduke resurrects Gardy as an undead almirian crusader...

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:34
#227
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Viorayne
Gallon aint no Fool.

Nope.
Gallon's senses are keen, and seeing how he saw you shrug off fire like it was nothing...
That and how you look Robotic, with a Metallic plating...

Yeah, figured out you were a Robot in no time at all...

@Thin
I was typing up a post, while you posted the "Do Not Post", Post.
So I'll edit that off now.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:46
#228
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Thinslayer
Replies

@Deadly-Sin-Revenge: The fight between Sir Gallon and Sir Lorien is a highly emotional one. Gallon has just realized that his beloved King still live, albeit with a curse on him, and he is forced to fight one of his own brethren. Sir Lorien, too, is a broken man with only a sliver of honor left to his name; he doesn't want to tarnish it by killing one of his own.

If all goes according to plan, Gallon will kill Sir Lorien, but his victory won't be a joyous one. It will be a bitter one, as it forces Gallon to realize the extent to which his king, his friends, and his homeland have fallen.

Interrupting the fight to show off Evie's strength or allegiance just doesn't feel appropriate right now.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:50
#229
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Trolololololololoe
Removed

it's been deleted, it's just that I haven't done ANYTHING in this story for a few days now...

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 14:58
#230
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Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

Then it's important to remind yourself why Evie is here and what her purpose is. Gallon's purpose is to somehow help Eva escape, get revenge for Lily's betrayal, and find out what happened to Almire, his homeland.

The purpose of the Knights is to acquire the Core's energy in order to get off Cradle and save their homeworld.

Apollos' purpose is to help Eva escape the Core. Since the Knights' purpose overlaps with his own, he therefore guides the Knights on their quest.

What is Evie's purpose? What drives her actions? Why does she do what she does?

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:02
#231
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Trolololololololoe
@Thin

Um, you do realise that isn't Evie but a robotic version of her who is more evil then her soulless non-existent counterpart...

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:13
#232
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Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

Then that's a problem, isn't it? If Evie doesn't have a purpose here, then you'll always find yourself unable to fit into the storyline. You'll always be relegated to the role of supporting character. I don't think you want that.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:16
#233
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Viorayne
Doin the Time Warp Kina.

Hold on to your Hats.
Gallon's having the 1st Flash Back of the RP!

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:28
#234
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Darkwatck
So

Its open to start typing again right?

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:35
#235
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Viorayne
It was always open.

Gallon isnt in your story scenario.
You could have posted anyway.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:44
#236
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Darkwatck
Wanting

To know what as going on. Besides, you can never know what what was going on.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:47
#237
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Sandwich-Potato
Knock yourself out.

I'll wait until you post. Mortis hasn't had much action recently. :P

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:51
#238
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Viorayne
Recap:

Ok, so Gallon was facing off against one of his Ex-Commrades turned Trojan.
Deadly Then posted stabbing the Tojan in the back.
Seeing as this would take away all emotion from the fight, Thin told Deadly to remove the post, and think where they could post with purpose.
This was the issue.
But that doesnt mean that people who werent directly involved with Gallon's fight couldnt post.

So you could have posted.
Is what I am saying.

Hope thats cleared up.

Mon, 11/18/2013 - 15:52
#239
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Darkwatck
Mah

Mortis is dead, the dead just need to be remembered. Even if they are not always talked about. Its what lifts the spirit and brightens the soul locked inside. :)

Tue, 11/19/2013 - 01:30
#240
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Viorayne
@Thin

Edited my "InstaHit Post". Sorry bout that.
Got caught up making Gallon look cool :3

Tue, 11/19/2013 - 19:18
#241
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Sandwich-Potato
On Character Development.

It seems that we've hit the stage of character development and advancement, beginning with Gallon. Eventually, we others will follow, probably with thoughts about the past and such. I'd like to know the...how do I phrase it...boundary we can take with past events. For example, can we involve those mostly minor past peeps (Gallon had visions of specific past comrades and companions)?

Additionally, how's the current state of relations between Strangers and Gremlins? The former are starting to take in the knights, and I doubt the latter are pleased about that.

Tue, 11/19/2013 - 19:25
#242
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Thinslayer
@Sandwich-Potato

Flashbacks cannot include NPCs or other players without prior permission.

Relations between Strangers and Gremlins are very tense, as you've correctly surmised.

Sat, 11/23/2013 - 14:56
#243
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Hexlash
Typos be trollin'

May we all just take moment to remember the fallen...

R.I.I. , Skylark Down; you served us moderately well.

Mon, 11/25/2013 - 20:22
#244
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Callis-The-Wicked
Lol Hex...

That comment made my day XD

Mon, 11/25/2013 - 20:57
#245
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Thinslayer
:D

OOC: Hi Seatus! You're back! *claps*

Mon, 11/25/2013 - 21:37
#246
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Callis-The-Wicked
:o

Hai! I thought everyone knew already and wasn't acknowledging it. I've written six chapters ina fanfic already XD
But Hex's comment cheered me right up. Not because this is dying, of course, just because it was so funny :D

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