Many look back on their first year upon cradle. Many look back happily, to see how much progress that they've made, While others look back, and see the gremlins, Oh the gremlins. How they hated that dreaded town of theirs, Being used as entertainment, All they could remember, was being thrown in groups to satisfy, the gremlins, Like a sort of elimination process. . . those who lived regretted it, the fights forever stuck in their heads, the echoes of each person's shadow "Please Don't Forget Me" always stuck, in their heads.
Hello, one and all, and welcome to the Proto Wars. This series takes place at the beginning, The knights are just forming the pact between them, and the strangers. What will happen here is more or less what you imagine. A Hunger Games sort of thing, in Spiral Knights.
I'm not gonna say it's bad, but I don't know what I think........ herm..... of course, I don't like Hunger Games, so...... to some, it might be a good storyline.
I will say it does have potential, but not as something I'd read. Good luck!
P.S. You are a great writer, I'll give you that. The wording is perfect, but it loses the feel of Spiral Knights