Bump. I need more comments people! This fanfic can't continue until I get more choices.
Fire (First chapter out now, with a special appearance from a GM. :3)
It would make some, err.... drama. Or just kill Blue. :D
srry! forgot to post chapter last night
I'm gonna sue you for using my openings a few chapters back!- Blindshot
Told you. - Dusk.
Chapter 6
Samantha's view
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Dusk got up and pushed the Alpha wolver off him. It was dead. He ran for the elevator where we were at. Before he got to us, the third wolver pounced on him.
"I think it's down!" I said. "No wait!' Winnip yelled. I pushed the down button and the elevator descended.
Dusk disappeared and we saw dirt and rock as we went deeper into the place. The elevator stopped and we got out. What I saw didn't look like a Haven. It was dusty, and it was just a giant cave. But, it did look like someone lived here. There was a desk with papers, and a bed. There was water dripping from somewhere. I stepped off the elevator. I looked at Winnip and saw he looked scared.
"This place is creepy." he said. "Let's see if there's a way back up." We pushed the up button on the elevator.
"So Haven was up?" I said.
He scowled. "Duh." The elevator wasn't working and he kept stabbing the button. "We'll have to find another way out."
We walked through the labyrinth of tunnels carrying, and sometimes dragging Blue. Winnip hurried me along looking terrified at the thought of bat-like creatures.
We reached a dead end. "Blast..." I muttered. Winnip walked over to a big bush. Behind it, there was an elevator. "Great!!! Good eye!" I said. We walked onto the elevator. Suddenly, a high-pitched scream echoed through the tunnel. I heard footsteps coming towards the elevator and lots of growling. I saw Dusk appear. I smiled until I saw a pack of wolvers behind him. We pushed the 'up' on the elevator. "Hurry Dusk!" I yelled. he grabbed onto the edge of the elevator just as it lifted on the ground.
It was going at a fast speed and it was a miracle Dusk found the strength to hang on. He grabbed the rail, and then his other hand searched for something else to hang onto. He grabbed Blue's limp arm. She lay on the floor of the elevator. He let go of the railing, only holding onto Blue.
Huge mistake.
He fell a few feet, and stopped as Blue smashed into the railing. She moaned in pain, and tried to crawl away. When she did that, her body slid in between the railing and started to fall with Dusk. Winnip and I grabbed her and tried to pull her up. We managed to lift them a few inches when I saw that we were almost at the surface. here was a hole that light streamed through, and it was only large enough for the elevator. "If they were still down there when we reached it they will be crushed!" I thought.
It was no use. We couldn't lift them up. "So much for my new friends." I thought.
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Dusk
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I saw the light and my fate if I didn't get up there. I summoned all my strength and climbed up. I reached the floor of the elevator. I panted for a little while, recovering. I saw Winnip and Samantha pull Blue up in time. The light blinded me for a moment, and I had to cover my eyes. When I opened them I saw a knight carry Blue off to some buildings. Another knight came up to us and said,
"Welcome to Haven."
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No choices this time.
Name: Spyash
Species:Gremlin
Gender:male
Equips:Wild Hunting blade,Acheron,and a Sentenza
Personality:Mysterious, kind of evil although does enjoy himself quite a bit and has a love of snipes.
Bio: A gremlin who became a Assassin after his family was slaughtered by the spiral order when they went out to the devilish drudgery one day to buy some new clothes only reason he survived because he was a mischievous 4 year only gremlin who thought it would be hilarious to hide in a mail box where the knights didn't find him. as he saw them be beaten up by the spiral order he started to cry as they left a devilite found him and trained him so that he could move quick and as he grew up at the age of seven he was hiding waiting for a member of the spiral order to come by and he found one as he came up to attack she noticed him and thought he was kinda cute!.they talked and had lots of fun and she introduced him to snipes.as they grew up at the age of eleven she went adventuring in the clockworks with him where a gun puppy shot her down.She landed with a slam as she hit the ground he rushed up to her to try and do every thing he could to save her when a lumber whacked him into a tree away from her and when a wolver popped up about to grab her when he shouted "NO!" run towards the wolver a hit it in the head with his thwack hammer.He got her up and carried her to safety through all the pain it caused him.After another year she asked her dad to adopt him which he did as a birthday present for her. They trained together and after weeks of hard work she gave him a wild hunting blade as a gift he treasures the blade as if it was his life.They together slowly got much strong and he made him self an Acheron to help her defeat Jelly King.After they Got enough Jelly gems he bought an antigua and she bought a sealed sword.One day he had left it was the day before her birthday and she was in so much distress. The next day there was a knock at the door and he had returned and with him he carried a Darkfang shield say "only the most honourable gremlins get to wield this shield in combat and i think your more honourable than any of them" she hugged him so tight it started to get hard to breathe and she hadn't let go yet so he had to mumble until she figured out what he had been saying.She went out to the store that day to get herself some new clothes that her dad had said he'd buy her for her birthday and she'd seen a white fur cloak that was very beautiful so she asked her dad "can i get that?" as she pointed to it her dad said "ah a skolver coat one of the most valuable kinds of fur,sure i'll get that for you" and so they buy it after a few months she made herself a divine avenger and Spyash made his Sentenza. 2 days after she got a ceremony for gaining clearance into tier 3. One day as they're adventuring Spyash tripped and hit the ground really hard she laughed at him and then helped him up (secretly he really likes her laugh) but as he got up he notice a path behind a wall he followed it and when down into a room with her it was pitch black they knew something was wrong she pulled out her divine avenger which lit up the room. "Oh wow....." she said "i never thought i'd be the one to discover him""discover who?" said Spyash "King Tinkinzar" she said he responded "and that is.........." "Spyash he's king of the gremlins" "well that explains the gremlins around him" "their the Crimson Order" she said "haha a smart one she is" said king Tinkinzar "Spyash" she wispered "ya" he wispered back "we can take him"she said "are you sure we can take him and the Crimson Order?" spyash responded "yes we can this is what we've been training for" she said "ok" he said "if you insist". She said to King Tinkinzar "your on and when we win we'll go down in histroy you guys will be done Knights from the spiral order will come at you day and night" he responded "Ha! Vanaduke is going to love you" "ok get them and take the girl get rid of the gremlin with her. A hand came up and grabed her "GET OFF ME!" she shouted she swung her Divine avenger at a gremlin just to have taken away "NO!" spyash shouted as they were pulled away from each other "i'll find you and get you back i promise you" and spyash's vision goes black. He woke up in bed at home nothing taken, he was glad about that he still had the wild hunting blade she gave him and the matching Darkfang shield that he carved thier initials into.He went around town posting up signs saying he'd pay to buy the best skolver at tracking he could. Always looking in the clockworks for one to find for free, And on that day he swore to himself he would do anything to get her back even if it killed him.
Gonna take me a few days to read bio.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Waoh (Note my use of nonexistant word), thats a lot of bio. Also, our nacho war will continue in the story of spirals! :D
It shall be done.
(Leaves exploding nacho platter on Isis front doorstep))
Good. *Takes Nachos* "Hey Winnip, Samantha! Have some free nachos!"
Isis, I am pulling out a power in this war that you cannot even begin to COMPREHEND!!!!
I speak of
"THE POWER OF BACON!!!!!!!"
*bombards Isis with bacon*
i was doing a character suggestion when i realized i had already
"NOOOOO! THE BACON! AHHHHHHHHHHH!" *Near death* "Wait! BACON IS YUMMY! YAY!"
Oops, i forgot. Accepting 2 chararcters.
One must be knight, and the other monster. CANNOT BE A ROBOT MONSTEr.
Name:Falcon
Race:Knight
Arsenal:Final Flourish,Acheron, Divine Avenger, Polaris, argent peacemaker, Volcanic Plate Shield, Vog Cap and Skolver coat
Appearance:Vog coat with a Chapeau of the gold rose
Personality:Very serious and doesn't talk much,
Bio: Falcon was an assassin for awhile but later on couldn't take it anymore so he quit, a few days after he quit some one "accidentally" dropped some chemicals on him from a two story window
Other:when he gets angry he smashs things...when he runs out of things to smash he starts smashing any thing that moves
Name:Daikar
Race:Gremlin
Arsenal:Thwack Hammer
Appearance:Like any other Thwacker, but wears a hood and mask(much like Gracken)
Personality:Gets bored very easily and likes to Thwack things
Bio:Pretty much grew up like a normal Gremlin.
Other:May or may not be friendly...
Might wanna capitialize your 'r'.
*Gives the explosive Nacho Platter to Dusk* "Here have some nachos!" *Runs for hills in a plains* "NOOOOOOO! There aren't any hills! The evilness!"
Stupid evil plain. :P
The explosion covers te whole world in cheese. Now everyone is stuck knee deep in cheese (except me of course :p)
*Runs around with giant straw sucking up chesse.*
iLL acceot Daikar but someone else might wanna try for knight.
Also, if anyone can do betterfor the monster spot, plz show me
NOONE SHALL HAVE MY MONSTER SPOT! NOONE! *Threatens everyone with nacho plattters* YEAH! THAT'S RIGHT!
YES I WILL! DIE!!! *Blows up nacho platters with pazooka, continues to launch various exploding nachos at Frostrex, and anyone who comes nere*
Name: Necro
Race: Slag Walker
Equipts: Almirian Lance (my made-up name for those lances Slag GUARDS have. even though he's a walker, i want him to have one.), and a Crest of Almire.
Appearance: Normal Slag Walker, with a lance in his right hand, and his shield in his left, or strapped to his back.
Personality: Quick-minded unlike other zombies. Very good strategus. Likes putting things on fire when bored.
Bio: Necro used to be an Almirian Crusader, but when Vanaduke destroyed the empire, he was killed, and turned into a Slag Walker. But for some reason, he still had his mind, and now goes around the Clockworks shishkibobing anyone he thinks might be a threat to Almire (that includes other monsters)
Other: Has a severe weakness - whenever anyone mentions what happened the day Vanaduke destroyed the kingdom, his mind shuts down for a few minutes, for it was a very traumatic experience for him.
Name: Renaissance 'Renai' Genesis
Race: Knight
Equips: Almirian set, Crest of Almire, CIV with DMG v fiend med, Valiance with Dmg bonus v Gremlin and Devilite med, Irontech with ASI very high and DMG bonus v Wolver and construct med
Apperance: Fiery orange eyes, harsh tone.
Personality: Angry, protective,chivalrous as torin, rational, churlish, calm as Renai
Bio: a knight with a historical appatude. He once crashed landed in a D28 Vanaduke boss lv. He was braindead and severly paralysed and injured and would soon die but the soul of Torin possesed him. Torin/Renai went to Haven with amesia and a arsneal of powerful weapons. He can't control the two personas and seeks guidance with different people on cradle.
Other: He has a weakness, doesn't control his weapons properly, like a noob and somtimes extremly skilled. Overall suckish.
Name Matt. Nicknamed Enigma.
Race: Knight.
Equips: Blaster and Brandish.
Gender: Male.
Personality: Thoughtful, Enigmatic, Stubbon, Brave, Has a one track mind, smart.
Appearence: Colbalt Helm, Magic cloak, Skelly shield. Has white eyes(rare with knights nowerdays).
Bio: A young knight who always had questions and wanted to solve mysteries. He once found his neighbours' missing pie as his first case. When he landed on Cradle, he wanted to find out why did the Skylark crash? What happened to the core? What's in the core itself? What is the origin of the swarm? He now goes in the clockworks to find scenario rooms to piece together the whole plot.
Other: If he appears, Would he be a random PUG? He also writes down notes to the clues he finds.
When will the next chapter come?
That's accepted!
New chapter coming tonight or yesterday! XD
t.XD. I got 12! I promise I did that with 1 post. :)
Would you quit playing and post the next chapter??
Chapter under construction:
EDIT: New chapter!
Heres a new choice thingy...... Im gonna have LOCKED choices, where those choices can't be used. Also Im gonna describe a little of what will happen if u do those choices.
Title: Welcome to haven!
Type: Story
Description: Blue and friends get to Haven.
Title: Don't be afraid of the D.A.R.K.
Type: Story [LOCKED!]
Description: [LOCKED!]
Title: All the time in the world!
Type: Story [LOCKED!]
Description: [LOCKED!]
Chapter 7:
2 weeks later
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"Hurry up!" the knight said. "I'm going as fast as I can!" Dusk whispered. After spending a few more seconds trying to break the lock, the other knight shoved him aside, and was able to pick the lock.
The door creaked open, and made a thud as it hit the wall. The knight walked into the fortress with Dusk gawking at the lock now resting on the floor. He ran after the knight who was now against the wall looking at the giant balcony above the main building.
It was very dark out, and the only thing Dusk heard was the wind and his own footsteps. Dusk reached the wall, and took out a gun that was in a pack. This gun was a few feet long. It's bullet's were fast and accurate, but more effective at a non-moving target. He looked into the scope and found his target. On the balcony was a formation of dark coloured gremlins. In the middle of the bunch was a gremlin that looked fierce. Obviously the leader. He went into the main building while the guards took places along the balcony. Dusk had a gremlin in sight. He aimed at it's nech and.....
Zing!
It hit it's target in the neck. The gremlin fell of the balcony and hit the ground with a sickening crunch. the ground force of Gremlins started yelling and took the gremlin's body inside to look at it.
The balcony's gremlins were distracted. "Heres our chance" Dusk thought. They ran to a building close to the main tower. They opened the door, and made a loud creak. Dusk grimaced. He waited for the gremlins to come and for this all to be over.
No one came.
He opened the door all the way. Inside there were a few gremlins looking at computer monitors. The two tiptoed past with no one looking up. They went up the spiral staircase and opened a door that was about three fourths up the tower they were in. They walked onto the balcony's edge and jumped off.
They landed on another balcony attached to the main tower.
"Thanks for being my partner for this mission Matt" Dusk said. The knight looked conflicted. "It's 'Enigma'. And it was my pleasure." They shook hands and ran up another staircase.
When they reached the top of the staircase, the gremlin officer spotted them. "Sound the alarm!" he yelled. An alarm blared. It had a strange resemblance to a snipe coughing up it's dinner. Footsteps pounded up the stairs. We followed the gremlin officer out onto the balcony where the other gremlins were.
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Minutes later we crumpled to the floor with gremlins circling us. One of them slashed it's sword at us. At the last second Dusk got up and the connecting swords made a clang. The impact made the gremlin stumble back and fall off. The officer slashed his back making a huge gash. He snarled and made the final blow.
"Well done!" A voice said. "You died...... But well done! Very good for only two knights."
Dusk opened his eyes and saw another knight standing behind him. The knight helped Dusk and Enigma up.
Over the last two weeks Dusk and the others were welcomed into Haven and told about what all the things they knew about the planet. Almost immediantly Dusk wanted to sharpen his skills at a high tech training hall. It was there that he met Enigma. He just failed on 'Gremlin fortress'.
The gremlins were fake, robots. But as much fun as they were having, Dusk wondered about Blue. She was in a hospital and was in terrible condition. Would she make it?
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No choices today folks. (Did i just say that?)
Current: Welcome to Haven!
Chapter 8
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Dusk and Enigma left the training hall. Outside, the glare from the sun blinded them for a few seconds. It was warm outside, and the town square bustling with activity. A few knights were selling some equipment from the auction house. Some snipes were crawling on a knight in wolver armor. After talking to a stranger Blue walked to him. Kind of. She was in some kind of... cast? Anyway she 'limped' over.
Dusk learned that Blue's injury was easy enough to fix. The docters had something to help her, but some of her armor was still damaged.
The all heard a familiar voice. "Dusk! Blue!"
A knight ran up to them. At first, Dusk didn't recognize him, but then he saw the emblem.
"Angelo!"
They ran to greet him. "where have you been?" Dusk said. "I landed in a pod with several other knights, then eventually we found our way here."
We told him what has happened to us. "Wow..." Angelo said. Another knight came up to us smiling. For a few moments, no one reacted. Then, I finally noticed. "You!" I yelled. it was the fourth member. I almost cried. Angelo and Pelma were thought to be dead, but they both were alive!
Winnip and Samantha came waving. We introduced everyone. After a few minutes of being happy meeting each other. "Guys......" Blue said. We turned to her. "What Blue?" Dusk said.
"I just realized we would make a great guild." tHEY ALL THOUGHT that that was a great idea. "But first......." Angelo said. He gave more of the trinkets we had. Enigma and Winnip both wore it on their armor, and samamtha put it on her sword. We all smiled.
Who would be our leader?
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Srry it was a short chapter, it was just to ask for his choice: Who will be the leader?
1.Dusk
2.Blue
3.Enigma
4.Samantha
5.Winnip
6. Pelma
What about me?! * sniffle