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Tue, 12/25/2012 - 21:18
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This is a Short fan-Fiction about the life of a standard Spiral Knight. He will do all the important missions such as 'Built To Destroy', 'Shadow of the beast' etc. This is explain how Alpha squad was found and how the swarm corrupted the tiers ??? also known as the shadow liars. If there are enough comments and people like this, i would post a sequel to this Fan-Fiction! Enjoy!

Character Applications must have the following:

Name:
Race:
Gender:
Personality:
Bio:

List of Chapters:
Chapter One: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-606614
Chapter Two: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-606678
Chapter Three: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-607131
Chapter Four: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-608715
Chapter Five: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-609292
Chapter Six: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-611990
Chapter Seven: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71363#comment-612604

Tue, 12/25/2012 - 21:47
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Topoyozada
Chapter one!

Chapter One:
“Argh! No! Damn it!” Caleb bolted awake, sweating from his bad dream. He looked at his clock and cried, “Damn it!” I’m late!” Today was the day he was tested with a squad of Knights to prove their worth to the Spiral Order. If they succeeded, they would be promoted to Knight Elite and have their badges. He hastily put on his favored armour, the Cobalt Helm and Armour, grabbed his plate shield and ran to the arcade. He found his squad waiting for him. They tapped their foot impatiently as he took his weapons from the weapons rack, a troika and a blaster, and together they walked into the elevator.
“We’ll go to Depth 1 and start and in Depth 4, there will be an outpost, we’ll get our other orders from there” Barked Restless and he pressed the down button. With a burst of Mist energy, they went down and started their expedition. They arrived in depth one and cautiously walked out the exit, shields raised. Crack! Caleb turned and saw a Wolver mauling a fellow teammate. He raised his blaster and shot it. With a whimper, it died.
“Medic!” Caleb cried. Yttriu the medic pushed through Caleb and knelt beside the fallen knight. Then she stood up, bowed her head, and said, “Poor fellow’s gone. Time to move out.” The other squad members bowed their heads in respect for their fallen comrade and left, one by one. They continued their walk to the elevator. Along the way, they didn’t meet any resistance except for a mere Chromalisk. When they arrived at their destination, Restless paused, turned and said,
“Mission is aborted, Knights. We lost a soldier in the process, so we’re going up to Haven and report this.” He turned back to the console and pressed up. When his back was turned, an Alpha Wolver leaped at him.
“Look out!” Cried Molt, Guardian of the squad, and he put himself between himself and the Wolver. The wolver pounced on him and started mauling him. Technician Kris was the first one to react. He swung his Autogun and fired, point blank. The shots met the Wolver mid-air and it tumbled in the air, then hitting the ground, lifeless. Caleb and Kris continued to scan the area, searching for any other threats. Yttriu was busy trying to stop Molt’s bleeding. Finally, she stood up and announced, “Molt here got some broken ribs and a few fractures. He’ll live.” With that, she turned and walked into the elevator. The squad piled into the elevator, leaving some space for Molt. Then, squad leader Restless pressed the ‘UP’ button. With a burst of Mist energy, they went up to Haven.

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 00:29
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Infernus-Dragneel
Hurray! Let me join!

Name: Alexander

Race: Spiralian

Gender: Male

Personality: A young quiet knight who rarely talks to anyone and ignores any conversation to him, he is very bad at communicating with other knights and couldn't read or write. Despite that, he values the life of his comrades more than anything else. He is taller than any average knights and much more tougher than any.

Bio: A very skilled knight, he used to be a cruel and cold hearted knight, leaving his allies to die in the battle field. But not only that, he is very confident and would strike up a conversation with anyone in sight.
But that all changed when he went on a mission to slay a beast in the gloaming wildwoods. He was attacked and asked for help from his ally, but they tricked him and left him to be killed by the beast.
He was lucky enough to escape from the beast's den, he regretted for all the things he had done in his life. From that day he stopped talking and changed. Into a different knight, hoping that his sins could be forgiven if he could help younger knights in missions.

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 01:37
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Callis-The-Wicked
Trying to spread the word of my character

Seatus

Race: Snarbolax

Gender: Male

Personality: Serious but not harsh

Bio: Was immaculately concieved by Snarbolax's darkness and the Core (read Chapter 1 of Fanfic of a Snarbolax for better description)

Origins: Son of the Snarbolax (3rd son, brother of Rabid Snarbolaxes)

Appears: In front of Caleb, right at the entrance to his father's lair,(Father Snarbolax)(not at his brothers'[ Rabid Snarbolaxes], since he hates both of his brothers, AND ALSO appears to help him before Caleb attacks Vanaduke) telling that the Snarbolax family was corrupted by the Swarm by eating the swords of evil Knights, and that The Snarbolax (his father being the very first Snarbolax) was once as powerful as the Core itself (from which The Snarbolax himself was born)

Place amongst the world: Prince of Beasts

(Seatus's coat is corrupted, making him indestructible, but he himself is not corrupted)

(thank you so much if you help, I will also include this part in my Fanfic of a Snarbolax)

(also, Seatus looks like his Father, not like his brothers)

Thu, 12/27/2012 - 06:45
#4
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Topoyozada
Thanks for all the Applications!

I'll get started on Chapter two right now!
@ Seatus, is it okay your leg breaks? So we can prove you're friendly by putting on a robot leg XD
@ Infernus, [Removed Because of Spoiler]

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 01:56
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Topoyozada
Chapter two!

Chapter Two:

Caleb crept into his barracks. It was late into the night, as he stayed beside Molt’s bed, long after everyone have slept. He yawned and looked at his watch, which was built into his gauntlet. It showed 3:00 AM. He shook his head and climbed onto his bunk. He crept into bed and before his head have touched the pillow, he fell asleep. The next day, he woke up with Kris poking him. “Wake up, we gotta get switched on.” He sighed and continued, “Can’t believe Feron still needs us to continue our expedition.” He shook his head in disgust. “Anyway, Feron will demote you if you’re too slow.” With that, he walked out of the barracks. Caleb groaned, and then rolled on to his other side. Bad mistake, he rolled off his bed and hit the ground.
“Damn it.” He swore under his breath and quickly got dressed. As he walked out of the barracks, he saw lieutenant Feron walking towards him. ‘Great, I get an injury AND I get fired from the Spiral Order!’ he thought. He kicked a nearby tree angrily.
“Soldier Caleb, there you are.” Feron exclaimed. “I called your squad mates to wake you early.” He frowned. “Anyway, you are tasked to recon an area named ‘Gloaming Wildwoods’. There have been numerous reports of a dark beast. They Intel Knights stationed there named it ‘Snarbolax’. Means king of the shadows. Your job there is to find the beast and kill it.” Feron said. Caleb nodded absently. The so called ‘Snarbolax’ sounds tough, but so did a Lumber when he first arrived at Haven. He nodded again and ran off to the Canteen. When he arrived, he saw the squad waiting for him as usual.
“So, what did the boss in blue say?” Asked Kris, jerking a thumb at Feron’s seat.
“Told me about the Snarbolax.” Replied Caleb
“What’s the Snarbolax?” Asked Yttriu, frowning. “Feron didn’t say anything about whatever the Snarbolax is. He just said something like ‘I’m really sorry about your friend’ and more of ‘Your squad guardian is going to make a fast recovery’. What a noob.”
“Hey! Feron’s not a noob!” Exclaimed a knight with pigtails. “He’s my hero!” Immediately she went starry eyed. Restless rolled his eyes and said,
“That man doesn’t do any field work, just sitting in his office, eating Biscotti’s biscuits! An-yway, I’m much more handsome.” He winked at the girl. She wrinkled her nose in disgust and quickly walked away. “Oh well, so much for having a new girlfriend.” He joked. Just then, the speaker announced,
“Squad leader Tobias please gets to lieutenant’s office immedeailty. Thank you for your co-operation!”
“Oh well, seems like someone doesn’t like me flirting them.” Continuing to joke, “You guys head up and get ready for the mission, I’ll be right back!” The squad nodded and so Restless merrily skipped to Feron’s office. He knocked and was welcomed by a voice saying,
“Come in.” He walked in and found Feron, with his hand holding something that was con-cealed behind his back.
“What’s up, Feron?” Still giddy from his own jokes.
“Goodbye.” Restless heard Feron say, and he raised his Valiance and fired. Restless’ lifeless body dropped to the ground, as Feron said, “One down, four to go.” He pocketed his Valiance and walked out of office, never casting a glance at Restless’ inert body.

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 02:42
#6
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Callis-The-Wicked
Hmm

Maybe not a robot leg, but feel free to break one of my legs and make a splint =]

Also, maybe I COULD be a helper. Especially with this Feron conspiracy. I would be honored to help more in your story. I definitely will add these to my Fanfic, so you benefit and so does my lore

OH and give me a robot tracker on my neck!!!

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 08:03
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Infernus-Dragneel
mreh, I don't mind if he dies, he deserved it :P

@ Infernus, i'll make your guy be one of the loyal soldier that looks mean but are friendly, you rescue children from a burning building and hold your ground against Herex and died. Okay?

Whoah! spoiler alert already?! that's pretty quick.
All i can say is...

"Embrace the probability of your imminent death" speaks in Haymitch voice XD

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 06:17
#8
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Topoyozada
LOL

@ Infernus Haymitch........ Seriously? Hunger Games?

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 08:02
#9
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Infernus-Dragneel
True dat

That was the coolest thing he ever said in the movie/novel.

"Embrace the probability of your imminent death...."

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 17:11
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Callis-The-Wicked
Hope tuis doesn't go to the

Hope this doesn't go to the graveyard, I WILL PROTECT IT WITH WORDS

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 19:46
#11
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Topoyozada
Chapter Three is OUT!

Chapter Three:

Caleb and the squad were bored out of their wits. Yttriu memorized all the body parts of a Wolver and was mumbling the differences between a Wolver and an Alpha Wolver. Kris was tinkering with a compact Sentry turret and a Mecha Knight. Molt was throwing his troika in the air and catching it again. Caleb was talking furiously into a comn unit, saying, “I don’t damn care, alright? Just get Restless on the phone!” There was a pause, then Caleb screamed into the comn, saying “Oh know you want my squad leader to talk? Restless is our squad leader, you idiot!” with that, he threw the com down so hard that is broke cleanly in half. He groaned and put it beside Kris, who was adding the Sentry turret’s gun into the Mecha’s shoulder. He glanced at the comn and said,
“I’ll get it done.” He snatched up the comn and started examining it when suddenly Feron appeared with a unfamiliar knight, who was holding a Cutter and a Flourish.
“Team, meet your new squad leader, Alexander. He’ll be the one to lead you on to this mission.” Feron barely finished the sentence when Yttriu interrupted, asking,
“Where’s Restless?”
“I know you wouldn’t believe this, but he tried to kill me. He arrived and mumbled some-thing like ‘goodbye, Feron, it’s my turn to be lieutenant.’ Then he lunged at me. I barely got out of there alive. I finally killed with my Valiance” Feron lied smoothly, glancing at each of the squad member’s reaction, seeing if they recognized that Feron was lying. None of them did.
“Never! Never would he have killed you, Feron!” Cried Kris.
“Never? Remember the saying, knights. ‘Never say never.’ He’s a traitor to the Spiral Order. So, back to the mission. Don’t waste any more time than you already have. Get down there and give me a report ASAP, understood?” Feron said. With that, he gave a tiny nod to Alexander, and walked away. Alexander turned his back to the squad and gave Feron a salute before saying to the squad,
“Guys look, I…” He was interrupted by Yttriu, who was on him on a heartbeat.
“You lying scum! You [meanieheads] must have worked together and killed Restless!” She hissed.
Alexander struggled for a while, then he suddenly went limp and his eyes glowed with a purple-ish glow. His skin and armour started to be covered by stone and by seconds his head had become what seemed like a horse’s head. His flourish and cutter merged to be a sword that seemed like a troika, but much bigger. He smashed his hammer down, barely hitting Kris. He hastily activated the Mecha Knight that he just upgraded and charged his Pulsar. The Mecha started shooting at Alexander who seemed to be immune to any attacks that the squad threw at him. A battered Molt crawled towards the elevator when he noticed a glowing purple stone on Alexander’s back. He grabbed his Blaster and aimed at it. He pulled the trigger and a brilliant bolt of Cyan burst out of the barrel of the Blaster and hit Alexander. Alexander stopped, kneeled down, leaning on his sword for support and with a flash of Violet light, Alexander appeared, un-conscious. The team quickly dragged him into an elevator with them and pressed down. With the usual burst of energy, they went down into Depth One of the clockworks. Inside his office, Feron observed the fight between Alexander and the squad. He smiled. It was his idea to put Trojan DNA into his bloodstream, turning him into a Trojan when he felt he was in danger or when he was angry. He smiled again as Alexander-Trojan continually pounded the squad over and over again. ‘Another group of Spiralians gone. My king would be pleased to hear of my success.’ He thought with delight. Suddenly, he saw his Trojan warrior fall. “No!” Feron screamed at the screen. How is that possible? They should have died! He sees the battered squad pulling the now un-conscious Alexander into the elevator presses the down button and goes down into the clockworks. Feron sagged, and picked up his comn unit, saying, “This is Lieutenant Feron here. The team that has just gone down into the clockworks is suspected of treason. When they come back up, arrest them. Thank you.” He leaned back against his chair and sneered. ‘One day, all the Spirals will be dead, and my king and I will rule over Cradle!’
 

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 20:13
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Callis-The-Wicked
GOOD

Great work, but you never answered if my character was in the story or not XD

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 20:15
#13
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Topoyozada
It is

It is.......... BUT It isn't in YET...... WILL be in Chapter 4! You will help fight against your father!

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 20:20
#14
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Callis-The-Wicked
Great

That's what I was expecting so thank you for answering back =D Yeah, love fighting my Father =)

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 20:24
#15
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Infernus-Dragneel
I see....

So to put it simply...

Everyone in the HQ is evil!
Nice chapter by the way

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 20:24
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Kao-Kao
HEy rEmEMBERME

Hey great story and all with this and that but can you add me somewhere?
Cmon!

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 20:30
#17
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Callis-The-Wicked
@Tyraelarchangel

You never sent in an application. You can't have someone do all the work for you. GROW A BACKBONE!!! XD

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 21:54
#18
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Topoyozada
@Infernus

@Infernus You will see, that Not EVERYONE is evil..............[oops, that's a spolier!]
@Tyrealchangel it's okay, i'll add ya
@Seatus Calm down, he's my friend, i know him from SK...... Anyway.... Do you guys have SK accounts? I would rather contact you through them then contacting you from here.

P.S Chapter 4 is maybe going to be out either late today, or tommorow! Most possiblity is tommorow as i didn't finish my Christmas Homework yet XD

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 22:45
#19
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Callis-The-Wicked
Oh

I wasn't angry XD I was jusf trying to be funny

Wed, 12/26/2012 - 22:52
#20
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Callis-The-Wicked
Umm

I do buf I won't be able to use my laptop this week I am typing everything on a wii u until I can use my laptop. It's just because it's at my dads house and I am at my mom's house this week.

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 07:52
#21
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Topoyozada
Finally!

Finally after 3 days of stress, homework and writer's block, i finally came u with a sad ending for Chapter Four! Woo!

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 07:52
#22
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Topoyozada
Chapter Four:

Chapter Four:

“Where am I?” Alexander groggily asked.
“Oh shut up, you filthy bastard.” replied a voice.
“Yttriu, please shut up. To answer your question Alexander, we’re in the Gloaming Wild-woods, and Yttriu’s doing some…… things on your leg.” Answered Caleb.
“She’s…. She’s not cutting it off, is she?” Asked Alexander anxiously.
“No no. It’s alright. Your leg broke when the elevator blew.” Kris explained.
“Oh…. Wait! You mean the elevator blew up?”
“Uh huh.” Kris nodded. “Anyway, it’s my turn to go out for a shift of patrol. ‘Night!” Alexan-der stayed still, thinking who would blow up an elevator, when Yttriu jabbed something into his leg that made him cry out in pain.
“Ah! My leg!” He cried.
“Oh get a grip!” Yttriu cried as she approached him with another needle. Alexander’s eyes widened as he saw the needle and cried,
“Oh god. Get away from me! You’re no medic!” Yttriu frowned and got a modified Autogun out, designed for Medical Use. She squinted as she aimed and as she pulled the trigger half a dozen of syringes flew out and hit Alexander. As the needles had contact with the skin, he mumbled a few words, stumbled around and fell asleep.
“Did you have to do that?” Kris asked.
“Yes.” She kneeled down and started applying pressure bandages onto his wound. “I didn’t calm him down, his blood would have started flowing freely again and he would have died. We wouldn’t want someone dying here, would we?” She packed up her Medical pack and left for her own tent. Kris shook his head and mumbled something like ‘I hate Medics.’ Then he himself settled down to sleep.
Dawn was just breaking when he found himself waking from being poked by Caleb. “Kris, I’d hate to disturb your beauty sleep, but we would rather ambush this ‘Snarbolax’ rather than facing it head-on. “
“I get your point. Wake the other squad members up. Call them to pack only their water, rations and weapons. We’ll travel light.”
“Understood.” And off Caleb went to rouse the other squad members. When finally all the squad members were awake and ready to move out, they hiked towards a cave where the ‘Snarbolax’ was last seen. They trekked on until they reached the mouth of the cave, where they saw heart panels on the ground. Kris was instantly fascinated of these gadgets. He tried pulling them apart, only to be rewarded by an electrical shock. The squad grinned at this then got ready to face the beast when two Wolvers materialized from the shadows. The squad jumped up in shock, and Alexander was the first one to react.
“Attack!” He cried as he leaped forward with his Flourish. The Flourish was thrown out of his hands as it made contact with the Wolver. They stepped out of the shadows and the knights got a good look of them. One was a Skolver, it’s mane snow white. The other was jet black, with three red eyes. “Surrender now, Wolvers!” He said, brandishing his pulsar. The black Wolver stood up on both legs, then said,
“I’m not here to fight you.” The squad gave a gasp of surprise. Caleb stuttered,
“You….. You can talk?” The Black Wolver nodded then continued,
“I am Seatus and the Skolver you see here is Lily. I am the Snarbolax’s son. We came to help you, as my father has been corrupted by the Swarm.” The squad nodded and unsheathed their weapons. They stood on the Party Button available and watched as the Snarbolax, father of Seatus, roared and tunneled into the ground. The raised their shields as a row of spikes ripped through the ground and went to the other side. At the other side, Snarbolax roared once more and charged at the Knights. Suddenly, Seatus pounced and pinned his father on the ground, yelling,
“The bell! The bell!” The only one who understood was Caleb, as he saw a bell near the corner, hidden by leaves and mud. Caleb ran at it, ignoring the thorns that are scratching his armour and skin, and struck the bell with his Calibur. The bell vibrated with such force it was hard for the squad to just stay still. The three Wolvers within range instantly turned yellow from being stunned. But that did not stop Snarbolax from attacking. It ripped free from Seatus’ grip and threw him at a wall. Without pausing to see it’s damage, it threw himself in front of Molt, snapped his jaws and tasted fresh blood running through his throat. He paused to flavor the blood. That was a mistake. Alexander’s Flourish ran through his heart and he started writhing on the floor. A moment later, his body didn’t move, lifeless. Alexander pulled his Flourish out of the beast’s heart and turned around, to see the ground around Molt’s inert body a dark shade of crimson red.
“Oh [scrap].” He muttered as he ran to Molt’s side. Yttriu was on Molt’s other side, applying pressure bandages all over his body.
“Please …… Please, Molt, don’t die on me.” She muttered as she continued planting bandages. Molt shook his head, muttering,
“No. Leave me. Get to Haven. I can’t” He was interrupted by a hacking cough. “I can’t survive this wound.” Another cough. “Just leave me.”
Yttriu shook her head, her eyes brimming with tears. The others of the squad gathered around, trying hard not to cry. Alexander put a hand on Yttriu’s shoulder, which she shook off. She continued to place pressure bandages until she found she ran out of bandages. “No, no.” She muttered. “No!” Molt shook his head again and said,
“Please. Find her……. And give this to her please.” These were the last words Molt ever ut-tered. He breathed in his final breath, and then stopped moving altogether.
“No. No! Damn it, Molt! Don’t die on me!” She started sobbing, which the team had never seen her doing in public, and pounded her fist on Molt’s chest. “No…… You had to die, you stupid bastard! Why did you have to die?!” Alexander walked over and planted a firm grip on Yttriu’s shoulder.
“He died a hero’s death, Yttriu. Let’s get to Haven and report this a mission success, okay?” Yttriu nodded, tears still streaming down her face. “Just let me stay with him a little longer. Alexander nodded to the other squad members, and they all nodded. As one they gripped Molt’s body and lifted him from the ground. The started to lift him towards the elevator, while Yttriu was gripping his life-less hand. Seatus walked over to the group, murmured a few words of gratitude to Molt, then left them with a letter, said to be given to Feron. Alex-ander promised to deliver it to Feron. Then, Seatus and Lily disappeared into the shadows as the squad went back up to Haven.

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 07:53
#23
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Topoyozada
Oops: Double post

Oops, sorry. Double Post

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 09:27
#24
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Artistbma
This is great. Just work a

This is great. Just work a bit on grammar, but the story is awesome. I never would have suspected Feron of being... a murderer. :3

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 09:47
#25
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Artistbma
Can I enter apps I already

Can I enter apps I already made for another fanfic? It doesnt have to have anything to do with the other one, I just like the character. If so, then Ill go find that app now.

EDIT: Found it.

Name: Sin

Race: Spirilian

Gender: Male

Personality: Cold-Hearted. Merciless. Very sneaky and persuasive. Doesn't care for anyone.

Bio: Some say he came from the Core itself. Sin is born of the shadows. He never met his parents, as they were killed by a psychopathic spirilian when he was a child. He was brought up by a pack of wolvers and was taught to worship the king of the wolvers, the Snarbolax. He wears a pelt born from the snarbolax itself upon his body. Living with wolvers made Sin gain amazing survival skills. Because his parents were killed by a knight, Sin resents his own kind. He is a master assassin, born to kill. Once a knight came to the deepest depths of the clockworks and found Sin sitting in a corner. That knight was never heard from again.

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 15:44
#26
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Infernus-Dragneel
Nice

Keep on writing... I want to see what is going to happen...

And I think you accidentaly wrote Alexander Alex-ander?

Sat, 12/29/2012 - 22:40
#27
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Topoyozada
i WROTE

I wrote with Microsoft word, so when it reaches the sentence end, there will be hyphenation. SO therefore Alexander=Alex-ander

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 03:45
#28
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Topoyozada
Chapter Five

Chapter Five:
Feron stood in his office, examining the sample tissue and the pictures taken from a binocular visor. “Let them in.” he said into his own Private Comn server. Almost instantly, the squad was ushered into his office by two Enforcers, the best of the best in the ranks of the Spiral Police. He gazed at the newly arrived squad. Kris the technician was drowsy looking, his head bobbing up and down, fighting to stay awake. Alexander was sitting on a wheelchair, as his leg is still recovering. Yttriu was sobbing uncontrollably and Caleb was beside her, her head on his shoulder. He glanced between Yttriu and Feron. Feron cleared his throat and said, “Good work, squad. Kora, head of the Intel knights and her team have reviewed the things you have given us. And for the letter you’ve given me, Alexander. Seatus has come to Haven just before you left, and I have given him information on beast activity in the Clockworks. I have read the letter that he left me and he tells me that his father is not dead yet.” Alexander immedeailty protested,
“But sir! I stabbed him through the heart. It went completely through. It is impossible that a beast could survive that.”
“Seatus said it would not kill his father, and he knows his father more than you do, I suspect.” Countered Feron. “Anyway, I just wanted to say a good job and well done to you all, and I’m really sorry about your buddy there.” The squad turned to leave when Feron said,
“Alexander? Please stay. I need to discuss with you how this squad did.” Alexander frowned and leaned back against his chair, his thumbs hooked into his belt. When the door closed behind him, he asked,
“What do you want with me?”
“This.” Feron pressed a button on a remote he brandished out of nowhere and Alexander screamed as he experienced pain like never before. Even after it stopped, Alexander still laid on the floor, writhing. “I can do this to your girlfriend, you know, Alexander?” Alexander spit at his helmet. “Very well.” And Feron pressed the button once more. And screams pierced the silence around the office. Alexander laid there, panting.
“What do you want with me?” Asked Alexander, clearly in pain.
“Hmmm…… Let me think.” Feron scratched his chin, thoughtfully. “I never thought you would break, but if you are willing to stop the pain and to prevent Kora from enduring this pain, I suggest you do it. Your squad will likely be asleep by three in the morning. I want you to assassinate the in their sleep.”
“Never.” Spat Alexander. “You traitor! Why betray the Spiral Order?”
“Tsk Tsk Tsk.” Feron clicked his tongue. “All in good time. But first, let us watch a show.” He pressed another button on his remote and a section of the wall retracted, showing a gigantic screen. He pressed the same button again and the screen showed Kora, Alexander’s girlfriend, humming to herself while standing in front of a Snipe garden, alone. Feron’s face broke into a wide smile. He pressed the button used to torture Alexander. This time, it was not Alexander who endured the pain, but the knight on the screen. Screams pierced the empty street, as she experienced the pain. The pain stopped and she curled herself into a ball, shivering.
“Fine! I’ll do as you say.” Shouted Alexander. “Just leave Kora out of this.”
“As you say.” Feron said, spinning his Valiance on his finger. “If you try and warn them, I would know and your girlfriend you endure more pain.” Feron’s smile grew even wider as he said this. Alexander was too angry to reply. He climbed up his wheelchair, kicked it open with his good leg and wheeled himself out of the office, fuming. “Tonight, I get rid of one squad of Spirals.” Feron grinned, and walked over to his room. He glanced over his shoulder, seeing as no one was there, he two fingers on his pillow and instantly an Elevator built into the wall appeared. But this elevator was different, as it could only reach one depth. He activated his Mecha Knight Defense system just in case someone tried to storm his beautifully furnished house. He glanced at his house once more and pressed down. Instantly, ten units of Mist energy came out of his armour and down he went, into the hearts of the Clockworks.

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 04:53
#29
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
O_o?!

Alexander is hooked up with Kora? this is very unpredicted !

But can you still put the fact that he would rarely talk to anyone? And that he is very bad at communicating with others? Also he should remember that Seatus' father almost killed him in a mission in the gloaming wildwoods?

Nevertheless, nice chapter! Let's all start a riot and kill Feron!

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 05:48
#30
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
Nice chapter! :D And is Sin

Nice chapter! :D And is Sin accepted?

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 06:22
#31
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
yes it is

yes i do..... But i changed a little..... I will do some flashbacks for Alex.....

And Sin is accepted, but will help in R twins

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 07:12
#32
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Rabeet-Ahsan
Very good indeed Topoyozada.I

Very good indeed Topoyozada.I would like to apply too.
Name:Raedon(Its Lord-Raedon actually but thats too long)
Race:Owlite or Spiraliian what evers better
Gender:Male
Personality:For Owlite A very wise and thought full and powerfult wizard but shy and keeps to himself.For Spiraliian A powerful Defender Elite and expert in Defensive gear as well as one of Feron's most trusted man(but not one of the bad guys).

Bio:Owlite Was orphaned when his parents were killed raised by Uncle and Aunt who both were great sorcerors and learned from them.
Spiraliian One of the many survivers of the spaceship(i don't remember the name)crash was lost on the surface for 2 months before wandering into Haven and now a powerful and tactical Knight of the Spiral Order.

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 07:26
#33
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Rabeet

Rabeet is accepted! I'm deciding to make him half-half. Maybe was brought up by Aunt and Uncle and actually he's a sorcerer but he uses guns, so he doesn't know? Dunno. Maybe I'l put him into the sequel, because i don't want any more of the squad members dying....... I've been crying since Molt has died.

Sun, 12/30/2012 - 12:07
#34
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Callis-The-Wicked
Yay

Advertising my fanfic here for just once...lol

http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/71088

Mon, 12/31/2012 - 16:14
#35
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Thecalubur
New character

Name: Aidan
Race: Spiralian
Gender: Male
Personality: A powerful Champion who specializes in sword bearing
Bio: Aidan has been part of the spiral order since he was a young boy and over the years has gotten very skilled with many different types of swords

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 07:05
#36
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Chapter Six is out, guys!

Happy new year guys! Here is my new year present to you!
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Chapter Six:
There was a hidden Gremlin fortress at Depth 17, just below the Roarmulus Twins project. Feron arrived there in his elevator and he shed his armour. Beneath his armour, lie a furry body, short legs and arms, and two huge innocent looking eyes. He marched into the room and sat down, waiting for the members of the Crimson Order to join him. A few moments later, Seerus arrived, his mask askew. “What happened to you here?” Feron/Gremlin asked, snickering.
“Oh shut up, Blunder. You know perfectly what happened.” Blunder was about to reply with a sarcastic comment when Herex, the whispering Venom, entered.
“King Tinkinzar will see you shortly, Blunder.” He said in a raspy, dry voice."In the mean time, come with me." He led Blunder down a corridor and into a dimly lit room. There, a hydrated, starved figure was trapped in a cage made of Sun-silver. It’s once strong, muscular chest has now shrunken into a disheveled chest."Our prisoner have been most uncooperative. Fortunately, we have ways to make our prisoner talk." Herex grinned as he brandished out a device, which looked like a hell like a Taser, and pressed it to Feron’s chest. Feron writhed and his eyeballs bulged. But no screams came out, as his throat was dry and could not make a sound. Herex snickered and passed the device to Blunder, who pressed it to Feron’s head. The gremlins laughed as Feron tried to break out of cage and received a Taser to the head. But unknown to them, there was a Spiral Knight that was spying on them. He wielded a Nightblade and slung on his back was his Magnus, which he dubbed ‘Bob.’ He grabbed ‘Bob’ and replaced his Nightblade into its place. He cocked it and aimed, then fired. The round tore through Blunder’s head like a Brandish through Proto armour. Blunder’s head burst into a red pulp while Herex and Seerus turned in shock, to see a figure dressed in complete black, cock his Magnus again and shoot another round. At the last second, Herex leapt away, the round hitting his foot instead of his heart. He howled in pain, as Seerus charged his Dark Reprisal bomb and threw it at the Spiral. The spy raised his activated cloak and faded away from view, the bomb missing him completely. Seerus ignored Herex, who was holding his foot, howling in pain and the inert body of Blunder. He grabbed a nearby speaker and shouted in it,
“There is a Spiral in the base, repeat a Spiral in the base. This is not a drill! Initiate a level 3 lockdown! Repeat a level 3 lockdown!” He grabbed his War Hammer and charged all his retribution bombs, then raced to King Tinkinzar’s chamber. “Sir, sir! A Spiral have infiltrated out base! You got to leave!” He cried. Tinkinzar growled through the slits of his mask,
“You and your army. Weaklings! I will take care of him myself.” With that, he grabbed the War Hammer and Seerus’ Bombs and stalked away, leaving Seerus trembling with fear.

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 06:59
#37
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
gg

Bit surprised, wish real Feron had gotten tortured more for fun, but I wonder how the story will play out from here.

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 07:06
#38
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Changed my story a liittle,

Changed my story a little, since I saw that i didn't copy all of 'em on it.

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 18:29
#39
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
Oh Feron...

I stand corrected >_>

Guess you'll never judge the book by it's cover

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 20:24
#40
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
heheheh LOL

heheheh LOL

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 20:59
#41
Porcrhind's picture
Porcrhind
Still taking apps?

... Just a question...

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 21:20
#42
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Yes

Oh and Aidian is not accepted. I don't know his personailty!

Wed, 01/02/2013 - 06:18
#43
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Chapter Seven is out! Woot!

On the second day of new year, i post Chapter 7! Anyway, Happy 2nd day of New Year guys!
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Chapter Seven:
The squad walked into the barracks, Yttriu’s eyes still red from crying, her sniffling once in a while. A tired Kris snapped at her, “Oh will you just shut up?! I know Molt’s death was sad, but you don’t need to cry for that long!”
“Hey! You shut up about her! Mind your own business!” Cried Caleb, patting Yttiru’s back.
“You mind your own-Never mind…..” Kris mumbled. He climbed on his bed and had fallen asleep immedeailty. The other squad mates lingered for a moment, and eventually all of them were sound asleep, save Yttriu and Caleb. Caleb asked,
“I can’t help thinking…. But you cried unusually about Molt. Why?” Yttriu sniffled and answered,
“I had two brothers…. One of them went on an expedition and had never come back. One of them, which I recently discovered, was Molt.” She sniffled again and shuffled closer to Caleb.
“Oh.” There wasn’t any more you could say to that. Caleb found her hand in the darkness and interlocked it with his, squeezing her hand for support.
“Thanks for standing up for me like that, Caleb.” She murmured. Caleb whispered,
“That’s what friends are for.” And he leaned in and kissed her. Her eyes grew wide with surprise, then slowly she closed her eyes and kissed back. The detached themselves from the kiss and smiled at each other. This time, it was Yttriu’s time to lean in. They kissed again, when suddenly a large crash made them jump and recoil. There, was Alexander, his hand concealing something behind his back. Caleb stood up, pushing Yttriu behind him and said,
“What’s behind your hand, Alexander?” he asked innocently. Alexander took a step forward, then another, then another. “Stay back!” Warned Caleb as he unsheathed his Calibur. Alexander still took another step towards Caleb and Yttriu. “Don’t!” Alexander took another step, then dropped the dagger he was holding.
“I’m so sorry.” He whispered, and he broke down weeping.

Wed, 01/02/2013 - 08:30
#44
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Ultimaknightz
Application.

Name: Arthur
Race: Spiralian
Gender: Male
Personality:
Arthur is calm and calculating, always thinking many steps ahead of his enemies. He is a brilliant military strategist, and does not take other opinions other than his own into account. He can be quite friendly at times, though one wrong word and you could be an inch away from the blade of his sword. He takes everything seriously, and despises evil as much as he despises crafting costs.
Bio:
Raised in the ways of the sword, Arthur was naturally talented at using the sword, using a custom version of the night blade as his first sword. He was ambidextrous as well, something that was not seen in Cradle for almost a millennia. He was sent to the advanced academy in Cradle, in which he was taught strategies and how to dual-wield. There, he started to actually enjoy living on Cradle. Until that fateful day. His parents were last seen possessed by the swarm, then killed gruesomely. There were not even enough body parts left to identify who was who. Now, Arthur vows to take revenge, whether he breaks the law, or not.
(Sorry for the short post but, I'm doing this on my iPad so... Sorry if it's not up to your expectations. It was quite rushed. Partly because my iPad is running low on battery life.)
Equipment:
Chapeau of the Blue Rose
Tabard of the Gold Rose
Dual wielding swords: Dread Venom Striker, Wild Hunting Blade
Dual wielding guns: Argent Peacemaker, Sentensa
He may switch between those, given the situation. He keeps the two swords in sheaths behind his back, and the guns in 'gun sheaths' on his belt.

Wed, 01/02/2013 - 18:03
#45
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Infernus-Dragneel
Nice! Oh Alexander :3

Great job Alexander! You truly are a professional cockblocker XD

Anyhow... Just forget what I said...

Nice, please keep on going, would like to see this continue

Also, a little more information to Alexander:

Weapons: he favors a heavy weapons and also shadow type swords, he came liking to it because he used to have fun seeing poor gremlins flying through the battlefield and easily crushing their heads with his bare hands.

-He hates, wolves, any kind of it, especially the Snarbolax.
-He tends to act very immature when it comes to sweet food, and strangely it seems as if his weighed never changed.
-He have a powerful and toned body physique, many girl would easily fell in love with him but Alexander is very picky with girls, only looking through their brain and personality.
-He also hate coffee and medicine.

Wed, 01/02/2013 - 19:11
#46
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
kk!

Alright! Oh and Arthur is accepted though he will appear much later... Sorry it's becuz he has 5* weps!.
Anyway.... Alexander uses Nightblades but he doesn't use troikas! He uses Flourishs!

Wed, 01/02/2013 - 21:52
#47
Ascis's picture
Ascis
Nice twist in Chapter 5 and in overall, great!

*APP*

Name: Acel

Race: Bio-Human(:D Find out what that means...)

Gender: Female

Personality: Mysterious, but takes pride in what she does.

Bio: A sleeping woman found inside a capsule. She was taken care of by her adoptive parents. She has special abilities(noting her extremely fast calculations and readings of any object), as opposed to her brother, who happens to be her ultimate opponent. She is caring and lovable, and with her trusty arm-blades, she is bound to find her past.

Thu, 01/03/2013 - 01:13
#48
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Thanks!

Thank you people! Oh and Acel is accepted/ But I would make her maybe a girl, not a women?

Thu, 01/03/2013 - 02:05
#49
Ascis's picture
Ascis
Yes, I would envision her as a girl;

But I described her as a woman because of her age(19).

Thu, 01/03/2013 - 04:29
#50
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
Wonderful chapter. :)

Wonderful chapter. :)

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