WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIII????!!!!!
I will give my support to Topoyozada...
Get back soon!!! ;A;
Cradle Wars [Accepting Character Applications!] [NEW!]
Sat, 01/05/2013 - 01:32
#52
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
Sat, 01/05/2013 - 07:49
#53
I don't get "the fight for
I don't get "the fight for his guild" and "tricked an underaged player into giving his guild back"?
Sat, 01/05/2013 - 21:31
#54
You're not the only one.
;A;
Sun, 01/06/2013 - 01:05
#55
Topoyozada speaking here
Topoyozada speaking here. Do you read me?
Anyway, The 'Fight for the guild' was someone scamming me out of my guild then i tricked him to giving my guild again. He complained and got me banned. That *^$$#%@# ^&*%$#!
Mon, 01/07/2013 - 02:28
#56
Topoyozada...!
Kick that guy's @$$!
Lol J/K...
But seerusly, I hope the GMs understand all of this.
Mon, 01/07/2013 - 03:04
#57
@Knight
Didn't you report him for scamming?
Mon, 01/07/2013 - 06:04
#58
Did
He reported me first, so I got banned first, I'm first priority for them :O
Mon, 01/07/2013 - 19:12
#59
@Knight
Wow that is some bull.
Wed, 01/09/2013 - 05:51
#60
Ah!
People! I noticed people have been not commenting here. Is it because of lack of chapters now? I'm sorry, but I'm trying my best as I have my exams right now and I'm juggling between Un-Defaulting my guild and writing my chapter. So........ To attract more people's attention, here is what I'll do! *Deep Breath* I'll promise to do two chapters within 1 week! Promise! Thanks for everything
Wed, 01/09/2013 - 06:25
#61
Its not because we haven't
Its not because we haven't seen any new chapter lately maybe.A nd when is your ban being lifted and since you have put up a reason people will understand.
Wed, 01/09/2013 - 06:28
#62
Chapter Eight:
Chapter Eight:
“What happened?” groaned Sin as he sat up. He glanced around and saw he was in a dimly lit room with a bloodied body with crimson-red stumps for legs. He looked out a window to see two snoring Gremlin guards, both holding stolen Shockburst Brandishes. His hand automatically went to his holster, and found it was empty. He swore under his breath. He glanced at the body and poked him, and was rewarded by a snort. The body snorted again and woke up, and Sin found himself staring into bloodshot eyes.
“Who are you?” Asked the body, in a weird accent Sin had never heard.
“Name’s Sin. You?”
“Feron.” Said the body, smiling.
“No.” It was more statement than question. Feron raised his eyebrows and chuckled,
“I suppose you don’t recognize me from all these blood.” Sin nodded slowly, then asked,
“Is there a way out?” Feron shook his head slowly.
“Tried escaping. Gremlins blew my legs up. Stopped me from trying afterwards.” Sin nodded again and they fell into deep silence.
It was two days since Sin’s conversation with Feron, and still Sin hadn’t formulate a plan to break out. Feron has been more helpful, muttering,
“You would never break out of here” And some of “Shut up. I need to sleep.” He was sitting down, hands behind his head and he looked down as a Silkwing frolicked by. He ignored it and sat down dejectedly, when suddenly a thought struck him. Silkwings are not known to survive on Construction zones, as they were famous for lack of water and food. So they were imprisoned somewhere other than the Gremlin’s favorite depth. ‘Silkwings……..” Sin tried to remember. ‘Silkwings are known to live in………Aurora Isles, Wolver Dens, Graveyards, Candle Stick Keeps and in Arenas. Gremlins hate Wolvers and vice versa, so Wolver den is out. As for Graveyards and Candle Stick Keeps, the Gremlins and the Spirals imprisoned there would be killed instantly from the Grimalkins and the Phantoms that lurk around, passing through walls and will never die.’ He shuddered, remembering his expeditions here and his meetings with two Phantoms. There was only 2 Aurora Isles in this gate, so therefore they must be in either Depth 13 or Depth 20. Suddenly, an alarm blared in Gremlinese,
“Incoming Spirals squads’ incoming. All Gremlins report to the barracks immediately. Gremlins in charge of prisoners please bring them to the nearest construction zone. Thank you for your coo-….” The voice died down, and another voice picked up, in perfect English
“Dear Gremlins, please panic and don’t fight back. We will slaughter every one of you quickly and mercilessly, thank you for your cooperation.” Sin grinned at that one and looked up to see the two guards stirred awake and grab their Shockburst Brandishes. The wrapped a role of rope around Feron and Sin and dragged them. Sin struggled against his piece of rope, and saw his weapons, ‘Bob’ and his Nightblade, on his captors’ belts. He closed his eyes and imagined the Gremlins being struck down by Spiral Knights. As if by magic, a gunshot rang out and the captor holding Feron’s side of the ‘leash’ dropped down, dead. The other one quickly whipped out his Shockburst brandish, just to find its energy supply down to zero. Realizing he wouldn’t stand a chance without a weapon, he turned around, with Sin still tied to him, and ran. He ran about 3 steps when he paused, his body riddled by countless bullet holes, and died. His saviors, three of them, strolled over to him and fished the Nightblade and Magnus and tossed it to Sin. Sin caught it gratefully and cut his and Feron’s ropes with ease.
“I’ll be going now.” He told them and leapt past the protective railings and into the unknown depths below.
“Hey! You’re not supposed-…..” The one with the customized Nightblade said.
“He committed suicide, not our problem. Let’s just lug this bloody body back up to Haven.”
“Yeah.” The squad quickly removed Feron’s bonds and brought him just at the entrance of the elevator. The female one named Acel quickly kneelt over him and said,
“Soldier, we are the Enforcers, can you hear me?”
“Of course I can you idiot.” Feron muttered.
“Good. Now listen closely, we’re going to bring you back to Haven. But first we need to know who you are, understood?”
“The name’s Feron. Now shut up and bring me to Haven.” Acel raised her eyebrows at her friends and said curtly,
“Fine.” Then she threw him inside the elevator and she pressed up. Mist energy flowed out through their armour and into the elevator. Then the elevator shook, then went up into Haven.
Wed, 01/09/2013 - 08:08
#63
A good chapter indeed that
A good chapter indeed that was.
Wed, 01/09/2013 - 18:48
#64
A new character for the fight
Name : Dantius
Race : Almarian
Gender : Male
Personality : loyal and brave, a bit mysterious
Bio: Seperated from his legion at the great invasion of the Almire, Dantius has roamed cradle for hundreds of years in search of a new cause to exist. Recently he has been seeing a larger number of dead gremlins within the area. He once meet a band of knights who told him they where venturing to the depths of cradle to face lord vanaduke themselves they called them selves the knights of the rose. Upon hearing this news he decided it would be his new goal in his never ending life to confront lord vanaduke and make him see reason.
Sun, 01/20/2013 - 06:37
#65
Chapter Nine
Sorry people! I've been busy so I made this chapter in a hurry and please do forgive me if it's sloppy or anything.
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Chapter Nine:
The squad sat on the edge of an un-disturbed forest. Kris chewing on his third cheese and Wolver sandwich, Caleb and Yttriu holding hands and Raedon, the new-comer of the squad, meditating in the corner, his magic cloak fluttering around as he hovered. Kris have just finished and sandwich and was reaching for a fourth one when a crack rang out, and a slug hit Kris’ hand, his sandwich flying out of reach. As the squad glanced up, another shot came from inside the forest and hit Kris’ helmet, sending his head snapping up, blood gushing from a spot on his neck. Caleb was the first one to react. He shouted, “Yttriu, stay with Kris and get him into Haven! Raedon, you’re with me.” They both nodded and Raedon followed Caleb into the forest. As the duo raced into the forest, they were greeted by two more shots. Just in time, Raedon summoned a block of Ice, and blocked the shots.
“No one shoots at me.” He muttered and he raised his hands, and half a dozen fireballs circled his body. He curled his fists and pointed at the position where their assailant was firing at them from there. The fireballs merged into one and slammed into the trees. That was a mistake. The whole forest blazed on fire, and Caleb heard something that sounded suspiciously like laughter. The duo stood back to back, Caleb’s Calibur and Kris’ Troika raised. They saw a mirage in the smoke: A figure riding on a Toxiclargo. The figure appeared, with a dozen or so Oilers flanking him. As the Oilers touched the flames, it’s ‘skin’ burst into flames. Raedon gripped his sword tighter, his hands slippery. Sin, the figure on the Toxiclargo, grinned and said quietly,
“I am so very sorry, but I am paid a lot to do this.” He gripped his Magnus, cocked it and fired.
Mon, 01/21/2013 - 03:17
#66
hurr!
I'm happy to see something back here :3
I hope your issue could be resolved soon!
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 02:41
#67
Wha?
Wha------?
No one commenting! Infernus, you're my only loyal fan-fiction fan! *Cries pitifully*
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 03:20
#68
The Fresh Maker begins to take affection for the story...!
Also, I've been visiting the other forum pages and I scroll fast it's unnoticeable.
Feedback, great storyline, great way of telling it.
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 04:06
#69
The chapter iz good.
So Sin turned against us?
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 05:04
#70
Eppiccc.
Eppiccc.
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 05:08
#71
I'm so sorry :<
SO sorry that I haven't checked the story for few times already, but this one is never going to fall that easily.
I won't ever allow fanfics to go down without a word, even if I have to bump all the time just to put them on the first page :<
I still hope that your issue can be fixed :D
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 05:28
#72
YAh!
Woo! Oh and Guys.....................
ARGh! I got writer's block. Here's the thing. I would kinda copy Snow's idea (Sorry Snow!) for multiple choices this time, as i couldn't think of anything. So here goes:
A) Sin betrays the Gremlins. (Double betrayal!)
B) Yttriu rescues Caleb and Raedon. (SOLO)
C) Raedon dies........ :(
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 06:04
#73
A!
I could clearly understand that 'writer block'. It sucks when that happens D:
anyhow.... I would go for A, definitely A.
Wed, 01/23/2013 - 11:27
#74
Character apps
Name:Willrus.
Race:Spiralian
Gender:Male
Personality: A young childish knight who is often makes unwise decisions. However, he is very loyal to his friends and will protect them at all cost.
Bio: He's a young yet deadly bomber. He's used to be a weak, useless bomber. Often humilliated by the other bombers.
But that's all changed when he went to a mission to inflirate the royal jelly palace. He saw those bombers asking for help, furious of seeing those bombers died. He goes mad and destroy all those slimes.
After those events, those bombers regret their past.
Thu, 01/24/2013 - 02:58
#75
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!
Dhurr... I'd go for A, it'd be a nice twist for a story.
Fri, 01/25/2013 - 20:00
#76
A
A is thy winner after all! So the chapter will be posted...... tommorow?
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 05:12
#77
Chapter......... man, I forgot the number...
Chapter Ten:
“Where am I?” groaned Raedon. Caleb twisted his head to get a better glimpse at him, and replied,
“Sure hope we’re not dead. Yttriu would kill me if I’m dead.” They both chuckled at that, and at a serious tone Caleb added, “We aren’t dead, right?”
“No.” Said a voice curtly. “If you were dead, I wouldn’t earn much money.” The duo craned their heads and gazed at a lean, muscular person, his face hidden by a cloak. He started to continue when there was a loud smash. A group of knights started to storm the building. Sin turned his head and said quietly, “Stay here and stay quiet.” He unsheathed his Nightblade, and seemed to merge into the shadows. There was a loud scream, and a sound that seemed suspiciously like a blade sinking into someone’s neck. There was a discharge from a Blaster, and then it was silenced by a round from ‘Bob’. A moment later, Sin appeared once more, seemingly unscathed. His sheathed his Nightblade, narrowed his eyes at the duo, and went upstairs.
“So that guy’s a master swordsmen and an assassin. What next? He owns a cage full of Greavers?”
Caleb cleared his throat and replied,
“He does have a cage full of Greavers.”
Raedon groaned inwardly and said, “Who is that guy?”
Back at Haven, Yttriu was worried sick. After she had tended to Kris, she went looking for Caleb and Raedon with two teams of expert trackers. Instead, she came up empty. She immedeailty demanded two CEST troopers, ‘Cobalt Elite Strike Teams’, to deal with the kidnappings. Spiral HQ has refused and has notified her that she has been ‘grounded’ from the clockworks until further notice. She was with Kora, who was visiting Alexander in the infirmary. She found her sitting beside his bed, holding his hand, while muttering some words. Kora glanced up as Yttriu arrived, muttered a quick, “Hi.” Then ignored her as she started fussing around Alexander. Yttriu smiled bitterly as she thought of her and Caleb. Tears started to well up in her eyes, and as she turned to hide them from Kora, she heard a barely audible sound: A sound of a Motarfire’s mortar. She widened her eyes, grabbed her Autogun, and rushed out of the infirmary. What she saw amazed and shocked her at the same time. The Gremlins have invaded Haven.
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 05:17
#78
Hurrr 6.78
Horray! I'm happy to see this updating :3
Please continue :D
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 05:20
#79
i posted
I posted this maybe like 1 minute? Then you comment. Wow. You are a real Spiral Knights forumer
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 05:44
#80
I commented like 5 minutes after you posted D:
Indeed I am, either I am to lazy to go on Spiral Knights right now or that searching Beariffic quotes and realizing that Ken is coaxing Mitsuru to execute them is getting a little boring for me.
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 07:18
#81
A terrific chapter again, by the only Topoyozada.
Bravo! :D
Also, got me thinking when Terra told me about the story and his app:
Name: Ymir
Race: Bio-Human
Gender: Male
Personality: A serious and menacing man who is probably devious as well.
Bio: From the crash, he awoke before Acel. He had discovered all the secrets of Cradle along with the history of the knights' histories, with the help of Tinkinzar and Seerus, but only reveals to the Acel a few truths when he was about to die. He is skilled with a makeshift gun/spear he calls Feux.
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 10:51
#82
Thanks for not killing me.
But didn't like the previous chapter that much as i didn't see any action.
Sat, 01/26/2013 - 23:31
#83
Ummm
@Rabeet: Action next chapter! Be sure to read it!
@ The-Fresh-Maker: Bad guy right? Going to kill/get killed by Acel, kk? You're accepted into thy fight.
Sun, 01/27/2013 - 00:12
#84
@Knight-Of-Vanduke
@Knight-Of-Vanduke Why you don't reply to my app :(.
Sun, 01/27/2013 - 05:33
#85
Oh wait
Oh wait
@ Fleet-Miss-Gun Done! You're accepted! Sorry, forgot about it there.
Sun, 01/27/2013 - 05:33
#86
Oh wait
Oh wait
@ Fleet-Miss-Gun Done! You're accepted! Sorry, forgot about it there.
Sun, 01/27/2013 - 05:48
#87
Chapter..... 12?
Chapter Eleven:
As Sin handed Caleb and Raedon 600 Crystal Energy units each, Raedon couldn’t help wondering why he would give them Crystal Energy. As is reading his mind, Sin answered, “There’s a Wolver convey heading where we are going. You would need to defend yourselves. Now go get those upgrades.” He shoved to a nearby Alchemy machine.
Caleb grumbled, “I would like to kick his ass later when we get rescued.”
“I heard that!” He sighed and slammed his Calibur into the machine with the energy, rewarded with a brand new Tempered Calibur. He turned around to check if anyone was watching him, then quickly took of his armour and helm and shoved them into the machine. A few moments later, Raedon and Caleb were standing in brand new gear, reading to kick some Wolver butt. As they walked down the road, they heard some growls. They turned around to see a pack of half a dozen Alpha wolvers crouched, ready to pounce. As they turned around to run, they saw another dozen of Alpha Wolvers. Sin unsheathed his sword, grinned at the two, and jumped into the fray. Likewise, Raedon started shooting Fireballs while Caleb hacked away the Wolvers trying to maul Raedon. A few minutes later, the group prevailed with little more than a scratch or two. After cleaning the bodies out of their flesh and skin, they continued on their way. After a few more hours of walking, Sin announced, “We’re here.” And used the butt of his Magnus and slammed into Caleb and Raedon’s head. He put their bodies into a sack and pushed a twig on a nearby bush. Instantly, a doorway sprang out. He dragged the bodies into a doorway and into the chamber of king Tinkinzar itself. Instead of meeting the king, two guards insisted they receive the bodies. Sin frowned and held his hand out. The guards dropped a sack full of crowns into his waiting hand.
“Now the bodies.” Rasped the Gremlin.
“Sorry, don’t think so.” And Sin withdrew his Magnus with lightning speed and shot both of the Gremlins, leaving a bloody red pulp on King Tinkinzar’s carpet. Sin smiled. There’s nothing like leaving a mess on a king’s carpet to brighten your then. He quickly opened the bag, dragged the bodies out and dumped cold water on them. He was greeted by gasps of air and a lot and lot of swear words.
“Why did you kidnap us, sell us and kidnap us again?” Choked out Caleb, panting.
“I told you. I work for money, and Spiral HQ has a ransom of 10 thousand crowns on you. Now let’s move.” But Caleb just couldn’t just stop thinking that he was lying.
Sun, 01/27/2013 - 07:12
#88
Wait, wouldn't Ytrriu be in
Wait, wouldn't Ytrriu be in jail rather than the infirmary? Cause Fake-Feron said put them in jail when they came up.
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 02:44
#89
Nah
Nah, the police have short term memory....
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 05:17
#90
Thats a very fortunate turn
Thats a very fortunate turn of events and do need to know our current gear e.g weapons and whens your ban lifting?
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 05:25
#91
@Topo
Might wanna say that in
@Topo
Might wanna say that in the story...
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 05:40
#92
Um.....
All of your gear except Yttriu has 3* gear..... Acel has those..... Blades? Built into her arm? Ugh. Going to puke describing her arms in my fan-fiction. and Ymir? Man, i had fun making up his weps except for Fuex or something..... I called his Rocket launcher Topoyozada...... For someone in the future of the story.....
@Rabeet I'm kinda arguing my case with thy (Sorry 'bout the thy. I'm in old english theme at school, and I can't stop using it!) GMs....... So it's going to be either a sooner or later kinda situation.... And it's definitely a later.
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 06:22
#93
Sorry guys
Sorry guys, this chapter may be boring, but rest assured, next chapter will be FULL of action!
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Chapter 12:
Yttriu slashed another Gremlin away from a fellow Spiral knight, and ducked as a Ninja star flew past her head and sunk into an un-fortunate Knight. ‘Now the Gremlin stalkers are getting into the fight. Things are getting worse every minute.’ She thought as she blasted a Gremlin in the leg. It rolled around, howling in pain until a blast from a Laser Turret silenced it forever. Another mortar landed quite close to her, and she rolled away, feeling the heat rolling off her skin. Her dress whipped around and wrapped around her, coating her fingers with blood. She swore quietly, ‘I should have never gotten this Angelic Raiment. So many dead, rolling Gremlin heads staring from under me.’ She quickly slashed another Gremlin behind her, and followed with two quick stabs. A quick discharge from a Blaster saved her from a Demo’s time bomb. Then she heard the word which she most dreaded and yet most hoped for: “Retreat!” She blocked a Gremlin Thwackers’ axe, and fell back into the boundaries of the Arcade. The vanguards protecting the Arcade’s gates immedeailty put barricades at the entrance, stopping any Gremlins from advancing. She sat down, relieved that fight was over, when a Medic hustled over, saying, “Don’t worry I’m here!” Yttriu rolled her eyes and replied,
“I’m alright, I’m a medic myself.”
“Alright, if you say so.” And the medic hustled to other injured troops. Yttriu smiled and said aloud,
“I didn’t even get touched.” And she looked down at her body. She was covered with blood, guts and her dress was filled with holes, some still smoking. That last thing she remembered before falling into unconsciousness was someone yelling, “Medic!”
When she awoken, she saw Caleb standing over, squeezing her hand. “Caleb!” She cried, overjoyed and crashed her mouth to his. Kozma cleared her throat, and they still didn’t stop. It was until Caleb pushed Yttriu gently away from him, then did they detach. Yttriu leaned forward again, and Caleb gave her a stern look, mouthing, ‘Not now.’ She smiled, held his hand and sat down on her hospital bed. Then she fell into deep sleep once more.
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 13:37
#94
Yay
Another fanfiction with romance.How sweet.
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 17:34
#95
=D
@Shotjeer Are you upset? ^-^
@Topoyozada/Knight-Of-Vanduke
I don't think you ever accepted Infernus's app...Can't wait to clash with his character XD
Mon, 01/28/2013 - 18:47
#96
Hello Knight-of-Vanaduke
I hope you read my mail.
Tue, 01/29/2013 - 03:47
#97
Wha-?
@Night-rove Didn't receive your mail anyhow. Anyway, send it to Topoyozariane, Knight of Vanduke is for my cousin.
@Seatus Did! He's in the infiramy..... Or something. Anyway, you're not going to fight for SK HQ for now
Tue, 01/29/2013 - 06:09
#98
@Everyone
@everyone After a long time of considering, i finally have decided to say this. Topoyozada is NOT coming back. Woo..... Congrats to he who banned me...... *Cry* Well, i fought valiantly, yet my account's still banned..... *Cry Harder* Guess I'll have to stick with this account.
Tue, 01/29/2013 - 08:29
#99
I sent the mail to Knight of
I sent the mail to Knight of vanaduke
Tue, 01/29/2013 - 17:59
#100
keep it up
Nice to see that Caleb had some decency and pulled back. Private is private; good lad. Though I can't blame Yttriu for going all crazy over him - just like a brother figure, he is. Anyway, keep the chapters coming, they're always welcome in my domain.
Dear readers
I'm sorry to say, but this thread will not be hosted by Topoyozada by a while. If you want to ask, please mail me in SK.
Topoyozada had to fight for his guild and while he tricked an underaged boy into giving his guild back, he got banned. We do not know when he will come back, but this thing is for sure. HE WILL COME BACK!
As I was saying, I will continue the story as I as his close friend. Chapter Nine would be coming soon, I promise!
P.M For Questions, mail Knight-Of-Vanduke! Thanks