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Cradle Wars [Accepting Character Applications!] [NEW!]
Mon, 02/18/2013 - 20:30
#152
Yay, 4th page
Mon, 02/18/2013 - 20:36
#153
Well, that's a way to put a
Well, that's a way to put a damper on my spirits.
If you don't already have a villain, I'd like to offer Sin up as the main antagonist. As his app suggests, he's pretty evil in my mind.
If you do, feel free to use Sin as whatever.
Mon, 02/18/2013 - 20:59
#154
It's alright!
I thought I might be denied anyway, and besides, I was thinking I was gonna take a shot writing a story about Mynah. However, I would most certainly like it if she appeared in your next story. I can't wait to see the rest of your current one, great work so far!
Mon, 02/18/2013 - 22:04
#155
Aekuryi, he just said he's
Aekuryi, he just said he's quitting this one. That's why I'm sad. :(
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 03:09
#156
Last chapter
guys...... It's almost ending: Wait for the Prologue:
Chapter 17:
Caleb walked through the empty corridors, opening and opening doors of empty rooms. ‘Where in hell could Yttriu be?’ He thought furiously. Then he heard someone mumbling. He raced to the end of a corridor, and found a girl, mumbling something. “Yttriu!” Yttriu didn’t seem to hear him, and kept running her hands across a small dagger. Then she raised her head, closed her eyes and stabbed herself. “No!” Yelled Caleb, and he ran to her. As she fell to the ground, a Motarfire’s mortar suddenly landed right on her. Caleb turned and saw Seerus and his small army of Gremlins, ready for a fight. Seerus snarled at him, then him and his army charged. ‘You want a fight? Come and get me.’ Thought Caleb and he grabbed his dual Acherons and charged. He met them mid-air, him swinging his Acherons, slicing and stabbing here and there. They were no match for Caleb’s fury. When he finally stopped, he found Seerus leaning on his War Hammer for support, his mask askew. “I…… I will be the end of you!” Seerus snarled.
“Then do it!” Screamed Caleb, and he dropped his Acherons and walked right in front of Seerus. “Kill me now.” When Seerus didn’t reply, he yelled and grabbed Seerus by his neck, slamming him to a wall. “All I wanted was to marry Yttriu and live a happy life. You made it impossible. Now kill me!” Caleb punched Seerus. Seerus grinned, righted his mask, “My pleasure.” He grabbed his Hammer and leaped into the air, slamming it on Caleb. Caleb didn’t feel anything, and he crashed into a crater on the floor. He smiled as he felt the blood seeping from his armour, helm, arms and feet. He smiled. When he heard a familiar voice say, “Get away from him!” He heard a whizzing sound, followed by a gurgling noise. Then he saw Yttriu looming over him, crying, “You idiot! Why did you have to die?!”
“Yttriu?” He asked, softly. He could already feel the strength slowly draining from him.
“Yes, you idiot!” Yttriu slammed her fist on his chest again and again, sobbing. Caleb felt like crying too, wasting his life like this. But he couldn’t cry anymore. He felt like he was floating. He glanced at Yttriu face once more, then closed his eyes for eternity.
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 03:14
#157
Actually
Actuualy, it's the end. I don't know how to make Epilogues....... D:
Anyway, wait for my next fan-fiction! Most likely it would be called Betrayal.
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 04:03
#158
BEAR-IFFIC!
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-
That was sad, I thought it would be all happy and.... errr...... I was wrong.
Congrats! That was an amazing chapter you made there! And congrats to you for being able to finish your story! It was great!
/applaud!
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 04:42
#159
That ending makes me wanna
That ending makes me wanna punch something.
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 04:59
#160
Just made
Just made the Chapter 1 for Betrayal...... Wait maybe 5 mins. then refresh the Page. Check it out!
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 05:05
#161
Wait! Make a new thread for
Wait! Make a new thread for it! So you can change the title and stuff.
Tue, 02/19/2013 - 05:14
#162
I did lolz
Alright.... Here's the link for Betrayal: First person who commented gets 1 cr free!
Link: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/75161
P.S Hope you guys like it!
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