@Dmatter, ditto, I don't think I'll have much time to post anything lengthy either.

@Alfreton, technically, Thinslayer can control your character if need be, but it's irrelevant I suppose.

Oops, So I've GM'd a few times before in creating npc's?
Uhhh... Nevermind.

Anyway, Those all sound like good ideas. However, I think I like the FATE system enough to not agree with the first one.
Being the GM, you could always add bonuses to your rolls. And if necessary, you could roll for others to continue the plot. Just... Do something within that character's background, eh?

Anyway. WRITER'S BLOCK!

Thinslayer only said that that several key GM aspects would be given, meaning Several=some.
So, really, They couldn't cheat the roll systems. What I said earlier was just a suggestion.
Anyhow.
I still like the idea of being able to create scenes, which of course cannot be edited any more than the first post.
Also, Adding NPC's.. Well, let me just get an idea in everyone's head about app control.

Name: Eryil
Appearance: Blah, Blah- Stuff.
Weapons: C-Essence Sword + Gun (C for core)
Bio: Is the core.
Some other stuff: Always has +5 to rolls.

No, just no.
Anyway - Plot twist, the guy who hired Skotino was the bad guy the whole time.
Also- Rules can be edited, and they can always be molded and added to- After all, We're talking about the basic frame of rules that could pop out of nowhere.

Was that directed at one of my boys? If so they aren't guards. They are highered Mercs. Vet class with stealth gear. (Difficulty ranked: 7 by default here by Thinslayer's list.)

If so I will respond to it, other wise I will respond to it differently.

One set at a time. So lets answer these one at a time.

-Yes he is still alive, he was not part of the Spades' so he is not of there consern for the most part.

-In a since, but no this is your character's first 'STRESS' mark. I would assume like everyone you have a limit of Stress marks before you are out of the game for good. (GAME OVER ENDING)

-You passed out, you just need to wait till you recover a bit. Only Thinslayer can say for sure when you get the Stress mark removed. (I assume a reasonable in-game time for recovery)

Now, since the Vet Mercs. are on my side let me handle there roles from now on alright? Thats really about it, you did fine for the most part.

post name says it all

Kyrlian has edited his app.

Tank Misadventures:
"My voice gives me super strength!" *Nearby wall gets broken with a punch*
---
Item drop!
---------------------------------
~ Tank Armor of WHAT ~
+500 HP
+75% Success/Sneak Bonus
-1000 Attack Damage
---------------------------------
"Sh!t..."
---
* CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! *
"Tank: Did you hear that?"
"Guard: Nah, Must've been a mouse."
"Tank: Dude, look behind you!"
"Guard: Wha-" *Guard gets stabbed from behind*
"Tank: You know, I'm starting to wonder why this keeps working... Stupid guards."
---

Ahahahahahahahaha!

Name: Kyrlian
Gender & Birthdate Female, 2989.
Appearance & Gear: http://www.kili-no-fansub.com/images/Saber9.jpg
Aspects: Zealot (One can fight Zealously? Right?) Fearless (That works right?) Sacrifice.
Approaches:
Careful: 2
Clever: 1
Flashy: 2
Forceful: 3
Quick: 1
Sneaky: 0
Bio & Personality:

Bio: Kyrlian has been fighting on this broken piece of junk for as long as she can remember. Many knights fell by her side while she has helped others reach high within the order. She has always been a valued asset to the order as she rarely fails her mission. It is believed that she would sacrifice herself to complete a mission without a second thought if the mission was worth it. On the field she was always seemed like a marvel. Her strategy is always to get the attention of all opponents and endure their attacks while her team mates find out the solution to the fight or until she defeats the opponents in a smart way. She is reknowned for a particular mission in her resume. A mission where success was survival, three of her fellow knights lying in pain on the ground, she held on and pushed the fight away from them, to then come back and carry them to safety.

Personality: The mission come's first. Kyrlian has always told herself that. She is very selfless self sacrificing. She believes that the order must prevail for the future knights to have something to look at in the future. She will not hesitate to go by self inflicting pain solutions if it means succeeding in the mission. She backs down before no enemies. She is smart, cold and calculating alot of the people bellow her dislike being under her command for that reason they believe they would be pawns in her plans.

Edit: Thanks for all the time you're putting to help me out, it's my first roleplay within that system, I'm more used to pathfinder.

I am eager to see if I am accepted honestly, I have many ideas how to introduce myself. Even more ideas how I will act with other more...disloyal folks!

Nobody knows about the poison; Wurms are a seemingly new problem in Cradle. Noone has got the chance to study them.

To be extremely frank with you, I have no idea where you're going with this, since...

1. I know you're taking creative liberties with this and throwing in what you think is best, but are we seriously gonna go to battles with "Elder Wurms" and Apocreans right off the bat? There's no build-up, no execution of plot, no good reason to even think of fighting them, much less encounter them. Sure, Wurms can become a problem for Cradle, and maybe they're not well known, but then suddenly Apocreans get to travel wherever they so please, whenever they want to hunt whoever? I know you want to move the plot somewhere, but Apocrea BARELY concerns what the main conflict of this RP is all about. I don't see a plausible way Takamura is going to avoid them and go back to the MAIN PLOT unless the Apocreans unreasonably leave him alone, when by all reasons his soul, which would be tainted by sins of all kinds, has more value then Alex's. And the Apocreans are known as the Harvesters of Souls.

2. I originally had a plan that Takamura would head back to Morai base that was SUPPOSEDLY HIDDEN AND WELL GUARDED, drop off a Squire he captured, and return to Haven in about 10~ posts. I let you take the reins for a little bit for some action, which, in a more sensible way, SHOULD'VE led to a 1 on 1 fight between the two / Alex vs. mooks battle. That would end with, at most, FIVE POSTS if we kept the rolls the way they were going. Instead, we've dragged this for FAR too long. Again, with #1, I know you want to be a little creative, but isn't this just a little too ridiculous for the VERY beginning of the roleplay? I wouldn't mind de-railing just a LITTLE once we're in the middle or towards the end, but really?

3. Absences. I can accept a day, or even up to half a week, but being gone for more than an entire week between posts has to stop. If you don't have the time for it, say that you don't have the time, and you can help all the other players go up to speed. If you do have the time, then please use that time efficiently. Because of this, only TWENTY-FOUR PERCENT OF ALL POSTS WERE MADE BY THE TWO OF US COMBINED.

Compared to the other players, who can advance much more easily and smoothly, we're lagging pretty badly.

I made it to give you an open window, so you could toss me where ever you wanted!

I have UGC Comp. TF2 play. I still manage. And I am in a comp which requires me to be away at times to practice with the team, hell I am the leader of said team. :/

This could work, just one problem. Your going to need to be able to be on and read alot of posts in the event PvP comes up.

Maybe the players could use fate points to;

-restore vitality?
-Turn the battle tables in their favour?

Maybe there could be another forum thingy in the Treasure Vault for character apps which are updated by the players whenever damage is taken in a battle or a fate point is lost or something?

Also, will players both attack at the same time? Or will it just go back and forth, (like p1: attack, p2: counter, p1: defend?) starting with who 'drew' first, perhaps?

Anyway, I love the idea of better writing = better chance of winning, and the system so far looks quite good to me.

Ah, now I understand! A RP&S system looks like it would suit pvp perfectly.

Lyra Nyriandra

Female, 02/02/2998

Equipment : Spiral Culet, Spiral Crescent Helm, Calibur

Aspects: Spritely Vigor; Conditioning (Basic : +1); Clairvoyant

Approaches:

Careful : 0
Clever : 0
Flashy : 1
Forceful : 1
Quick : 2
Sneaky : 0

Bio and Personality :

Lyra was just a Squire in the Order, one of the latest to be awoken from her pods. She didn't think she was of any importance; in fact, she had forgotten if she was of any importance. Part of her memory was damaged, presumably from the long time she had spent in stasis, and everything between her military training to escaping the fall of the Skylark was wiped.

In other words, she lost the bonds she had created with the Spiral Order for a quarter of her life. With only the mind of actually getting to Cradle, the Order had a hard time trying to process into her head that she was already 16, not 12, and that she was on another world entirely. Her maturity, gone with the memories she once had, pushed her into a corner of fear of the unknown. It was hard for her to swallow the fact that she'd never see her childhood friends again, and what little camaraderie she had on the Skylark was long-forgotten by today's Vanguards and Champions. Her swordplay was unwieldy, and her gunmanship was at an even lesser level, much less demolition training.

With the fact that four violent, massive Guilds had already rivaled the power of the Order, and that the Morai insurgency had returned...Lyra felt as though she had walked into a new nightmare. Nevertheless, because she enlisted as a field infantryman in the past, she would have to be put up with.

Unsurprisingly, her muscle memory came back within weeks of waking, and unlike most others, she was able to quickly surpass the performance of an average infantryman. She was tasked with handling a resurgence of Snarbolax populations within the Gloaming Wildwoods, but something far more sinister had awaited her.

A man in grey, donning a chapeau, had his weapon brandished against her.

And now she was in a cave, seeing triple images of distorted faces and monsters that she never thought she'd imagine. If she fainted, she woke up to a smoldering fire that lulled her into a blank daze, and a whiff of that awful phial made her heart race like never before.

And then she began to see strange things; strange preconceptions of events unfolding. Spades fighting, a woman of white complexion leading the Order, and most importantly, the man in grey approaching Haven, ill intent in his heart.

Turn back then xD The only way to get back into main story would be to return to haven and learn about the problem. However the problem is not public yet thus IDK how the Morai caught wind of it. Only a hand full of people in haven know about whats going on thus its still a private matter. There was a blackout and the mass of outside input to the Spades' guild hall was shut down. Even the Guild Member's of the Spades' barely even know whats going on.