time to do the herp derp dance!
Derpherpderpslurpherpherpherpderpderpslurpderpslurpherpderpslurp. YY. Shotjeer's eyes galze over. Derrrrrrrrrp.
Fanfiction of a Snarbolax (The End: Chapter 43!)
Fri, 02/22/2013 - 07:09
#152
Yay new page
Fri, 02/22/2013 - 16:37
#153
Chapter 33
A Friend Found.
We look aroujd at all the Jellies that flock here. There must be thousands. I stare at the objective ahead, and plan well as we approach the gates. They lower, and Lily and I fly out, our feet barely touching the ground. Lily sets them aflame with the strongest fire she can muster as she runs past, leaving Jelly cores in her footsteps. I leap over them, their cores quivering with so much fear as they stand in the wake of my shadow that they undo themselves. But I look back to see all the Jellies we just killed are putting themselves back together....that's not right. They were dead! How...?
"What in the-?" Lily starts, then looks up ahead, "Oh joy, more." and we continue to fight. But as we fight, they just seem to come back to life and follow us. I run as more and more join the mob and pretty soon we are being chased. Lily tries to hold them off with wave after wave of fire, but no matter hpw many time they die, they just return. This is one of the most unnatural things I'be seen in the Clockworks my whole life. I see Dao then, running past the Jellies chasing us and catching up. His eyes glow like fire, and his coat seems darker. He wears no expression on his face, and I a truly frightened by the empty coldness in his eyes. His voice appears, his lips not moving one bit as I hear it come out raspy "You won't get to him before I do." he says, and suddenly dematerializes.
I run faster, and see him. The Jelly King, the mind behind all Jellies' actions, waiting for us. I enter through hisgate and see a mess of Jellies materialize from nothing. I ask Lily to freeze them in place. She does. "Jelly King, we come to mean no harm, why do you attack us so?"
"THEY ARE COMING!" he says, and with that he turns to Jelly and hides. I find a strange Jelly, one with a humanoid figure, unconcious. I pick him up asI say, "You'll be safe with us..." the Jelly King speaks into my mind, "Keep him safe from them! From IT!"
Fri, 02/22/2013 - 18:21
#154
Noice
I just started reading this today, and I've gotta say it's pretty awesome :D
I will keep track of this and make sure you never feel lonely or neglected ever againnnnn
Fri, 02/22/2013 - 20:34
#155
:'D
*has overly big sparkly eyes *u* * THANK YOU SO MUUUUUUCH *dives down and wraps arms around Aekuryi's feet XD*
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 00:07
#156
What the?
Provides a bed for Seatus to sleep in since he haven't slept in...... 67 hours. Sleep! Or else you won't make GUD chapters! *Threatens to kill Aekuryi with his Valiance and Calibur*
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 00:34
#157
Oh noes
*raises hands in air*
Dun shoot meh D:
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 01:03
#158
Bang!
*Shoots Aekuryi, then releizes it's then gun Joker gave to me on my birthday..... A fake gun.* /angry
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 01:03
#159
Bang!
*Shoots Aekuryi, then releizes it's then gun Joker gave to me on my birthday..... A fake gun.* /angry
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 01:24
#160
Zzzz
*sleeps peacefully with Chromalisk tucked in arm ^w^*
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 08:17
#161
Turns chroma into...
wait for it....wait for it...A...A...A...........Vog Cub. DAMMIT.
Sat, 02/23/2013 - 12:22
#162
Chapter 34
The Prince
I carefully looked at him as I hold him in my arms. He wears the Crown of Jellies, and bears the shield of the Royal Jelly Family. The Jelly he is made of is a deep rich purple. He looks about the same age as us (Seatus and Lily are biologically 14, they age differently since they are kind of immortal.) and he is unconcious. I can only guess the Jelly King sent him into this state. I hear a rumble behind me, and turn around to face the elevator.
The elevator creaks down slowly, seeming worse for wear than when I rode it. The elevator suddenly stops short a few feet from the ground, I hear it suddenly scream as it drops onto the ground, hard. Dao is standing on it, looking down. He looks up, and I see a horrible, sadistic grin on his face. Suddenly, Void Slimes fall from the hole in the sky where the elevator came from. I run to the exit, Lily following as best as she can. I dive into it, laying the Prince right next to me. Lily jumps, and lands right above me, crouching over me. She laughs a little, and I grin.
Dao stands amongst the corrupt Slimes, looking directly at us, the sadistic smile still upon his face. "You aren't going to be happy for long," he says, his mouth still not moving, "I will make sure of that." Swarmy tentacles sprout from his back, reaching toward us. I am about to scream as they shoot toward us, but right before they reach us, a bright shining vortex rips open behind us, and we slide into it uncontrollably...
The last thing I see is the Structure in Sanctuary before I fall asleep.
Sun, 02/24/2013 - 01:21
#163
Woahbro
Lay off the deus ex machina, man.
I'm just joking (sort of), your chapters are pretty nice.
Keep up the excellent work.
Sun, 02/24/2013 - 01:31
#164
....?
deus ex machina?
Seatus doesn't get it .-.
I can ONLY guess you mean the thrill or the deathly cliffhangers. Mmmm but cliffhangers are what make you keep reading eh? But I am kidding, because I may be humble and modest in other things, but I was born with an expansive imagination, a deadly-reading ability, and the gift to write. They are all I am aloud to be proud of. I know this story is good .-.
Sun, 02/24/2013 - 01:46
#166
Ohhhhh
Yeah, I ain't gonna stop. It's gotten me this far, hasn't it?! @u@
Mon, 02/25/2013 - 19:11
#167
Chapter 35
The Prince (part II)
I awake in Sanctuary to the sounds of crying. I look up to see Lily steadily walking toward the Prince. He is coiled up next to the bottom step of the Structure. I get up and walk over to him to crouch down.
"What's wrong?" I ask, sincerely concerned. "LEAVE ME ALONE!" he screams, and I am suddenly blasted back. Lily lands right next to me in the nook of my arm. I stand up, and see I am covered in jelly. "Wha-?" I murmur, and the jelly suddenly tightens on me, threatening my breathing. The Prince gets up, and walks over. I struggle against the bonds as I choke out, "How-?" but I am greeted with a smack. The Prince's eyes drip with bright blue, slightly-glowing tears. "Who are YOU?!" he forces out, clearly not used to being in control. "Where is my Father?! Where are we?! ARE YOU ONE OF THEM?!"
I hesitate only a mere second, getting his questions ordered in my head. "I'm Seatus, the Snarbolax Child. This is Lily, the Skolver Child. Your dad wanted us to take you away to save you from them. We're in Sanctuary. As for your last question, no, I am not one of them."
He sits down, and I open my mind to let him analyze whether I've told the truth. "Fine," he says, "I'm sorry for my rashness, but it's been horrible at the kingdom. Insanity dwells at the edges of my Father's mind, ever since the Knight's landed and the awakening of the Swarm. My Mother was victim to their first attack, taken away into their realm. It was a cruel thing, as I heard her screams as they pulled her out of the palace and into their vortex to Hell." he looks at the ground as some new tears fall from his eyes. I nod at Lily, and she releases her bonds with ease. The Prince is so surprised that he is frozen in fear, but Lily hugs him tight. "It's okay," she says as she holds his head on her shoulder. A new wave of tears comes down from his eyes, and he buries his face in her fur, letting himself free from despair.
"I-I am so sorry," he gasps out between sobs, "I will treat you guys better I w-was just scared." He sobs, until he is finally done. "I think we should go deeper." he says, wiping the tears from his eyes. "There is more down there...that needs attention."
Sat, 03/02/2013 - 21:27
#168
Lore
Origins of the Jellies.
Well, as you all know, Cradle is made of many worlds. Now, the Wolvers' world was the first. The Snarbolax, Skolver, and Vog, are the Alice-created-version of Wolvers. The second world that came was the world of the Jellies. When it merged with Cradle, the Core was instantly fascinated with these creatures. They were brainless, emotionless, subtle beings. The Core analyzed them, and decided to make two Jellies of it's own, Jellies that would allow these beings a little individualtiy of their own. Thus, it created the Jelly King and Jelly Queen. They ruled over the Jelly Kingdoms, happy. Many million years later, right when the Knight's landed, the Swarm awoke. It firstly created my brothers, the Rabid Snarbolaxes, since it's only dream involved the Snarbolax locking them in their own hell. The first attack they executed was the attack on the Jelly Sovereigns. They dragged the Queen from her throne into a hole in the air. This was dubbed by the Jellies, "The Vortex to Hell," and when the Queen got there and saw the Ice Palace made for her, her heart turned to greed, the sin spreading faster since the Swarm corrupted her by using the Vortex. She turned cold to all, only wanting more and more. Once she had a dream, free from the Swarm only in herself. She looked at the monster she had become, and cried tears. These were tears of purity, and once fallen, changed to Celestial Ore. They were filled with such sorrow and reality that the gods took pity on her, releasing her tears from the dream and into the reality. They appear only in Sanctuary, for that is the safest place for her tokens. It is thought, even now, that she still cries the tears in her dreams, for having to be a slave to the Swarm, and even death is a pleasurable option to her.
Tue, 02/26/2013 - 20:52
#169
._,
Anyone really care that I wrote two whole stories for you guys to read? You're always begging me for chapters......*talks with Chromalisk nomming on head*
Wed, 02/27/2013 - 10:43
#170
What?
I start shpwing my bad side and everyone stops? I have bad days, I'm only human =(
Wed, 02/27/2013 - 10:59
#171
Hmph...
Well don't expect and Chapters from me anytime soon. *drops Chromalisk on ground and walks away...*
Wed, 02/27/2013 - 15:32
#172
I feel for ya
Nobody is readingz minez eitherr.
Im still reading
Thu, 02/28/2013 - 17:02
#173
I read the I just can't
I read the I just can't comment sometimes
Thu, 02/28/2013 - 18:25
#174
I've been looking all over for you!
Your story is, quite simply, amazing. You have made me very proud, Seatus.
Sat, 03/02/2013 - 20:31
#175
>_<
I am not going to post as much anymore, since I am CRITICIZED! GOSH! I won't mention names, but this is bugging my head so much I am just not taking it....
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 00:40
#176
Wait
SHUT UP AND POST THE CHAPTERS!
*Points Valiance to Seatus' head*
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 08:58
#177
T_T
I'm serious Topo......
DEADLY SERIOUS!!!
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 09:01
#178
Should I....?
Think I should make another thread, for my fanfic and for Anubis' journey?
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 10:12
#179
Do you know why you don't get
Do you know why you don't get many readers?
Because you abuse too many chromalisk.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 10:40
#180
At Seatus
If you want. I dont care much myself, but some other peoplez might want to.
Nyways, mentlegen, please post a few more chapters as of right now OR ELSE...
While you're at it, I suggest reading my fanfic, currently on the first page.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 10:57
#181
SHOT!
DON'T AD, IT'S RUDE!
You just made my **** List *writes his name down.*
I abuse Chromalisk because somebody has to.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 10:59
#182
I'm not rude, your fanfic is
I'm not rude, your fanfic is the best......
Until you abuse chromalisk, then the fanfic quality is lowered.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:03
#183
SUCK IT UP SEATUS
I advertise whenever I want to! This is in fact my first time. I NEED MOAR PPLS TO READ. What happens to me when Im on the @#$% list?
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:04
#184
Seatus is hyprocite.
Seatus is hyprocite.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:07
#185
......
Shot, just because you don't have readers, doesn't mean you can go around throwing your fanfics on other peoples' fanfics. When your on my **** List, I send the Chromalisks' cousins, the Virulisks, after you to inject you with an extremely painful toxin that will slowly melt down your insides for days until you are finally on the brink of death. Then, they rob you :D
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:10
#186
....
I am not a hypocrite, I am simply too lazy to write another bio
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:12
#187
Yes you're a hyprocite, do
Yes you're a hyprocite, do you remember you try to spread the word of your fanfic by making apps?
Therefore you get into the list of less respected than no one list.
/writes down Seatus in less respected than no one list
/raise my shield of paladin.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:25
#188
Had to
I only apped for both fanfics to benefit, not stealing viewers .-.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:41
#189
You are experiencing
You are experiencing Amnesia.
Do you know that spreading the word equals ads AKA stealing viewers?
Anyway I should make an ad.
EVERYONE PLEASE ANWERS MY CREATIVE QUESTION!
Since shot make an ad, then I shall join him!
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:51
#190
.-.
*sends Virulisk after Shotjeer and throws Chromalisk at Fleet-Miss-Gun*
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 11:55
#191
Hmmmmm
/use a paladin seal
/regenerates healt and buff my damage
/summon a knight
/knight shield bash Seatus stunning him
/summon a wizard
/wizard quickly shot 20 bullets of death
/Seatus lose
/my party wins
/turns everybody back into spiral knight
If you get on my list..... You will be wrecked by my ROTMG parties!
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 12:09
#192
BTW poison is UP.
BTW poison is UP.
Anyway the plot is garbage.
Just joking (sort of)!
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 12:17
#193
O_O
I think today is the day I start cutting myself.... O_O
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 12:20
#194
Garbage day!
Hahahahahahahahahhaahahhahaha
Garbage is good!
Garbage has different qualities you know.
There is good garbage and bad garbage.
I refer any fanfics as "garbage" due to garbage guy request.
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 12:23
#195
Do you want to cut
Do you want to cut yourself?
Then to the godlands, get killed, and rage quitted.
But you're immortal! You're indestructible!
That's the downside of "perfect powers".
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 12:42
#196
Chapter 36
Maintenance
(Lily)
"Like what? I thought the Gremlins are maintenance," I say, kind of confused. "They are, but we are too. The Clockwork Gods take care of everything according to monster families. Snarbolax, Skolver, and Vog for beasts, Jelly King for Jellies, Roarmulous Twins were created by Gremlins using life sources given to them by the Core, but they don't really rule over Constructs. They are simply more dominant. And Vanaduke for Undead. The Gremlins are ruled under Tinkinzar, so they don't really need maintenance, and the Devilites are ruled under a Boss, but I can't say exactly who is the Boss. We. the Children, are more mobile than our parents. Everything you've done up till now has been meaningless. This is the REAL adventure. Prepare yourself for ultimate madness." and we follow him to the waters. "This will get us to where we need to go. Ready?" me and Seatus nod, and we all jump into the water. I feel a wretched sick pull in my stomach, and we are suddenly under a whole level, standing on a narrow railed platform. "Where are we?" I ask.
We are overlooking the abyss, and see so many levels. I never noticed the platforms that protruded from the stems holding the levels. "We are on maintenance, like I said. The Core contacts the Gremlins, and the Gremlins contact the Children for specifically hard missions. I was told last night to take you on your first mission. I guess the Gremlins ever told you about your responsibilities." he walks over to a ladder that goes up into the level.
A door swings open, and we climb up into the level. Populations of renegade Gremlins hoard many supplies. The Prince turns to us, "Welcome to Maintenance!" he yells, not waiting for a reply before he flings Jelly at the renegades, the Jelly forming into spears in mid air. I notice he gets hurt by their attacks. A wave of fire comes at Seatus and I. I wave my hand, but it won't change direction. "Wha-?" I squeak before the fire hits. It doesn't really hurt, but it actually caused damage. I am perplexed. Why can't I control-?
No time to think about it. I shake the flames off my fur, and notice Seatus' thorns are no longer red, but a sprite-green. He is in his mortal state?! What?! I get hit across the room while I'm distracted. I canlt think, I have to act! Seatus tosses me his last thorn, and together, we attack the next wave, us using his last two thorns.
((That should keep you hounds happy))
Sun, 03/03/2013 - 12:48
#197
See
how well we get along once you post chapters? BTW, my first 5* was virulisk armor, so take zat!
Mon, 03/04/2013 - 15:31
#198
Well.... T_T
K so my life on the forums is quickly going to hell, since no one understands Anubis in the Roleplay I am involved in. And my Fanfic gets brutally criticized when I open up my mail in SK....
Wonderful -.-!
Mon, 03/04/2013 - 16:58
#199
wut
people send you IG mail to criticize your fanfic? Thats brutal.
Nobody sends me mail these days...
Tue, 03/05/2013 - 01:21
#200
@Seatus
Can you please show me the mail?
A screen shot of one of the criticisms would be nice.
Nope yoou just turned the yesmen into chromas and not everything else.