...full of our ranting. What have we become?!
Fanfiction of a Snarbolax (The End: Chapter 43!)
Mon, 03/18/2013 - 19:33
#252
Half a page...
Mon, 03/18/2013 - 20:21
#253
I don't know about u but I've become a fully grown skolver.
Yes I'm a huge skolver person. I'm Seatus but the opposite in breed. Male, skolver= me and male snarbolax= Seatus. Moving on.
I believe we are also lazy to type a whole chapter. Now what u must do is write the chapter.
Mon, 03/18/2013 - 21:01
#255
I'm not Asian of any sort. Just to put that out there.
So, wanna face each other in LD sometime? Oh btw I took one of ur dad's thorns and made dark thorn blade. Don't worry I asked him for one.
Mon, 03/18/2013 - 21:09
#256
Lol
That's nice XD But I am horrid at LD. Isorian traditions are...weird
Mon, 03/18/2013 - 21:16
#257
True
Dude I've been offline in game for a while so I probably suck at LD too.
Tue, 03/19/2013 - 01:53
#258
@Seatus
Do you also want to do T2 LD with me?
BTW I eat snarbolax and Retrodes as a mecha knight!
@Retrodes
The Retrode revolution?
KILL ALL RETRODES, AND KEEP THE MECHA KNIGHT AS THE MASTER RACE!
Tue, 03/19/2013 - 20:02
#259
Ummm......k
No comment.
Wed, 03/20/2013 - 03:22
#260
Ditto
Same here
Wed, 03/20/2013 - 06:23
#261
Poke
GIB ME CHUPTUR
Wed, 03/20/2013 - 15:46
#262
Chapter 38
True Forms
"What? Where am I?" I sit up, and find myself in a place of absolute darkness.
Seatus, good morning. How was your 7 day sleep?
"Who are you? Where's Lily."
All in good time, child. I have to deliver you some news of importance. You see, it is a key part in you defeating the Swarm. You must discover what you are underneath that fur. When I brought you and the others to me, I was happy. I had to erase your memories though, but even so, once you find out, you'll be able to access pools of power within yourself. I must let you awaken now. Good luck Seatus. May light guide you.
I convulse as I vomit water into the grass. I look around, and see no one but me in Sanctuary. I run to the waters and look in, and finally after three seconds the Structure finds Lily and Prince. They went on a Maintenance Mission without me. Well, I guess a Snarbolax isn't really mobile when he's asleep.
I sit down on the steps to just stare into the water. It's so peaceful here in Sanctuary...I wave my hand through the water, and decide I could use a bath. I lay down into the water and relax my muscles.
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I get out, and find myself cold. I reach in the water and pull out a dry cloth and throw it around my skin-.......what the hell? Skin? SKIN?! I look down, and see my fur is gone, replaced by peach-tinted skin......and my muscles show bare. I suddenly faint to the ground as I feel my fur appear strangely as I land on the grass.......
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Sorry for the long wait guys. I was having trouble wondering if I shoukd tell you, since it was the strangest thing that had happened in my life. But I figured my loyal audience deserves the truth. The Core asked me not to reveal it, but I think you guys are to be trusted :)
Wed, 03/20/2013 - 17:36
#263
Yey
Now you won't have Chromalisks murdering you :D
By the way, good chapter, more mysteriesssssss
Thu, 03/21/2013 - 22:19
#264
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Fri, 03/22/2013 - 04:27
#265
Chapter 39
(Lily)
Prince and I walk down a ladder into the maintenance platform. He quickly lets the light scan his eye before we walk in. He presses a white button and almost immediately after the doors slide open and we are inside a hollow metal tree in Sanctuary. Seatus is lying on the ground and I run over to him, crouching over his body as I shake his shoulders.
"Wake up! Please Seatus, wake up!" I feel cold, so I go behind him and wrap the fur tightly around us both before I see Seatus has no fur and his skin is peach-colored. I look at my arm and discover there is no fur on it either. Seatus' hair is on his head, black with a red at the ends. I am shocked, and I just wrap my arms under Seatus' and across his chest. I put my head on his shoulder as I see Prince suddenly look at his new skin before he faints.
I keep Seatus tight in my arms. And his warm skin feels kind of nice as I fall into unconciousness.
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Good work, child. You've calmed him down. Now get some rest. I will be taking these memories from you soon.
Fri, 03/22/2013 - 13:27
#266
Well
kinda short but its good. Purrfect.
Fri, 03/22/2013 - 17:08
#267
Sadness
Wait. Seatus and lily are humans? Everything I know is a lie. But at least now I know that my revolution is not going to be stoped.
Fri, 03/22/2013 - 17:27
#268
Whwwhuahwat
He turned into a human, and now his memories are going to be erased?
In all honesty, I knew he was gonna look like what you drew at the end, but I didn't know he was going to lose his memories o_o
Amazing chapters though! Keep at it!
Fri, 03/22/2013 - 18:30
#269
SHHH!
All secrets will be revealed, grasshoppers.
Fri, 03/22/2013 - 18:37
#270
MOAR SADNESS
The cake has more truth than that. It also tastes better. I'm suppose to be happy during my revolution, not be fed a lie. My mind is telling me to kill myself in the most gore-filled way possible. It's going to be hard seeing that I am a superior form of matter that you people call "constructs".
Fri, 03/22/2013 - 20:36
#271
What the...
GRASSHOPPERS????? I prefer to be claimed Ants.
Sat, 03/23/2013 - 06:28
#272
X3
Me and Lily used to change uncontrollably back then...we aren't permanently humans so calm yourself XD
Sat, 03/23/2013 - 09:06
#273
Woot mantis
Wait, you and lily change from human to beast from time to time? YES THE HORIBBLY DISGUSTING FANFICS CAN RETURN... I mean... Cough Cough I'm a normal mecha knight. I do not think of having babies with a snarbolax. Cough cough. P.S. I intend that all constructs will be in my revolution, retrode revolution just sounded better then construct revolution.
Tue, 03/26/2013 - 14:13
#274
Bump
Besides the bump, I am so sorry guys. I would've had a chapter out this morning, but my Wii U thought it'd be funny to delete it all -.- Chapter coming soon :P
Tue, 03/26/2013 - 14:17
#275
Where'd you go, Aekuryi?
Aekuryi, what happened to joining Finder's Keepers? :D
I haven't seen you much either, Knight-Of-Vanaduke. :(
@Seatus: I'm still trying to get inside Equinox's head. xD I'm writing up a proposal, so when you see it, let me know if it's okay.
Tue, 03/26/2013 - 16:35
#276
Chapter 40
Roarmulous Twins
I open my eyes to find two arms around my chest. I turn and find Lily, as she subconciously buries her face in my fur. I nuzzle my head on her shoulder and regret having to whisper. "Wake up, it's time for another mission." She opens her eyes and stands up quickly, embarrassed. I look up at her while lying on my side. "It's okay, I kind of like cuddling..."
She giggles, "Well then, don't expect any for a while. Why'd you wake me up?" she tilts her head, and I can't help but looking her over. I avert my eyes quickly and sway my tail. "I got a message while I was sleeping. We need to go to the Roarmulous Twins. Fast." She nods and walks over to Prince, shaking his shoulder. She explains the situation and helos him up.
"Anyone remember why we were asleep?" I ask, not remembering the night before. "Nope, nothing..." Prince says. I look over to Lily, who is staring at the ground. "Lily....?" I question, and after a moment of hesitation she shakes her head. I get up and clap my hands. "Well, everyone ready?" they nod, and we walk over to the water of Sanctuary. I sit on the edge and they sit on either side of me. I look into the waters and whisper, "Roarmulous Twins, please." I grab their hands and pull them into the waters with me as we suddenly land on the floor of the Factory's first level.
I glance at them and run, slicing all in my way into pieces. I am a quick learner for survival. I hear their feet behind me as they run as well. Lily runs alongside me as she catches up. I jump off a wall and slam my blade into a Lumber, and it falls to the ground. I withdraw the Barbarous Thorn Blade, and pick up the pace again. I get a blast from the side by a turret, embers flying into my fur. I jump to the side to avoid another hit. I am instantly upon it, shoving my thorn into it's mouth to clog it up. It almost jnstantly blows itself up from the clog.
We continue our rhythm until we arrive at the Lair. What we find is shocking. Swarm flies around the dome, closing off the outside world. We run to the Main of the level, and find an unconcious Gun Puppy with a Isoranoid body. Two others looking like her, though taller and more muscular, walk inti view, obviously males by their appearance. Their mouths open to reveal to glowing pairs of eyes, both identically red on each. "Take our sister far from here. She cannot become one with the Swarm. We must return to ohr positions before the Master can see us." They ran to opposite sides of the room, and jumped off the ledge. A few moments later the Roarmulous Twins raise up, though inanimate. I pick up the thing and run to the exit. Dao screams behind me. "GIVE HER BACK, SHE IS OURS!" I run to the elevator and scream back. "DON'T YOU EVER TRY TO TAKE THEM, YOU HEAR ME?! I SWEAR IF YOU DO I WILL FIND A WAY TO HAVE YOU TORTURED FOR ETERNITY!"
I send the elevator shooting up, and somehow we enter a light and are back in Sanctuary.
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It is almost nighttime, and the light of Sanctuary dims a little to offer it's occupants formidable sleeping quarters. Prince is sleeping under a tree a ways away, huddled up in a fur summoned with the Structure's waters. I walk over to Lily, who is staring up at the sky-dome. I wrap my arms around her from behind her waist, and pull her close. She looks at me startled, and I crouch down with her as she turns to face me. I look at her eyes deeply and she buts her face to my neck, holding me close. She looks up and whispers,"Seatus, why can't we be normal? Why did it have to be us to carry responsibility?" I reply, "Because, someone had to." I put my forehead to hers and say, "And if I hadn't met you, I'd be lost..." Her eyes seems to sparkle in the artificial lighting. I kiss her forehead, and we sleep.
Tue, 03/26/2013 - 19:17
#277
Awwwww......
Awwwww how cute. Nice chapter.
Tue, 03/26/2013 - 19:34
#278
....
We are nearing towards the end of this journey...like, what, 15-20 Chapters left?
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 12:53
#279
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! The horror,
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! The horror, the horror! xD, but whyyyyyy? I bet its gonna be a new book coming.
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 14:13
#280
Mmmm
My story has already happened, and now I just have to finish this up and BAM, people understand
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 14:24
#281
But we will miss ur awesome book
There aren't many good fanfics left on these forums, so what happens when u leave?
Btw I'm thinking about making my own fanfic but I need a few character apps. Not sure what it will be about but that makes the apps helpful. I get a sense of everyone's personality and the story just kinda flows.
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 14:27
#282
:3
That's nice of you. I have no intention of leaving the forums. (sawwy haterZ)
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 14:27
#283
:3
That's nice of you. I have no intention of leaving the forums. (sawwy haterZ)
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 14:37
#284
WHOOO!
Seatus not leaving WHOO! So u think I should make a fanfic?
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 19:49
#285
...
Minimum grade: Dreathuxy.
So at least Dreathuxy or better.
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 20:15
#286
Meaning?...
What does that mean/require?
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 20:26
#287
Pffft
I have many tales to still tell guys, it will all be interestin' :D
Thu, 03/28/2013 - 19:43
#288
Woo!
Nice chapter, dude!
Thu, 03/28/2013 - 20:49
#289
Hoomins
So Seatus and Lily are in human form now? Wat?
And by the way, nice chapters :D
Thu, 03/28/2013 - 20:52
#290
Not RIGHT now :P
^^^
Fri, 03/29/2013 - 09:46
#291
...
I'm gonna be pissed if Lilly is alive by the end of this...
Cause then that screws up my plans for Dominance XD
Fri, 03/29/2013 - 14:15
#292
Hah
It's like everyone's fanfics are somehow connected to this one, hehe.
Might jump on the bandwagon.
Fri, 03/29/2013 - 14:25
#293
You need my permission
Also, any events that occur in another's fanfic is time ahead of mine.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 07:24
#294
nah
next person who dies will be rained upon with flowers and dove feathers
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 13:03
#295
Chapter 41
The Roarmulous Triplets?
As I wake up with Lily, I grin and get up. The creature is awake now. I walk over to it, and it's startled. I have to take it to sit down, and explain everything. After I'm done explaining, she starts. I learn her name is Elluna. She is the little sister of the Roarmulous Twins. Manufactured by the Gremlins, she was made to repair the Roarmulous Twins whenever the Knights broke through them. Though Elluna comes with her own special punch. I watch as she turns herself into a blood-red Cannon Puppy, a Gun Puppy mountable turret of sorts, she charges a huge expanding electric laser, cutting trees cleanly before disintegrating. She can also shoot projectiles while in motion, and her head spins at any angle. Her body can sometimes generate a powerful, wide-range shield. I watch her do all these things.
And then I feel something dark in Sanctuary, a presence. And I remember that memory Lily helped me remember. I walk over to the waters, and stare down in them, at my reflection.
"Awaken." I whisper, and everyone gasps as it happens. The reflection comes out and asks, "Sector?"
"Sector 1." I say, and the reflection goes back into the water. I am barely holding myself together as the water withdraws into a secret stairway. I look to the others, and they walk over, seemingly understanding. We walk down into the darkness.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 00:56
#296
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Tue, 04/02/2013 - 04:27
#297
Nice chapter.
I haven't posted in a while because I haven't had Internet for a bit. But yea nice chapter.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 21:38
#298
11:38 PM
Aekuryi used Bump.
Critical hit!
It's super effective!
Thu, 04/04/2013 - 09:42
#299
Chapter 42
The Master
We walk down the steps for awhile until we get into a room made out of Swarm. I stop the group. I step on it to see if it's safe. Glowing magenta light electrifies outward from a giant sphere of pure black. It seems to absorb any light near it, which makes the magenta light look like it's cracking out of midair. I walk over to the sphere, and touch it. This must be the Hellcore, designed to withhold the Master.
And I see her. A tall creature, with peach-toned skin, and hair falling from her head, red like blood. Her dress is as red as her hair, and a deep, dark red crown looking like it was made by natural causes happened in a cave. Her eyes glitter black, and her mouth is edged with red. She smiles cruelly. "Hello, Seatus!" she exclaims, raising her arms. Red branches through the air around her. "I am the reason behind your knowledge. The knowledge I give so graciously. Thank you for leading the way to the Master." she touches the sphere thoughtfully. "Me and my lover were separated such a long time ago. That damned White Queen," she points to the floor, "she said, 'Oh, but sister, you are engaged to the champion that won the Snarbolax!' but my servant was more faithful to me than anyone else had ever shown. The Master. He was the only equal to my power. But now that I have him, I don't need you anymore." She turns to us, her mouth now a grotesque wide maw and her eyes twice their original size. She raises her hand, and the Swarm under us disappears, and we fall down.
We land near the Core. I feel myself change into a different being, and all the memories come back to me now...I cover myself with a quickly summoned fur that I wrap around my shoulders into a cloak, reforming it so I can wear it properly. I get one for Lily, and also make the proper adjustments. It was Ash Tail fur.
We walk to the Core, onto the platform overlooking it. Hello, dear heroes. It seems I have some explaining to do...
Thu, 04/04/2013 - 10:12
#300
Lore
White Queen, Red Queen, and a Champion.
A long time ago on Cradle, when there was nothing but the Core as a planet, and shortly before Alice's immortalization, three humans were happened onto Cradle. No one knows how they got there, they just happened. One woman was a cruel, cunning, and murderous woman, who landed with her gray dress in a pool of blood. The other woman was a kind, intelligent, and innocent woman, who landed her gray dress in a ray of sunlight, changing the dress to white. The man was a brave, courageous, and loyal man, who landed next to a tall boulder made completely from a beautiful silver ore.
The Red looked around at the barren landscape. "I will make an empire, founded on coldness, cruelity, and darkness." and soon, she had created an empire, filled with Swarmians (the Swarm in a humanoid form, who were on the planet longer than all others). She became known as the Red Queen
The White loojed at the barren land and said, "I will make a queendom, founded on kindness, good-will, and light." and she had soon created a queendom called Almire, which was filled with Almirians. (great courageous beings which seemed to materialize from the land itself.) She soon became known as the White Queen.
The Knight looked at the Ore, and said, "I will be a Knight of valiance, bravery, and righteousness." he carved a suit from the rock with his bare hands, and wore it. He fashioned a beautiful blade from it as well, and slayed the Great Snarbolax, for he had become dark at the new inhabitants. The blade the Knight weilded became known has the Vorpal Sword, for it had absorbed the great true power of the Snarbolax.
Now, the Knight had loved the White Queen, and married her. The White Queen made sure her sister did not know of the marriage, and was vague about the White King. The Red Queen soon saw it fit to merge with her sister's nation, and it all became Almire. Now, there couldn't be two Queens, so the Red became the White's lady-in-waiting. The Red soon wished for a husband, so the White Queen arranged a marriage with a powerful lord. But tricked the sister into thinking she was marrying the Knight so she would go along with it.
The Master, the embodiment of all Swarm, became a good servant to the Red, and she soon went gallivanting off with him. They had conceived a child, Vanaduke, who would be the ruler of the Kingdom. There was one problem. There were already rulers. So Vanaduke went to the mountains in his mid-age, took the fire from Vog as a promise for his soul, and returned. He spread the fire onto the land, and the Red laughed at this. The Master, however, made a present for his lover. He took the White, and locked her into the Core. She is still stuck in there now...
The Red ruled over the new firey empire until she passed. The Master was ripped apart by this, and locked himself into the Hellcore, to one day have his lover come from her grave and release him.
The White still waits for release...
I'm the leader of the chromas and I have my supplier of weapons. U must have those chapters.
WHOO, 250th post!
Edit: aww Seatus u took my 250 post spot. Oh well I'm first on sixth page.
It is on now!