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Fanfiction of a Snarbolax (The End: Chapter 43!)

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Fri, 04/05/2013 - 14:34
#301
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
BbBbBUMP

BbBbBUMP

Sun, 04/07/2013 - 09:39
#302
Mechao's picture
Mechao
Fire

I didn't understand anything except fire. That's all I need to Know. I like fire. Good for revolutions.

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 15:41
#303
Mechao's picture
Mechao
Anniversary you filthy beast

You better have a creep cake in your next chapter or I will kill everyone you hold dear.

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 16:33
#304
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
:P

Mechao, the ending of your threat is void, since I hold nothing dear.

*casually puts feet on Chromalisk as footrest and continues reading newspaper with pipe in mouth*

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 18:08
#305
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Callis-The-Wicked
Chapter 43

Good children, I'm sorry I've mislead you so. I have wanted to tell you, but if I did you would have never come to save me. You're not completely from me. None of you. Long ago, their was a planet called Earth. I was the Mother Nature there before I was the White Queen. The Red Queen was the Mother of Darkness, an anti-nature. And the Knight is the faithful follower of the winds. This 'Earth' was slowly dying, because Red had given the mortals too many ideas on Darkness, and concrete substituted life. The mortals then went to war for the last peice of land that hadn't been effected. Before the planet was consumed by the Swarm, since it was attracted to Red's darkness, I saved you five. I took you and raised you in secret when your planet was destroyed. I placed you within my heart and kept you there until the moment was right. You were heroes on your old homeworld. I kindled your heroism into a burning inferno. When I was embodied into the White Queen, you were my back-ups in case I would fall, so the dimensions would not fall into darkness, and you could make a last stand.

A creature with pech-no, a HUMAN-came from the very light of the Core, her hair bright ligh curling around her face. She touched our heads, and bodysuits of white appeared on us as she turned us to human forms. I remembered everything. Not of Earth, but Lily and I...

I throw my arms around her, and she does the same. I put my head to hers and look into her eyes. She grins and places a kiss on my nose. We are interrupted. The walls around the Core Chamber break, and Swarm reaches out in branches. I see the Red Queen stand on a branch. It extends until she is facing her sister. "Hello, Nature. You and your heroes are damned." She floats into the air and turns into a bright red silhouette. The Swarm, all of it, fills the Chamber as it goes in the Red Queen. Black Swarm Armor, Shield, and a Broadsword appear on her as the last dissipates. She swings her sword and an Eye opens on it. The Master's Eye.

I summon a thorn and glare at him. And then at her. I float up, channeling my inner strength, and point my thorn at her. A jelly sword materializes into Prince's hand. The Roarmulous Sister readies her gun. We're ready to fight.

Almost instantly, the two others are killed. A Swarm tentacle flies at me. I scream for the loss of my friends and block the Swarm. It burns as it touches my blade. More come at me from the sword, all blocked. Red attacks. She swings the sword, cutting me repeatedly until I fall to the ground. Lily runs over to me and tears fall down her face onto my cuts, healing them. Red tries bringing the sword down on Lily's head, but Lily stares up at them, and the sword screams and retracts. I am already back up now. A girl, no older than eleven, appears in front of me, her hair gold, her shield a simple floating hologram over her wrist, her Vorpal Sword in hand. "Become the Great Snarbolax, Seatus, and help us all..." she touches my chest, and Dragon Wings rip from the back of my bodysuit. Horns protrude from my head, and my tail appears, stronger. My new body extensions are white and red, that of a purified Snarbolax. I nod, and as she disappears, I fly at Red.

I swing my white and red thorn now, a d cut her. She squeals in agony as the cut shines with light, and I attack her some more. No one will harm Lily. No one. No one. I swing the blade down and knock Red to the ground. She backs away to the wall and disappears, leaving a huge gaping hole in the wall. I drop to the floor and run to Lily. I hug her close, and she cries on my shoulder. I kiss her neck, and tell her it's all right. I pull her to the ground and am cuddled to her back. I lay me head on her shoulder and whisper promise after promise that she will be safe. She will be safe. The blood of our friends drip on the walls. I cry a little too. But I continue kissing her neck, telling her they are in a better place.

When we wake up, my extensions have disappeared, and the hair on my head is back to black and red. Wait. Lily isn't in my arms. I stand up, and see her standing above the balcony of the Core, a bright light enveloping her. I run over, my eyes squinting. "Lily! Lily, careful!" She turns around, tears in her eyes. "I have to do this," she whispers, "to save everyone..." My eyes widen. "Lily, no, you don't have to do this, please listen..." she sobs some more, "They'll come back! I can't let them hurt you!" I respond, "I don't want them to hurt you!" I run at her, and try to grab her and throw her out of the way to give my life to saving Alice instead of her life. She is suddenly gone when I get there...and the light shuts instantly. "LILY!!!" I scream, "LILY!!!" I scream and scream and scream, my voice raw, but I continue throughout the cold night falling upon the Clockworks. For many levels, all could hear me. All could here me. Everyone. I screamed her name, holding myself tight. She'll come back...I know, somehow she will meet me back. I keep my eyes on the Core and stare at it, waiting for her to come out. "Lily..." I say weakly. Silence follows. I am skinny to the bone from days of not eating. I hold myself....

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 19:39
#306
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Oh my god...

And so we reach the beginning of the end. Looking forward to the end chapters.

(If I found out the ending is like that of Blood-C, I'm going to type up the next chapter of Dominance in rage.)

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 19:39
#307
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Feline-Grenadier
Oh my god...

And so we reach the beginning of the end. Looking forward to the end chapters.

(If I found out the ending is like that of Blood-C, I'm going to type up the next chapter of Dominance in rage.)

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 21:37
#308
Cobalterian's picture
Cobalterian
Woo!

Lily is gone, so Seatus has no babies...... :(

Because for Wolvers, it's the other way around. Male give birth to babies...... :D

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 21:47
#309
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
OF COURSE

So I'm preggo? NO!

Tue, 04/09/2013 - 13:32
#310
Mechao's picture
Mechao
WHAT!?!?

WHAT!?!? NO CREEP CAKES!?!? Then again, you said my threat was void... Lets just pretend this conversation never happened.

Tue, 04/09/2013 - 18:30
#311
Cobalterian's picture
Cobalterian
/laugh

/laugh Mechao You know what happens when a party of knights, or even ONE knight, leaves a Mecha alone in the gloaming wildwoods? /bye bye

Thu, 04/11/2013 - 05:18
#312
Mechao's picture
Mechao
Hehehe...

But that can't happen when you rebel and kill the party, steal their suit, then use their energy to go to some dark room where a group of knights are listening to a snarbolax tell a story about his life. Ignore the bloody sword strapped to my back.

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 14:28
#313
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Callis-The-Wicked
O.o

I am actually writing this at a very fine desk. The Spiral Order promoted me to Vanguard once they heard my tale of power, and wanted me to write it down in their archives...

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 14:52
#314
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Chapter 44

My Immortal...

A light opens from the Core. I am instantly awakened. I am too weak to hold my head as I lie flat and stare at the ceiling. Could this be final death? A final reassurance that I can be with Lily? And then a face enters my vision. A woman with golden hair. She looks like me, a human. She reaches out and pulls me up by my hand, and suddenly my health is restored. Dear Seatus, I never wanted you to be so sad. Lily is suddenly there, holding my chest and burying her face in it. I hold her close, not caring how or why she was here, only that I could hold her.

Ahem. says the lady Yes, I'm still here. Seatus, you don't have long with Lily. I must take her within me as we head back into the Core soon. I look at her. "Why? Why can't she stay?!" I look down to Lily. "Why can't you stay?!" tears brim in my eyes.

I am so sorry Seatus. This is how it's meant to be. I am part of Alice now. Her wings flutter. Wings? As much as I enjoy your reunion, we need something from you. Your devotion. If we can get that, then, even if it may take awhile, Lily can return to you. There is a way the Gods hid from me, out of deception. If you will forever serve me, I will be your new source of intelligence, feeding you information when you need it. I must give you something else. She opens her hand, and a light appears before my eyes. Immortality. You will both be immortals, as long as nothing kills you. You can't die from natural causes, is what I'm saying. You can still be killed by anyone with bad intentions. We must go. I hope you will save us all, Seatus. I hug Lily until she finally pushes away. She looks up into my eyes. I love you. She whispers, and we kiss. She pulls away, and walks toward the balcony. I call out, "Lily!" she turns, "I love you too!"

She smiles, and blows a kiss goodbye as tears fall down her face.

And then she's gone.

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 18:13
#315
Mechao's picture
Mechao
Ummm...

Well... I guess that I should get rid if the evidence... Nobody go near biscotti's cake. It might... Smell funny. Yeah smell funny.

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 18:59
#316
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Now, a little help.....

The events of The Fangs RP and Return to Cradle RP occured after this. If you want some Lore help, go there and read them. They are very interesting if you ever wondered what happened to Anubis, the Knight of Snarbolaxes. And go to Finders Keepers to learn about a guy name Equinox, a fairly handsome Stranger, with a strange past. And soon, we will talk about the son of a witch, Diyu. Prepare for more fanfictions everyone!

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 19:44
#317
Aekuryi's picture
Aekuryi
*raises hand*

But you edited out all your posts in RtC :U

And great ending :D You wrapped everything up quicker than I would like, but it was good nonetheless.

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 19:55
#318
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
XD

XD

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 22:23
#319
Cobalterian's picture
Cobalterian
Nooo!

This is how it ends? The final epic chapter? Me, your fan that read your fan-fiction from start to bottom, who encouraged you, is now anegered, from the lack of chapters, and romance!

YOU WILL RUE THE DAY YOU ENDED THIS CHAPTER! *Raises fist*

Thu, 04/11/2013 - 05:19
#320
Mechao's picture
Mechao
Wha...

Wait? It's ending? How did I miss this?

Sat, 04/13/2013 - 10:04
#321
Shotjeer's picture
Shotjeer
Question from dead guy

Will
There
be
a
sequel?
Yes?
Good.

Sat, 04/13/2013 - 23:40
#322
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
.-.

*does Patrick Moving Bikini Bottom meme*
Let's take this thread.

And push it into a pit.

Sun, 04/14/2013 - 14:46
#323
Snowdusk's picture
Snowdusk

I didn't read much from this story, but I can tell – and feel it in my guts – that this story was a great journey. You really have a lot of potential, Seatus. If you can harness it further, hopefully you will strive as a great writer.

Thank you for writing this! For now, we'll always keep this thread in our hearts.

Sun, 04/14/2013 - 14:47
#324
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
:o

Thank you! *hands over Chromalisk*

Sun, 04/14/2013 - 15:02
#325
Snowdusk's picture
Snowdusk
:)

Welcome! *pets Chromalisk*

Sun, 04/14/2013 - 15:46
#326
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
/has been reading in

/has been reading in secret

T'was amazing! But why'd you move it to the Graveyard? What about future readers who want to catch up on your works?

Sun, 04/14/2013 - 16:01
#327
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Fear not!

That's why this shadow copy is hear ;P

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 16:17
#328
Hyiaku's picture
Hyiaku
My favorite fanfic... ended.....

My favorite fanfic ended for a long time.... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:( why!!!!!

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 17:13
#329
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
...

Hop on either to RtC or Dominance.

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 13:20
#330
Mechao's picture
Mechao
Hehehe...

Well now that the story is over I can get on to my plan to turn cradle into a sizzling crater...I mean help some orphans.

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 13:45
#331
Shotjeer's picture
Shotjeer
durr

y u stil comment on graveyarded thread?

No offense Seatus, but I kinda got lost at the end.

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