I think that would be farfetched...plus I doubt they would meet the qualifications Alice does. *sips tea as Mr. Mooplestein explodes in the distance.*
Finder's Keepers [discussion thread]
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 08:26
#252
Mmmh
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 08:43
#253
EDIIT!
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Wipes monocle, places on kat*
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 08:59
#254
@Seatus & Lim
*puffs pipe thoughtfully* The way the Finder works now, Alice will not be emotionless. Her mind will be dominated by another, and while she will still have conflicts with the Master's mind, she will always do his bidding. I was considering writing a bit about the Finder's own struggles, but we're not yet in a position for it. The original person behind the Finder (who shall be unnamed for our other readers) has, actually, had some development, but I have not found a good place to write it down.
@Seatus: *puts down pipe and sips tea* The sacrifice of Raechal would be more useful, since it will 1) give something motivating for Topo to fight for, 2) allow her author (KoV, I believe?) to have someone else to play with (Topo) while Rae is gone, and 3) establish the villainy of the Master much more concretely, seeing as he is mistreating a 12-year-old girl.
*sips tea again* Do you agree, Seatus?
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:05
#255
*sits down at table* Just to
*sits down at table* Just to clarify, do we still need your approval to post on the story thread? Or can I go ahead and post my addition? *Noms on biscuit*
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:18
#256
...
Can anyone tell me where the Finder is now, so Zero can stumble into her and their little sadistic-love relationship can get started?
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:19
#257
she's currently going to
she's currently going to Almire, she's probably at the beginning of the woods that surround it.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:21
#258
@Gzilla
You need *everyone's* permission, really. Mine first, yes, because I want to be able to make sure the story moves along properly. Everyone has a stake in that. Also, while power playing is the fastest way to move a story, it often steps on other people's characters in an uncomfortable way, so posting to the discussion thread should iron out any problems that stem from such a maneuver. Only when all interested parties are satisfied should you post to the story thread.
Thanks for asking.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:25
#259
@Kaijuhunter
Gzilla is correct. The Finder is racing to Almire for a last-minute showdown with the main characters to make the "home stretch" more dramatic. She will inflict major injuries to several characters, if she doesn't outright kill them off. She is untouchable by the 3* weapons they have, and their 3* armor is useless against the Finder's attacks, so the race to safety will be pretty desperate.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:27
#260
Not to mention they have to
Not to mention they have to deal with Zero and Syphon too. But should I have Axis reach them, right before the Finder along with the other villains intercept them?
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 09:40
#261
@Gzilla
Sure, provided it doesn't prevent the Showdown from occurring.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 17:03
#262
Walks over to. . . .
Walks over to TV, Puts in Wreck it Ralph, sits down at table again* "-Turbo-Tastic!"
Even if Alice did become the new finder, I wouldn't know what to post. Takes a swig of Mountain Jelly*
(So, let's just keep posting like this, because it's a lot more interesting than just typical post after typical post.)
(Also, Here's a set of armor that I would want in-game, or even at least on this forum)
(Weapon to go with it too.)
(and, a piece of armor that was in the wrong place. ARMOOOR
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 14:29
#263
@Liminori
The armor link is broken.
With Alice as the Finder, just make her a reluctant villain. All the Finders act sadistically, whether they like it or not.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 15:52
#264
MMMH
*slides the plate with biscuits toward Gzilla* It would be a good idea, in my opinion. Were you planning to use Raechal to show the side of the Finder more? It's all a really good idea. *adds a tiny Royal Jelly Cube to cup and stirs tea*
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 17:06
#265
Link's fixed!
BLAHDEBLAH, BLAHDEBLAH, BLAA DAA DA DAA DA DUUU DU DU DUDUU DUUU DU DUU DUN U DUU
Down Right Up, Down Right Up! Song of storms. . . .
I fixed the "Link"? No? daww. . .
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 22:47
#266
Indeed
*splashes hot tea in Liminori's face* Control your typing.
Sat, 03/30/2013 - 23:15
#267
Proposal
Axis
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I looked out in dismay, shots were tearing up the surrounding tree line, it looked like someone had called in an air raid. I looked out 2 different groups of channelers were branched out. Not to mention one heck of a bright light...wait was that a person? I didn't waste a moment's notice, "MOVE HERE!" I shouted desperately. They approached, the second they reached me a girls suddenly asked me "Can we even trust you?" I cracked a smile, "Even if I was your enemy you would prefer me over them, I pointed to the incoming figures one was rushing in on foot, another was dashing through on a hover bike, and the last, was gliding in on midnight black wings, The Finder had finally arrived at Almire. "MOVE, MOVE, MOVE!" I shouted in a frenzy. "Vog help us all." I thought to myself. We sprinted to the front gates, Shots rang through the night, explosions echoed off our backs, screams of pure evil resonated behind us, it was like running through Hell. A giant explosion quaked beneath our feet. I was sent sky high along with the others. I hit the ground. hard. When I looked up the three individuals were smiling, it sent chills down my spine. "So what do we have here?" I recognized the vile voice of The Finder immediately. I noticed the strangers glow had finally been snuffed out. I sighed, this wasn't good, if we could escape a few meters farther Almire's defense systems would protect us. "Tch, I don't even know why Vanaduke would send such an amateur to collect these ingrates." the hunter in the skelly armor said. The other stranger just grinned, "Looks like my kill streak will be back on after this." he said, it sent a shiver down my spine. We needed to get out, but how?
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Syphon
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I rushed through the forest, I could already hear Zero's gunshots ringing throughout the forest, he must've caught up to the group we had been pursuing earlier. I looked, then grinned, Zero had found two groups one had some channelers and a gremlin, the other had even more channelers with a stranger. I grinned Zero could have his kills, all I wanted was the pure energy from all of them. i heard a rush of wings and saw The Finder pelt the groups with a hellstorm of bullets and explosions. I grinned in satisfaction there was no way they were even stepping close to Almire's borders. I zoomed closer and got within shouting distance of Zero. "Made quick work of my men did you?" I yelled to him. "THe next time you try and assassinate me, get better hunters." he said arrogantly. I shrugged and zoomed ahead, pulling out a few graviton bombs. I let them fly, they proceeded to wreck escape paths the channelers could have used. I then proceeded to whip out my alchemer I landed a few hits on the stranger, but he seemed to shrug them off I had seen this before, Channelers could enter a state of pure adrenaline where they couldn't fell pain and pushed their normal limits, it wouldn't last long. I shot a few more rounds until THe Finder screamed "ENOUGH!" and like that the ground under the channelers exploded with devastating magnitude. THey crashed down second later, by then it was too late we had caught up. "What do we have here?" The Finder purred. I noticed an Almarian crest on one of them. "Tch I don't even know why Vanaduke sent such amateurs to collect these ingrates." "Looks like my kill streak will be on after this." Zero said with Sadistic glee. I grinned, "I'll be eating good tonight."
I could use some feedback now, want to post this to get the story moving.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 00:29
#268
One thing,
IDK if Seatus should be able to pull all of that off, I mean going into a hyper mode, then shooting out curse arrows? IDK it just seems a bit like a power play to me, but it's just me.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 00:52
#269
Mmmmh
You make them sound OP, but it's honestly a weak attempt at a Curse, hence them only being smoke. EDIT: Oh and them being smoke, the Hunters could probably wait a whole minute for it to get their before sidestepping it. If you didn't notice yet, Equinox is already out of breath.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 00:53
#270
alright, now with your
alright, now with your character there the Almarian guard should catch on that Axis is having trouble with retrieving the channelers, for got to take into account his current stress level.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 01:26
#271
Well
If Raechal IS the new finder, I get to control her....... Well, at least the mind control part, right? If so, I'll give it a try.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 01:49
#272
Go ahead!
We'll have to retcon a bit, but that can be arranged.
Alice was kidnapped, but is currently being held in the prison. In the chaos near the Almirian border, Raechal went missing; it turns out that the Finder's henchmen had kidnapped her. Then the Master removed her brain and spinal column and inserted them into a mechanical body. After implanting a control crystal, Raechal became the new Finder, replacing "Vera."
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 03:09
#273
Hey Thin...
Thinslayer: Do you mind sending me the forum post (in either Word or Notepad format) of Auger? I'm not really inclined to read through all of Auger's chapter, and then searching for his thoughts (since if I copy-paste them, the thoughts wont be italicized. Therefore, I need to type in the <.em> code for each thought). Just a request though, if it's alright with you (all you need to do is copy-paste it anyway XD). If it's not alright for some reason, just say so and I'll get started on the proof-reading and correcting.
You can send them to me through Skype. I'll send you my username through Spiral Knights. That is, if you are going to send it.
I also appear to be left behind XP. Sorry about that, I'll catch up in time, but for now, feel free to use my character if it's necessary. By the way... Has the band of Channelers reached the border already? Seems a bit quick...
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 06:24
#274
Wait.....
Did you say that Zero wore skelly armor? If so, sorry, he wears a black Assassin Cloak, a recolor of the Chaos set... Oh well.
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Proposal
Zero
A frown started to grow on my face. "Syphon," i hissed angrily as his form began to appear on the horizon. The Hunter yelled at me, "Made quick work of my men, did you?" Baring my teeth, i replied, "Next time you try to assassinate me, send better men." Syphon grinned and whipped out a patch of Graviton bombs, wrecking the Channeler's escape routes. He continued to bombard the Channelers until the Finder -why the hell did she look different?- caused the ground to start crumbling. Amateur. With catlike grace, i leaped from one piece of falling debris to another and finally reached the Channelers. The Finder and Syphon quickly followed. We inspected the band of weaklings as they glared defiantly at us.
The Finder looked at the Channelers curiously, "What do we have here?"
Syphon sneered, "Tch, I don't even know why Vanaduke would send an amateur to collect THESE ingrates..."
I blew the smoke away from my Antigua's nozzle and tossed a bomb up and down in my hand absentmindedly. "Looks like my kill streak will be back on after this."
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I smirked at the frightened Channelers as my gun blasted warning shots into the air. I laughed, licking my lips threateningly. I turned to the new Finder and Syphon as they stepped forward and held out my hand to block them. "No... These are MY kills. I'm the one who got here first, I deserve the right to kill them." Whipping out my Nightblade, i ran my finger down the demon blade's razor sharp edge and grinned.
"After all, finders keepers, losers weepers, right?"
Suddenly, a blast of ice is upon me, and I am encased in the cold, frozen water. One idiot threw a knife at my frigid prison. Ok then. Now I REALLY wanted to kill these guys. I wasn't about to be stopped by a blob of ice; after all, I destroyed an entire Channeler base once before, wouldn't it be humiliating if i lost to just a few of them. I tensed my muscles and thrashes as hardnas i could- although the ice made it look like i was only squirming. Finally, i broke through the barrier and blasted Syphon and the Finder out as well. Turning back to the Channelers, i cracked my knuckles and uttered a guttural growl that would frighten the Snarbolax itself.
"You... Are... All... Going... To... Die......"
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I think Zero will attack... AUGER FIRST!
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 09:27
#275
Character list -
Deleted in other forum*
Aah. . . . spiral knights is depressing. I'm no good at Coliseum games, nor am I any good at staying alive, Nor will I ever get a bombhead mask.
AND I easily P!ss off a good amount of people in the forums! I'm altogether BAD AT SPIRAL KNIGHTS!
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 09:41
#276
Well...
If you'd actually work with us on this one, then maybe nobody would've been pissed.
You go off and post things without anybody else knowing, so how do you expect to have people work with you? At least tell us what you're going to do. :L
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 10:32
#277
Some comments
@Azure-Orbit: I'll see what I can do. I'll be busy for most of today with church, visits, and The Hobbit, so it might be faster to have another forum-goer try to do it, but if you're willing to wait, I'll gladly handle it myself.
Re: catching up on the story, the characters have reached Almire and are almost entering the Al'Goth stronghold. The Finder and her minions have caught up with our heroes and is attacking them.
She has just spared Topo's life for unknown reasons. What makes this unique is that she is in monster form when it happens. If she were in human form, I would readily assign ulterior motives, but this is not the case.
Yes, their arrival is quick, but it is only the beginning of their trials.
@Kaiji: I don't know what Zero wears, but I always imagined him to be a ruggedly handsome villain who wears a cloak and hood. I mean, who else but a good-looking guy would have his kind of attitude? :P
@Lim: I've decided that the Master will hand Alice over to the people to punish her. It won't be pretty unless she is rescued.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 10:43
#278
Actually...
@thin; I somewhat based Zero off of Ezio Auditore from the second Assassin's Creed. You'll see the similarity in their stories soon enough. Zero's just like Ezio, only more serious, and with more sadistic intentions for his victims.
So, if you didn't see my last post, Zero wears a pure black version of the Chaos Set. Well, since he's still 3*, his cloak is a black recolor of the Elemental set, with an X replacing the crescent marks.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 10:46
#279
Kaiju I was saying Syphon's
Kaiju I was saying Syphon's wearing the scary skelly armor. Alright if Zero's taking down Auger, I think Syhon's going for Isis' since she's probably the 3rd strongest, and vael's going to be reserved for The Finder right?
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 17:48
#280
*Iris
((D'aaaw, I expected some camping and small intermission with characters along the trip to Almire!))
"MOVE HERE!" a voice shouted desperately, the group then made their way towards wherever that voice might came from. They were in never safe after all, "Better safe then sorry ((L4D anyone?))" Iris thought to herself as she rushed to the person calling them. It was a man, an Almirian to be exact if one was to observe it at a glance. "Can we trust you?" Iris asked him. The man broke into a smile and answered her, "Even if I was your enemy you would prefer me over them," he pointed at the incoming figure. There was two, one running on foot and the other on a hover bike. "Smart man," Iris chuckled and turned back to the group, they all kept on running away from the invaders until they've reached Almire at last.
"MOVE, MOVE, MOVE!" the man shouted in a frenzy, the group sprinted to the gate while the invaders were closing in. Iris was too afraid to look back, she could hear horrifying screams from her back and the sounds of firearms desperately trying to kill them. She looked down for a moment and there was an explosion which quaked beneath the group's feet, Iris and the others was sent flying to the air until they landed back on the ground, painfully.
"So what do we have here?" an eerie voice cackled. "This isn't good..." Iris groaned as she rubbed her forehead, she tried to run towards the gate which isn't far away at all but something didn't allowed her to- it was fear."Tch, I don't even know why Vanaduke would send such an amateur to collect these ingrates," a hunter spoke, Iris could quickly notice that it was the hunter with the hover bike that had chased them away. "Looks like my kill streak will be back on after this," he continued with a sadistic grin, I'll be eating good tonight,"
The hunter smirked and send a shot through the air with his gun, he turned to the other attackers and blocked them away from the Channelers. "No... These are MY kills. I'm the one who got here first, I deserve the right to kill them," he took out his nightblade and ran his fingers down his demonic blade.
"After all, finders keepers, losers weepers, right?"
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Without wasting time, Iris launched a weak Ice attack which is enough to freeze anything in its place. "I'm holding back... Because I want to see you in pieces, I don't want my new lab rat to be crushed into nothingness.." she thought to herself with a grin, hoping that it would reassure her from surviving this fight. Iris turned to Auger who had already taken the advantage of the Hunter's immobility, he threw his elemental knife at him. "That would hurt..." Iris bit her lip as she tried to not look at the Hunter, the enemy was getting angry at this, he tried to trash out of the ice which encased him but to no avail. He finally was able to break the barrier and blasted few of the Channelers in the process, alongside the other two attackers.
The hunter returned his attention at the Channelers, he cracked his knuckles and let out a guttural growl that might even scare the mightiest beast. "You... Are... All... Going... To... Die......"
"This is not time to be afraid... I must win... And do my experiments..." Iris reassured herself after the scary experience she felt from the Hunter. She spread the palm of her hand and placed it on the ground, creating a huge Ice pillar which is strong enough to encase the most powerful creatures, attempting to encase the angry Hunter in it.
"Make a run for it!" Iris shouted as she turned back to the rest of the group, "I'll hold them off! We don't need any more unnecessary loss tonight!" she continued as she created an Ice barrier right in front of her. "Run for it!"
((Durp, haven't been posting much lately...))
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Sun, 03/31/2013 - 17:57
#281
...
Zero
I smirked as the Ice Channeler yelled, "Make a run for it!" and gave chase. I was closing in when an enormous ice pillar sprouted out of the ground right in front of me. Taking the opportunity, i leaped on top of it and watched from my vantage point as the Channeler created an ice wall. [Why make a pillar that's taller than your wall?] I asked myself quizically and sighed. I kicked off of my perch and ran down the ice wall. I hit the ground right behind the Channelers and grinned. As they tried to wrap their minds around the fact that their diversion was useless, i started sprinting after them. Nothing could stop me from killing them. Nothing.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 18:18
#282
White is cold...
"eh...?" Iris gasped as she watched the Hunter using her attack as an advantage, "No... My... Calculations are always correct..." she whispered to herself in regret. The Hunter then jumped off the top of the pillar and landed on the back of the Channelers, he started sprinting towards them but Iris had something else in mind.
"My..." Iris growled and placed her hand on the ground again, summoning another Ice pillar she attempted to use to freeze the Hunter in place. "Calculations..." she continued and continued summoning even more Ice pillars, "Are always..." she took a deep breath and charged her next attack. The moment the Hunter reached the group Iris opened her eyes and let out a scream, "CORRECT!" she placed the palm of her hand on the ground once more, creating white runes on the ground which was able to blast the Hunter away from the group.
A creature appeared from the place where Iris created the rune, a great beast with cold white eyes, frosty fur exchanging it's black fur, Icicle replacing it's dark thorns. "Hear my words O mighty beast! Rain down the fury of frost and chill the enemy to their bones! Do it Snarby!" Iris commanded her Ice Snarbolax, her face showed a satisfied smile which quickly broke into grimace, she fell to her knees panting heavily. "I... Used up too many... Tired..." Iris thought to herself as she began to lose consciousness."No... Must... Not..." with that, she blacked out, leaving her conjured Snarbolax left to protect her.
((Don't worry, this isn't the real Snarbolax, just an ice version Iris made- meaning that it is weaker than the real one...))
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 18:18
#283
Waking
I sit up from a bed, finding needles and wires in me right when the doctor is pulling them out. "What are you doing here?" I whisper. "Get the soldiers out there, some Channeler group is defenseless against a squadron of hunters. Go, now!" he looks at me, adjusts his glasses, and runs down the hall and out of the room. I feel like my power is restored. I pull the rest of the needles and wires out and put my armor on instead of the ridiculous hospital gown. I walk down the hall, up the stairs, and out into the night air.
I stare down at the mess happening down below, a soft breeze ruffling my broad hat. My Snipes are missing from my shoulders, yet I feel as strong as ever. I jump off the side of the fortress structure, jumping off Sigils before landing softly on the ground. I walk over to the gathering. A hunter, frozen in my direction, shoots at me. I sidestep his ill-aimed shots, only one catching my shoulder. I walk up into his face with such a malicious stare, the gun sticking me in the stomach, that he trembles and drops his Super Blaster. I look down at it, and back at him. The rest of the Hunters can only glance in my direction. When they are alone, they are EVER so weak.
I turn and look at the Finder and another Hunter, who could try to kill me at any moment. I walk over, right in front of the Finder, and give her my coldest stare. "You." I whisper. "You are the most ridiculous of them yet. You used to have it all. You had everything. You still have, a CHOICE!" I push against her, even though I might as well push a brick wall. "You still have a choice," I mutter weakly, "you could still join that wonderful light I saw that day..." I wipe some mist from my eyes. Who. Cares. If she tries to kill me so be it! "But if you kill me," I turn my head in her direction. "If you stain your hands with my blood, anything that ever mattered to you will be forgotten. Every soft memory. It might even be salvation to you...but hurt is what drives us. Pain is what makes us alive." I turn completely now to face her, tears in my eyes as I croak. "Sadness makes our hearts beat, damn it!" I look to the Hunter beside her, and grin sadisticly.
"You know this smile? It's the smile you see in the eyes of your victims." I walk briskly over, face to face with him, grabbing the hand he is holding his weapon with, and pull the weapon so it's tip is against my stomach.
"Try it. But as long as my heart beats, I'm practically titanium." I continue my grin, and my Snipes settle on my shoulders, dropping a Swift Flourish by my feet. I pick it up and their eyes glow red.
No, son! What is this?! Why?! YOU ARE NOT ONE OF THEM!
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 18:48
#284
Axis
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I looked in
Axis
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I looked in horror, The Hunter called Zero was closing in, fast. The stranger had been lucky enough to be blasted behind Almire's walls. THe girl that had questioned me earlier summoned an ice wall I heard her yelling "Run for it!" and like that we were off. Zero slid off the wall easily. THe way he dogged us down reminded me why these guys were called hunters, never losing their prey. I looked left the gremlin seemed to be the first target the hunter seemed to be targeting him. I called in Tactus, the head of the Almarian guard on my com unit. "We're having some problems here, we need the defense systems up, NOW!" "Yeah, we saw you should be clear in the next meters, but for now the defense systems might not be very accurate from this distance." "DO IT!" I yelled. A rumble sounded, several wheel spike generators had been unveiled. "EVASIVE MANEUVERS!" I screamed frantically. Wheels tumbled down, it would be harder for the enemy to catch us now, but it also toughened our sprint to Almire. I looked back and shot a pillar of flame at the Hunter closing in. He caught the brunt of it with his sword, but some fire hit his armor. This was the final stretch.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 18:50
#285
ALERTALERTALERT
Plothole detected!
Amarynth was the one who froze Zero, Syphon, and the Finder, albeit for a short amount of time.
However, if you like, you can have Iris' attacks supplement Amarynth's.
Make sure to check the Roleplay thread before posting here, so things like this don't happen ^^
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 20:13
#286
Dr.Durp
ah sorry about that, I'll make sure I'll edit it when I can!
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 20:26
#287
Mmmmh
*withdraws silver lid from plate, revealing Roast Beast. Pours water in everyones' cups while walking around the table, stopping behind each person's chair.* So, Equinox's boldness? He is a very, VERY passionate character. And I do applaud your employment of Amarynth's gift of Ice, Aekuryi. Very enjoyable. I can't wait for Kaijuhunter's and Thinslayer's responses. I'm sure this Roleplay is just getting started. *finishes pouring water for everyone and stand two feet away from table, like the daemonic butler I so am.*
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 20:27
#288
BLACK BUTLER!
SEATUS IS SEBASTIAN FROM BLACK BUTLER!
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 20:43
#289
:D
'bout time you noticed! :D
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 22:18
#290
I have to suicide yet again...
Because it seems that posting excessively and partially power-playing (in case you guys didn't notice, controlling the slightest movements of another character = power-playing. I look at this rule very strictly) seems to be the requirement here, as well as the majority of the players sometimes completely ignoring each other's actions, I am making Lyra a DEAD CHARACTER, and I am quitting another one of Thin's RPs. I cannot be hyperactive on this forum all the time, so I'm leaving to be flexible with my own fanfict.
She poofs into ashes. Boom, saved a lot of trouble of over-dramatizing a girl that only 4 or 5 of the 10+ characters just met. :D
Tip in the future: If you guys are still denying that you're power-playing about every 5 posts, then good luck on other sites. Also, next time, try not to make your character insanely hard to kill. The Channelers are already weighed against by the Finder, so having those Hunters dodge every attack and their mom completely regardless of Thin's attack suggestions doesn't seem fair at all. If anything, it should be the Channelers giving the Hunters a hard time, otherwise there would be next to no conflict in the story at all.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 22:36
#291
.-.
*takes Vinnydime's plate and water along with utensils and does dishes while talking*
Well, Vin. That's just fine. No harm done. Yes, some of us are powerplaying. I simply use it to get the roleplay off it's cold feet. Seriously guys, if your hearts aren't in it, just leave now. I vote Thin invokes any other situation powerplays to ensure this thread keeps moving. Unless, of course, he feel it's death necessary for a better roleplaying future.
*hands dishes to Chromalisk to somehow put the dishes away with it's tongue. Walks over to Vinnydime's empty chair and throws it out from the backyard patio*
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 22:43
#292
Posted to the story thread!
Beginning of proposal
As I drew my barbarous blade to slay the channeler, my mind was freed for a few precious, fleeting moments. I questioned my purpose, and could find no reason to thrust the sword into his neck.
Then words that came not from my heart were uttered from my tongue: "You see? Your sister will turn into a Finder, just like me if you don't save her." What?? No!
Then I was kicked in the gut, and I instinctively retaliated, and sent a young woman flying. The Master regained control of me, and I fled back to base. I skidded to a stop in front of a young human male. I know that man, and so does Master. The man gave me an uncomfortably cold stare, and whispered, "You." Master was unmoved, but I was scared, and shuffled backwards. He walked up to me, saying, "You are the most ridiculous of them yet. You used to have it all. You had everything. You still have; a CHOICE!!" He pushed against me, but Master stood firm. "You still have a choice," he muttered weakly. "You could still join that wonderful light I saw that day." He wiped his eyes. "But if you kill me, if you stain your hands with my blood, anything that ever mattered to you will be forgotten. Every soft memory. It might even be your salvation. But pain is what drives us. Pain is what makes us alive." Don't make me kill him Master, I beg you!
"Sadness makes our hearts beat, darn it!" the man said, looking at my fellow Hunter. He gave us a very creepy grin. "You know this smile? It's the smile you see in the eyes of your victims." I don't recognize the smile; fear is what I see in their eyes. I've learned to desensitize myself to the pain it causes me. He walks up to the hunter, gets in his face, and pulls the hunter's own blade to his stomach. "Try it. But as long as my heart beats, I'm practically titanium."
Master is intrigued, and causes us to retreat. With what little willpower I can summon, Diyu hears inside his mind:
Find me in the Forest by the red stream tomorrow at midnight.
End of proposal
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 22:48
#293
@Vinnydime
Part of the problem is that no one is using the discussion thread like it's supposed to be used. We're not supposed to post to the Story Thread until powerplaying has been ironed out. As long as the involved characters don't mind the powerplay, I consider it okay. If they mind, they need to say so in this thread.
Let's make it clear, though: this is not the story thread. The stories aren't made official until they are posted to the story thread. So feel free to critique them here until they are posted.
In short, no need to suicide Lyra. Your objections were supposedly addressed by the presence of this thread.
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 22:54
#294
Err Thin...
It's not Diyu, it's Equinox...get your RPs straight XD Oh and when he said its the smile he sees in the eyes of his victims, you didn't add the part of it being his own smile, reflected in the eyes of his victims...probably my fault for not making it clear XD
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 23:01
#295
Thx Seatus
Thanks, Seatus. I shall make the required corrections.
That's what this thread is for. ;)
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 23:11
#296
...
Supposedly...
Considering we have many of the players from RtC coming here, doing the same thing they've been doing...
Sun, 03/31/2013 - 23:16
#297
:O
I have done nothing wrong. Equinox is receiving memories subconciously from me, whom is locked in a dimension....
Mon, 04/01/2013 - 08:10
#298
Sorry about that
It seemed a little unclear as to how to use the Roleplay thread, so I assumed I should just post in that instead of putting stuff here. And yes, I admit a little to powerplaying ;_;
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 14:50
#299
My. . . Final? proposal.
"Are you ready to be killed by the townsfolk?" Dagoon looked up and replied "Well, considering what I know about this place, I don't have a choice."
"off we go, to the town!" the man replied. Dagoon kept a 2 feet distance from the "Executioner" but didn't try to run away, considering it was rather foolish. she could already hear the men and women yelling "Witch! You never should have existed! All of you have been a disgrace to at least one family!"
But it seems that they had something else in mind for the channelers.
She walked into an arena with another channeler waiting for her. The match was about to start, but then. . . The channelers were hit with poisonous darts.
Edit: Re- Bumping this for the convenience of Thinslayer
Fri, 04/05/2013 - 23:58
#300
Equinox
It was deep in the night, yet the Forest of the Dead retained an ominous glow. The blood river slightly illuminated as well. I see the Finder at the rock. I walk over to her, and tap her on the shoulder. I duck casually as she turns and swings her claw. I stand straight. "Hello..." I say awkwardly, "I need to get into my true form if we're to talk properly." I transform into a half dark, half light character, with black eyes and half grin on the light side, and white eyes and half grin on the other. My voice materializes from the air around me.
You still had a choice. Even when he forced you to awake again you still had a choice. I know who you are. I know the things you've done. And I know what You are capable of doing. I'm Zen, Equinox's forgotten self. Pleased to meet your aquaintance, Gwenyvier.
Transforms into Alice, and picks up Mr.Mooplestein's monocle*
"I would agree, but there's also thee option of having the master finding a channeler and possesing Him/Her."
Pets tamed kat*
Possess her kinda like I did with equinox in RtC, but the master has more control than Alice?