((Just so you know, I was planning out this scene differently. This proposal combines my vision of it with your proposal:))
It was deep in the night, yet the Forest of the Dead retained an ominous glow. The blood river slightly illuminated as well. I see the Finder (in her blackened, monstrous form) by the river, and I duck behind a rock. I peek out; she is still staring at the river. She turns her head, and I duck back behind the rock. When I peek out again, she is looking straight at me, but doesn't attack. I duck back for a bit, and peek out one more time. She is still looking at me, and shuffles up to me.
I get out from behind the rock and approach her. "Hello..." I say awkwardly. She gurgles and squeaks in response. "I need to get into my true form if we are to talk properly." I transform into a half dark, half light character, with black eyes and half grin on the light side, and white eyes and half grin on the other. My voice materializes from the air around me.
You still had a choice. Even when he forced you to awake again you still had a choice. I know who you are. I know the things you've done. And I know what You are capable of doing. I'm Zen, Equinox's forgotten self. Pleased to make your aquaintance...
...Gwenyvier.
She bows her head upon hearing the name, then shuffles back to the river edge and bids me look into it. I see my reflection in the blood. When I look back at her, she has written something in the dirt:
H-E-L-P
((The period from Midnight to 5am is the only time her mind is not controlled by the Master. She is relatively sane during this time. I say relatively, because her experiences have left her mind scarred and traumatized.))
*puts on hat
Well everyone, I'll be gone for the whole week, and wont be back until next Friday (yes, I know I haven't posted much anyway XP). I'm not sure if there will be internet connection where I'll be at, but if there is I'll notify you guys. I was waiting on Thinslayer to send me the entirety of Auger's IC before I continued writing, but I wont be pointing fingers. The main reason I couldn't write was a mix of busy-ness, sickness, and laziness (with the last one being the most prominent XD).
When I get back, I'll catch up as fast as I can. My mind will be clear for writing once I've completed this week-long obligation :).
*Walks out front door