Name: Creep No go. The name carries a bad connotation.
Appearance: A shadow version of a Vanguard wearing the Divine Set No go. First off, I'm asking for what your character's face and body look like, not what armor he wears. Secondly, Spiral Order ranks are only granted to Knights who are 10+ years old. Also, have him wear a Chaos set, since a "shadow Divine" set is a contradiction.
Gender: Male Check!
Age: Unknown No go. I need to know his age.
Eye color: Black No go. Swarm-infested agents have purple eyes.
Skin color: Pitch Black Check!
Height: 3'1 No go. 10-year-olds are about 5 feet tall.
Weight: 1 stone No go. Use English or metric units, please.
Attire: Full Infernal Guardian set Check!
Arsenal: Divine Swarm Helm and Divine Swarm Armor No go. See the note on "Appearance."
Personality: Creep is usually quiet and can detect when someone is nearby, Prefers to sneak up behind an enemy to finish them off when using shadow cloak, Can also spot traps very far away No go. I've read some of your work, and I'm pretty certain that Creep has more character traits than you've described here. If you'd like to keep his personality secret, or if you haven't decided yet, please say so.
Biography: Creep was born in Emberlight and started to learn the hazards the world would bring. His parents died when Creep was 5 and got basically nothing from the funeral. When Creep was 10, he started to explore and when he reached depth 23, the swarm started to pull Creep into a shadow lair and since Creep never had any good weapons, he couldn't stop the swarm to kill him. When the swarm brought him to the unknown passage, the swarm turned Creep into a shadow version of a Knight wearing the Divine set. His age also got scrambled and basically destroyed everything he had. The reason why the swarm never killed Creep was the fact they needed a swarm agent on the surface to slowly corrupt the planet. Unfortunally, when Creep leaves the swarm, he gets Strong Curse which really ruins the majority of his attacks and usually restorts to the shadow cloak to survive. There is now a stalker who is craving for some swarm blood who heard just leave the passage and is now after Creep No go. I don't understand the biography. Knights aren't born in Emberlight, and if Creep is supposed to be a gremlin, that's not allowed in this roleplay. His home can be in Emberlight, though. Also, the Stalker doesn't eat Swarm, because one can get infected with it that way, and the Stalker isn't insane.
Special Powers: Strong Curse, Shadow Cloak Check!
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Yikes, that's a lot of "no go's." Your character's name, appearance, age, eye color, height, weight, arsenal, personality, and biography need to be fixed. Since that's a whole lot to change up, allow me to make a suggestion:
Name: Lucario
Appearance: uncut black hair, gray skin, purple eyes, purple Swarm runes on his face
Gender: male
Age: technically 20, but he has the body of a 10-year-old.
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 90lbs
Attire: black trench coat, black bodysuit, black gloves, black knee-high boots, black gauntlets
Arsenal: Stalker Hood, Stalker Cloak, Darkfang Shield, Void Striker
Personality: adventurous, inquisitive, reclusive, observant
Biography: Lucario was born on the Skylark like any other Knight. The Skylark arrived at Cradle when he was a year old, and he was separated from his parents in the crash. Rogue gremlins found him and took him in as one of their own, raising him in the subtown Emberlight. He soon discovered that he had a knack for moving about unseen; the advantages of such a skill did not go unnoticed by the Ghostmane Stalker legion, and he was inducted into their ranks upon his sixth birthday. One day, during his tenth year of age, he stealthily followed a party of Knights into a Shadow Lair, and disappeared without a trace for ten years. During that time, the Swarm had infected him, but being a Knight, he could not be fully absorbed. Still, he was firmly under the Swarm's control, and was sent to the surface to observe and facilitate the expansion of the Swarm. Upon hearing of the Games, he realized their potential for the Swarm, and voluntarily joined.
How does this look, Creeperlucario?
Name: Creep
Appearance: A shadow version of a Vanguard wearing the Divine Set
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Eye color: Black
Skin color: Pitch Black
Height: 3'1
Weight: 1 stone
Attire: Full Infernal Guardian set
Arsenal: Divine Swarm Helm and Divine Swarm Armor
Personality: Creep is usually quiet and can detect when someone is nearby, Prefers to sneak up behind an enemy to finish them off when using shadow cloak, Can also spot traps very far away
Biography: Creep was born in Emberlight and started to learn the hazards the world would bring. His parents died when Creep was 5 and got basically nothing from the funeral. When Creep was 10, he started to explore and when he reached depth 23, the swarm started to pull Creep into a shadow lair and since Creep never had any good weapons, he couldn't stop the swarm to kill him. When the swarm brought him to the unknown passage, the swarm turned Creep into a shadow version of a Knight wearing the Divine set. His age also got scrambled and basically destroyed everything he had. The reason why the swarm never killed Creep was the fact they needed a swarm agent on the surface to slowly corrupt the planet. Unfortunally, when Creep leaves the swarm, he gets Strong Curse which really ruins the majority of his attacks and usually restorts to the shadow cloak to survive. There is now a stalker who is craving for some swarm blood who heard just leave the passage and is now after Creep
Special Powers: Strong Curse, Shadow Cloak