I didn't realize we were dead, Or religious!* Hooray... I think?
*I know it's a spelling error, But at least I get to make use of it*
Also, New page!
Skylark Down RP (discussion thread)(apps open)
Indeed, but I can't help it, every time I want to spell Haven I want to spell it Heaven.
I'm considering tweaking the plot a little just so I can play. The waiting is becoming unbearable. xD
How do you think I feel? I can't came on as my main character till at least half way or later. But my zeal holds out. Some times we have to wait in order to enjoy.
Don't blow up my suit plz :/, Affraiel kinda need that suit to progress with the story. My whole plot depends on it. For now Affraiel have to go solo, or meet up with Evaria by chance, who knows.
Maybe Delta Squad can be assigned to go find Affraiel once they reach Haven. That'll be an interesting plotline.
Hmm, what am I doing waking up next to Grantz? I don't understand :|
You're not supposed to understand. It'll become clearer later on.
Are we just assuming that Affriel whited out due to the ghost? What's going on here?
Nope, Affraiel didn't white out, the ghost came to the physical realm to haunt him, the name is Eugene, he won't affect your story, but he will be looking after other character's progress and report it to me if neccessary. He is completely undetectable, only Affraiel and Serris know his existance, top secret of the spiral order, the spirit medium soldier.
@Thin
I added additional conversation with Eugene to connect the story with grantz, that dude got alotta explaining to do.
If Sherry were a character, (An NPC is close enough,) I wouldn't know what to do for progression. She just kinda gets to... hang back. Be a nuisance/pushover.
Any feedback/tips?
E: Hmm.. I'll have to think about that, As I haven't really thought deeply about Sherry's backround as it was not required.
Although, I'd have to say that she likes to tinker with things to make them helpful. Turtle Bombs, Who would expect a plushie to explode on them?
EE: I'll post again in the morning if I don't get caught. 5:30-7:00ish.
EEE: While I decide the proper answer, Let me just say that there's a big hole in one of your ideas. *Points to the spark post, Points to Rhendon's List*
So, If knights are revived, Wouldn't that mean the previous squads would still be alive?
What role does Sherry play that other characters cannot?
EDIT: That's not quite what I mean. Does she exist simply to talk to Leeroy? Is she a love interest? Maybe a plot driver or plot device?
EDIT1: Not necessarily. You can't be revived if your entire body burned to ashes or if you fell in an unreachable place.
Mhmm.
Just take into account Solomon's attempt at trying to Res Evaria.
There's other factors besides being unreachable.
Menders can use "Resurrection" however, which may explain why she's alive now.
But then again, Im sure Thin'll explain in due time.
@Edolas: I actually explained what happened to Evaria earlier in this thread. The Knight's Tech Suit is designed to facilitate revival after death. If everything works as intended, inserting a Spark of Life should successfully revive a brain-dead person.
However, if the mind-mapping component of the Tech Suit malfunctions, one possible repercussion is memory loss upon revival, which is what happened to Evaria.
EDIT: I described the system here.
The adisipation for getting started is killing ma :L I want to go, but I know I must wait. Thin I am feeling the pain that you where feeling earlier ;L
You know how some movies occasionally have scenes showing the villains plotting stuff? We could do that. :D
Or you could control Diavolo Sintaris. >:)
You guys are moving too slow. I'mma just plant you all in front of Spiral HQ now.
Hmm, are you really ok with Mawa shutting down her RP and put the story into her chronicle? It seems like to me she just stole some of your interllectal properties.
ps. I don't know where is Grantz taking me, can't progress if I don't know where he is taking me.
I'm okay with Mawa's doing all that.
Grantz was taking you to the nearest elevator, and thence to Haven. I was hoping the encounter would lead to some conversation. After all, wouldn't a grown man like Affraiel object to being carried around like a damsel in distress? :P
Grantz is NOT an NPC, so you don't have permission to use the character. Grantz also has a specific way of speaking which I would like to model in the conversation.
Hey, you didn't have to delete everything, just the parts where Grantz speaks (and anything that follows from that). You know, carry on a conversation with me (via RP).
What should rhendon do now that the squad is back together... Go back to the chasm?
That moment, when I want to get on one of the other leader. I hate to say it but it would be a good time to have a meeting of the leader's Thin. As in set them together and have them talk about whats going on as well as the reactions to the squad's return and loss. Olzo, Feron, Barrus, and Vaelyn. It would make since and give a structer to who makes up the upper leader's of the Spiral Order on Cradle.
Also sorry for being so silent :L Currently my internet keeps cutting out around 8pm EST (-5 GMT) IDK why.
@Colray: It's up to you. Rhendon *should* go back to Rescue Camp, but nothing important to the story happens there (unless you're ready to begin a sub-fanfiction series within the RP).
So you could either
*have Rhendon tag along,
*drop Rhendon and wait for another character, or
*play as Gojira, the squad Battle Sprite.
@Darkwatck: It sounds like a good idea, but the problem is, there won't be nearly as much to talk about before Delta Squad is assigned. Also consider that certain important secrets are likely to be discussed during the meeting; if the meeting occurs after those secrets are revealed (namely after Delta Squad leaves HQ), then we can handle them without difficulty.
The consern is noted. But here is a kicker, to make the squad that is entering have a question on their mind when they leave make the conversation just stop as if they where holding something back. Its implants that the leaders are not giving everything up front but also makes the hero's have questions they can come back later and get. IDK in my mind this sounds like a good way to shadow a villain with in their own ranks but really its just the PC's minds playing tricks on them selves.
It would mostly be between Vaelyn, Olzo, and Feron. Serris and Barrus will be a miss as most the descution will be with them. Since you stated Serris has most the power, but I am under the believe Olzo has the command, thus he might be the first to talk here. This brings me to this point, you will be using Vaelyn and Feron, and I will be doing the role for Olzo. But to placecate myself I must state this. We need to understand and make a plan if this meeting is to happen with Delta, more less assigning the new team member to Solomon's group.
So the following should be there.
Vaelyn: Leader of special forces.
Feron: Battle field legistic's.
Olzo: Commander of the Spiral Order and Captian of the Skylark.
And
Kora: Intel officer.
I state Kora since she can give them the video recording from the helms of the Knights and the Commanders can get information fromt he Knights they are about to talk to.
All right, let's try it.
Let's avoid hinting at certain secrets while we're at it. ;)
Ozlo and Serris are teleconferencing because they cannot be physically present for the meeting. Feron is initially alone in his office, and Vaelyn and Barrus walk in together.
Kora could be taking a break so she could attend the meeting in person.
Alright who will be hitting who here?
I know I will be in charge of Ozlo. But anyone else?
So, what happened? Dead, Preoccupied, Or just somewhere else? (Posting rate droppage or something)
(Also, is it just me, or is this slowly becoming the RolePlayMasters' forum?)
@Darkwatck: I'll be handling Feron, Vaelyn, and Kora. I need you to handle Ozlo, and if Midnight-Dj doesn't handle Serris, you can.
@Liminori: I'm both preoccupied and posting elsewhere.
Also, no, it's not just you; I've noticed it too. I wonder if it's just that no one else is as concerned about the plot as the GMs are. :/
Well to remidy this we need to get everyone envolved in the plot. After all we are guiding them but we also need them for they are diving the road we are laying down for them to play Thinslayer. Love it or hate it, we love the Players and respect them for putting up with the story line, just as much if not more so then the Players who are respecting us just as much as we respect them if not more so.
Also I am going to give the go as Ozlo here in the meeting hall. This will give the PC's more insitive to be their, well rather the Players because that is where the spot light will be next aye?
I think i will wait for another character, don't feel like doing a battle sprite. I'll be waiting for a new character!
It seems we are starting a come back here, quick PLAYERS GET INVOLVED!
Vaelyn is female.
Also, I don't think Alpha Squad has left yet. Euclid is still fuming, and [new lore incoming!] is serving detention time on behalf of his squadmates in protest over a certain transfer.
Involving! Jjfviduwywnqkxpvidjthficmqdpvinqjajvisnkeo howzat
Alright, well just give me a update via RP forum in IC to make up for the error in translation. I will go back and edit my post POSTHASTE.
Fixed Gender confusion.
INVOLVINGS ANDSTUFF? AAAH. I justwokehup...
Bleeeeegh. *Trying to maintain sanity* SoOo... Darkwatck- Great uhhh.... script, But plenty of typing errors and stuff. Still, Well done. Too much plot to think of all at once, If I were in your place. Easy to understand though.
Another Edit: Also- If anyone's interested, Diavolo's still available.....
You know what... Done. Man, I have edited this one thing too much.
I suppose that I've finished planting the seeds of doubt.
I'll be power-playing a few PCs in the next scene, so keep your hats on.
Well, It's just a bit of powerplay, But hey- So long as you can make it seem like something the character would say.
I'm sorry Thinslayer, I'm not sure how this will work out... 'Cause you see, well - er. I don't have a hat.
Unknown RPER detected! 0_0
Who the bloodeh hell is Marshallows, And why is he in our RP? I'd like to know why he's posting without an application or anything.
Wrong RP?
I have a suggestion for a new character that I could do. Maybe some sort of a mercenary type character? Or like someone who feeds info to the Antagonist, I was thinking an Apocrean Disciple, but something else would work.
Affraiel is the ex-con, so he is kinda already the antagonist of the story, just look at the way he talk.
Well I am enjoying the read so far. I believe Kora would be having a field day looking at these view ports and relying the infomration back to those around her. After all she is a information Officer, Olzo and Feron will love the moment when they ask what the hell was going threw their minds in these fights.
Still keep going your almost to Haven I believe.