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I'm cool with that. I just like to think in my own little lore that the Knights had to start somewhere before energy, and that hi-power rifle still use conventional ammunition. And the thing that was with the Spiral/Triumvirate was that both sides would hire him, not knowing, but being a bad guy is cool, since I think I'm the only one. Anyway, on with my bio.
EDIT: Oh, and the rifle can still have the .300 Weatherby rounds and 6x50 power scope and six round mag, right? And maybe an extended barrel, since that rifle looks pretty short. Oh, and the bio is with my original app.
Xindao
I hold my gun steady, pointing it at a large Dragon. My gun's grooves and edges all shine with a beautiful light, and a shining arrow of light is formed in front of my shot gun, gathering light from all around until I see nothing but the black magenta storm in the distance, formed as a towering Dragon, like those of old. I stare up into it's eyes, and...I awake.
I throw my legs over the edge of the bed, and hop up. After getting properly dressed, I walk out the door and into the glorious light of Almire. I am allowed to sleep in the White Council's dorms, but occasionally I sleep out at a tavern. Never touching a drink, of course, just to attempt to create some bonds with the people who dwell here. I check the gun hidden in my coat, and go in a dark alley so as to not disturb the public. I stretch out my bright wings, and soar into the sky.
On my way, I grab a granola bar from an outside marketplace and leave a hundred ten crowns in it's place for Astraea
I arrive quietly, since I know Takiza is probably asleep, and sneak in to the Council building. I meet everyone in the kitchen, and glance over a little to Astraea, who is...again...hungry and pouting. I sit down at the counter, fold my arms, and glance at Astraea again. I slowly slide the granola bar in her direction, Kirito's eyes widening. I retract my hand, "That should hold her off for a while longer, right?"
Sorry if my post here is kinda rushed, but it's morning here, and I got to go to church.......
@Thin: I saw a bit of grammer mistakes, but.... it feels kinda awkward to correct you when you're fighting the debate that I started. Sorry, but I notice these things. I'm a grammer Nazi......
@Frostrex: Hey! I thought of the Sniper first! I'm banning you from using the sniper line of weapons! Kidding..... xD
@Thin again: Aren't we supposed to post stories on to the roleplay post? Why are we all posting here?
@Thin third time: Thanks for helping me take care of Ultimatknightz. Seriously, thanks. I'm getting annoyed. MY HATRED FOR HIM GROWS.....
@Kaju: You know, my character, a puny human, has a sword. He can slowly take off your fingers and toes, which will hurt, even if you don't die and I do.......
So here.
I honestly don't know, I'm just going with the posting flow o.o
@Frostrex: yes, so long as it can plausibly deal more damage to flesh than to armor. Is it a hollow point round?
@Topo: hatred is ugly. Don't hate on Ultima. I figure he just wants to feel important, but don't we all, really? He just needs to get a grip on what kinds of things negatively impact those around him.
Also, yes, we are supposed to be using the story thread. I have a link to it on the first page. Everyone, please transfer your official stories to that thread.
Feel free to point out my grammar mistakes whenever you spot them. Chances are, I'm quite calm enough to take them well. :)
I can't really post another story post until someone comes and sees Archemiday, so could someone make it so they see him X3?
Archemiday awoke in a small bed, lightly decorated with images of yellow flowers and incredibly soft. The room was fairly small, but it had a walk-in closet and a large dresser against the wall opposite the bedside. This must be a girl's room.
On the bed was a note with a haiku:
Awaken
Find me in the kitchen
And eat.
Yes, it's a hollow point, since Otto aims for throats(it'll be explained) and energy weapons would deal more damage to armour, since they scorch rather than impact. Also, he has exactly one mag of gas-expanders, in case of armoured throats, if you allow of course.
It's fine. No need to ask me permission for relatively minor stuff. ;)
first off, the drawing should be finished tommorrow or monday! kk so XD
second! are we starting this RP or not?! :P (in the RP thread that thin so kindly created for order to exist in this commotion of posts)
Name : Nai
(Race : human?? though he looks pecular because of his white rainbowish hair and verrryyy girly appearance no one knows how he came up to look like that, but Nai has been like this ever since he was born so yeah ^^
Gender : male
Faction: spiral i guess :o? :3 (((double agent of the Morai :3 no one knows XD)))
powers /abilities /rank: he has no rank so far as spiral is concerned, since he does not form part of the military, however, he never really fights and he is not that good with swords or any weapons, only with knives actually. he is more of a melee fighter, since he learned many combat styles from his masters during the years, his rank in melee (if he ever really fights in a dire situation) would be from Champion to ??-?? ????? but his rank in swords and such would be of a Knight elite. he doesnt really have any abilities apart from his incredible knowledge in martial arts and incredible agility ^^ oh and biting >:D!
Age : 16 approximately in appearance
Personality : a bit bipolar personality (not much). most of the time he is very nice, friendly and patient, but quite clumsy. (If pushed to a corner he can become very dangerous and agressive but this is in very rare occasions--he will bite lawl.) and most of all: VERY childish no matter the personality. people would confuse his personality as one of a pet: adorable almost all the time, but it can bite if scared!
Appearance : a very cute face, almost like a doll, many times one cannot tell if he's either a girl or boy, almost transparent ice blue eyes with some pink/violet/ light yellow reflections. not too tall, even a bit small in stature for his "age" very pale fair skin, whitish hair with slight rainbow like ends, his hair reaches his neck but not long enough to reach the shoulders. ((((his hair is usually a total mess)))) slightly long nails in his hands, reminding oneself a bit of a cat. he gets sometimes (almost all the time lawl) even mistaken for a girl :O!
Tends to wear/arsenal : (white/blue) Magic hood, honored blade, magic cloak (which he only wears in stealthing situations or travelling), Blizzbreaker Shield..and no gun nor bombs! all the arsenal he has he got from his master or crafted it himself. When he is not in a mission or traveling he likes to wear comfortable clothes such as: pijamas, cloaks, clothing too big for him, sweaters, sweat pants, ect...he usually only wears socks or is barefoot, even in clockworks! he uses glasses sometimes, usually upon waking up or for going to sleep while reading books...ect.. ( he plainly doesnt see well from afar or up close and doesnt tend to recognise people easily: so yeah he has a very bad vision overall but he doesnt like people knowing of his incapability so he usually wears contacts during the day)
Bio : he has lost his memories when he was around the age of five, where he found himself alone, without parents or friends. A master of Martial Arts and other combat styles found him and trained him for 4 years without rest. One day when he collapsed from training somewhere nearby the bridge, a kind old lady found him and took care of him. However, he still continued training with his old Master...Ever since that day he has been living with the elder lady and calls her "grandma." His master and Grandmother dont get along well with each other as one forces Nai to train until exhaustion and the other cares for him most of all in the world.
pic:
with glasses: http://puu.sh/3oCgC.jpg
without glasses: http://puu.sh/3oCg3.jpg
extras: his faorite color is blue, his favorite food is gyoza (http://tinyurl.com/p5gn9r7), he does not know how to swim ~o~ he hates war and fighting but he knows that it is inevitable so yeah, he has a pet white bunny-winged-dragon sprite/pet with blue eyes named Shiro-chan/shiro/whitey back in his home (http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/n534/kairaxx12/ashiro.png)
p.s. yes he is a double agent >:3 but he himself doesnt know it (since he has amnesia from the time of what happened before he was 5) so please no one make their characters' suspicious of Nai for being a double agent TwT he is innocent ~
p.s.s i will make a drawing of what he looks like with the arsenal sometime later~
p.s.s.s i do repeat: a very childish and likeable character, almost like a pet bunny/kitty/doggy/birdy XD~
p.s.s.s.s he is with no problem a second character, usually around in funny/comedic scenes and there to break the tension :3 also he lives in the contryside where many wild tier 1 monsters roam, some are even adopted as pets and farmed for meat :P a long journey to Isora. he lives very near the border of Valhallan, he even goes to one of the Valhallan border cities with his grandma for trading goods/food on sundays. :3
P.S.s.s.s.ss.s. sorry for the LONG POST!
I like your character! And our story could really use some comic relief. There are a few things about your character that I would like to see corrected, but it's nothing serious:
*Give him the Magic Cloak and Magic Hood, instead of what he currently has.
*I noticed that you mentioned the Clockworks. It doesn't exist yet because Cradle doesn't exist yet.
*We can't have human-angel hybrids. Due to his lack of supernatural powers, I recommend making him human.
He shall be accepted once those concerns are addressed. Thanks for joining! :D
I fainted again. I awoke on a incredibly soft bed decorated with yellow flowers. The room was small, and it had a walk in closet as well as a large dresser. Was this a girls room? Next to the bed was a small haiku poem
"Awaken
find me in the kitchen
and eat"
I hopped out of the bed and walked out of the doorway. I went through a hallway and entered a room that looked like a kitchen. As I walked in I said, "Hello?"
Upon entering the kitchen, Arch saw two people (Astraea & Xindao) chatting at a remote table, and a note on the one right in front of him.
Howdy stranger!
If you're reading this, it means you slept too long. Get a bite to eat and fill up, because I borrowed your bow for security reasons, and you'll have to find me if you want it back.
P.S. Xindao, I know you read this note when I wasn't looking, so don't pretend to be innocent when I come back to kick your guilty butt. <3
OH SH*T
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(Reason I am posting this here is because it is Dagoon's Bio, but before she's in the past AND ON ISORA)
Also, since the clockworks do not exist yet, even proto armor should be rare, honestly. The required materials to upgrade come from the clockworks.
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"Jason! Hold the business Until I get back! I'm going out to get more supplies!"
"You got it ma, See you when you get back."
Life was good. It had been a few years since the war of (RtC) had been won. Dagoon now had a family, and there was no longer a large threat of another Morai vs Knight war again, seeing as they had to fight against the unknown together.
The business that Dagoon and her family now held was a big one. A really big one. The mist tanks that everyone carried around inside of them (Litteraly) Had been made so that the tanks of mist were now attached with a teleporter, to the tank that actually held the mist, which was in Dagoon's warehouse.
But there were many of them. all labeled with each Knight's name.
The Business that they held, was to take any calls from certain knights and finish their transactions such as "I need to enlargen my mist tank" or "My mist teleporter isn't functioning properly"
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Whew. I'm not even done with the introduction entirely!
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(Work In Progress)
Ugh, how many times do I have to say this?
This is a prequel series. RtC takes place after this RP.
Edit: wait, are you in the past or future? I can't tell.
I KNOW THAT
BUT DAGOON IS SENT BACK IN TIME, AND ONTO ISORA, I just haven't had enough time to put that in yet, AND I have to go to bed.
(While I wait for kaiju or quexi to post, where is Arch on Isora? Some sort of house I take it?
How 'bout let's just move all the posting to the story thread? Please? If Not, I'll just start.
Oh, good question. He is in White Council dormitory. The entire building is a circular structure, with the meeting room in the center and the dorms, libraries, kitchens, meeting halls, and such in the ring.
As you may recall, the council building is located in Almire, in the capital city of Al'Mire. It is situated next to Al'Mire Citadel and the Imperial Senate, with malls and shopping centers in the surrounding area. Business is booming, and numerous pedestrians and motor carts clutter the streets.
I signal for Astraea to hold on as I swivel around to face the stranger. I see he's read the note I read from afar. I smile at him. "Hello! And how are you this morning?" He seemed to be shocked about his surroundings. "Welcome to the White Council building. Takiza will hopefully be up soon and cook us all breakfast. Come sit down, we can talk." I pat the seat next to me.
As I walked in, I picked up the note and read it. I couldn't remember much, but I had a feeling that bow was important to me. One of the people turned around and patted the seat next to him. I came over to him and sat down. "My morning is going nice. From what I remember.". I said.
Who are you calling honorary council member, Top? XD
Definition:
An honorary position is given as an honor, with no duties attached, and without payment.
I think I'm a council member....
Ah.... That's okay Xindao. I like calling people honorary whenever I want. I'm a merc. I have big gun, and me will boom your small head off.
Definition: I call people honorary whenever I want, because I'm a mercenary. I have a gun, and I will blast your head off if you protest.
Clever kid with a shotgun can't do any harm as long as you got a big gun?
I beg to differ.
Shotgun has no use when I'm far far away, with a Valiance Sniper Rifle.
P.S @Frostex Umm.... You just called me a girl. You meant that literally, or as a phrase?
Clever boy has sharp eye. Clever boy also has an arrow pointing at his victims.
Clever boy is a threat. XD
kk i edited the application post how is it like this?? :3
It was meant as an insult. It's supposed to be implied that Otto knows who the sniper is.
Name: The-Fayz
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Faction: Almirian
Species: Angel or Human?
Appearance: Short, Muscular, Fairly short brown hair, Glowing purple eyes
Arsenal: His beloved Gran Faust, bestowed to him for Lord Vana himself. Also has a sentenza that can poison. He wears Almiran Crusader armor but no fire weakness and a ton more curse resistance.
Abilities: Cursing, Poisoning, Insane agility/ reactions, Natural commander on the battlefield, Insane Horse Riding
Personality: He is hard worker, but still enjoys a good joke. He spends most of his time sharpening and practicing with his GF. He is mature and doesn't really get distracted when he is working, but off duty ...
Biography: He was born the son of a sellsword and a widowed lady in some random town. He fell in love with Lord Vana when he saw him riding to battle one day. He joined his ranks and slowly rose within the Almiran Army. After 17 years in Vanas service he got awarded his GF for soling the Jelly King (Grandfather to the current Royal Jelly) to save a team of recruits that were lost. He is now in Lord Vanas Vanguard and in battle is either in the Vanguard with vana or leading a battalion of his army. As well as his GF he rides his jet black stallion simply called Charger.
@Frostrex: No one calls me girl! I'll kill you!
@Quexi: Clever boy has arrows. Big boy has gun. Big boy's gun will kill you quickly.
@The-Fayz: Hey! You watched the Gone Series too?
Clever boy has aiming arrows. Clever boy gets to snipe.
name: Bak Mei/ Bak-Sensei / Sensei / Bak-Sama / Master Bak (can also be called ojii-san in a non respectful way, only in comedy scenes :3 because he should be respected~ he is old and stuff ~) ---> you can search for his name on google its pretty much him :3
gender: male
species: human
faction: Ex-Morai (its been 11 years since he has retired(???) from the military and moved faraway to the countryside)
age: 72
appearance: actually he is a bit tall, long beard, grey-white hair and beard...umm yeah i will maybe draw him but for now this gves pretty much a very good description of the character's appearance and an idea of his personality: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_4MUf6T4VzPw/S800kef1n3I/AAAAAAAAOUk/Kaoa6nyTd_... or http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100509070236/marvel_dc/images/b/...
Arsenal/clothing: he usually wears a completely grey (men's) yukata or (what looks like martial arts chinese clothing) he has found on rare occasions during his youth, his clothing stays around the black, grey, gold, and whitish tones greatly enhancing his wise appearence. such as: http://thumbnail.image.rakuten.co.jp/@0_mall/machigiya/cabinet/menyk/img... and http://www.finechineseclothing.com/BACKEND/Resource/ProductPic/420_680/m...
as for his arsenal, it has accumulated dust during the years it has been hidden in the old man's armoire as he is trying to forget his terrible past and put this things away, in which lays his old vog cub coat, shogun helm, fang of vog, and his Grey Owlite shield. He still clings on to this set as he has passed countless adventures with it... but he swore he will never use it again. (so dont worry he wont kick anyones butts anytime soon since he's retired, though if people want, we can use him in a dire situation of plot twist or stuff like that XP)
abilities: martial arts, such as renewal tae kwon do (google it If you are interested XD) and many more, but otherwise, he has gotten quite old and cannot not fight as well as he used to if he wants to :0
personality: a grumpy old man, verry wise, and that hates big crowds or loud noises, he absolutely does not care about the government of any country nor any political ideas as he has given up hope on those things, he is sour, but can sometimes (vveeerrrryyyyy little times show a sypathetic atttitude towards his dyciple/considered grandson Nai.) also a very strict character~]
bio: no one knows but grandma, but he used to be a great military legend in Morai 20 years ago, greatly agknowledged by the leaders of Morai... however he one day suddenly quit and moved to the countryside disgusted by the corruption of the country leaders, (actually almost escaping as the military still wanted his power and he is now looked upon as a traitor for leaving) however, it was such a long time ago that now, no one talks about him, only in stories where he is portrayed as a "trator to the Morai" evryone think that he has passed away 10 years ago, when he disapeared, as for him now, no ne knows who he is really, they just think he is an old master on martial arts and it stops at that.
voila~ i think the app is ok :0 yes, the character is powerful, but he is old and has gained experience from the years so it makes sence...and i thought we could use a character like that sometime later on the story hehe >:3 however i dont expect to use him right away in the story, only maybe in the beggining but yeah :3 i thought it would be interesting ^^
P.S sorry for an typos XD!
P.S.S he is indeed a third character, however if somene wants to use him, please keep in mind his personality and all very well, and also please ask first ^^
@Nai-Chan: both apps accepted.
Also, I'm gonna need that picture of Gwen soon. I'm waiting to put in my app for her until it's done.
I can hardly wait...
@The-Fayz: A few minor corrections are in order before I will accept your app. First off, let's bring down the level of his gear a little. He will be wielding a Dark Sealed Sword and Dark Antigua (which will NOT deal poison, sorry), and wears whatever 4* equivalent of Almirian Crusader armor exists at the time. It doesn't look very different; it simply lacks the fur and shoulder spikes. On the shoulders of this armor are two pads like those on zombies. The UVs you put on it are fine - they are roughly equivalent to Fire Med and Curse Max.
Ya sounds good! Nice!! I just wanted something like the GF but ya and it can still curse right? and its k about the poison and that armor sounds pretty cool!
I should be more specific about the stats of the gear.
*The Dark Sealed Sword deals normal damage, but instead of dealing random non-curse statuses on charge, it deals only weak curse.
*The Dark Antigua is exactly like the regular Antigua, but with a Gremlin Low bonus built in. It's a weapon unique to The-Fayz.
Oh, I forgot to mention: your character must also be human. Is that okay?
Hey guys? Err, this is Xindao's killing spree theme music while he fills people with lead x] Bada** Theme Music
Since no one currently mods the moderator, there is no one higher than he is to make sure his app is balanced. So I propose that the other players make that decision. If a majority of players approve of the mod's app, it is accepted. Are we agreed?
haha i agree with it :3
(if you need any help im willing to moderate stuff to help you ^^ i've seen more or less what is accepted/needed and stuff :3)
btw Nai's theme music >:D (TwT my guild-mate made a theme song just for me its awesome!!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Ov9SbNhJ-Y
I don't know if you can be moderator. Shall we put it to a vote?
In a way, you still are free to moderate to an extent; you just don't have the authority to put your foot down and have the final word. You can still critique people's apps and posts, and I will pay attention to those criticisms and take them into account.
Could I actually lbe a sworn bodyguard to vana a bit like the Kingsguard in the Game of Thrones.
@The-Fayz: No to the first, yes to the second. Your character may only wear 2* Plate Mail. He is allowed to be Vanaduke's personal bodyguard. Now, if I could find a player to play as Vanaduke, you might be seeing some action. Anybody? Hello?
@everyone: you may only use any technology that is not of gremlin or Clockworks origin. Try to restrict yourselves to 0*-2* gear, unless higher-starred gear is of critical plot importance (Astraea being an excellent example; she's the Valkyrie Queen, for goodness sake!).
Examples of restricted gear:
*Pulsar lines
*Rocket hammers
*Wolver gear
Also, I will need everyone's vote on my app for Gwenyvier. Yes, I'm ready now. :D
Ya don't want the plate armor and if you want I could be vana?
Name: Gwenyvier Valentine
Gender: female
Faction: Valhalla
Species: angel
Age: 16 cycles
Appearance. Epic, no? Thanks Nai-Chan!! :D
Arsenal: Palutena's Bow, which she "borrowed" from Archemiday. xD
Abilities: Energy Capture, the power to absorb or redirect energy. She is also teleforce-capable, but is untrained in any techniques.
Personality: Gwen is usually a serious (if dramatic) girl, articulate in her speech and writing, cheeky with people she knows or likes, and appreciates humor, though does not herself exercise it often. She's also something of a history buff.
Biography: Gwen was born into the prestigious Valentine family, renowned for its wealth and power. She was 6 cycles of age when her family sent her off to boarding school, after which Freyja took her under her wing and raised her. Freyja resigned the throne after she realized that she had only added to the Isorans' problems by bringing the angels into the world, and selected Gwenyvier to replace her. Gwen assumed the throne when she was 9 cycles of age, and during her reign, she set up the White Council, negotiated peace between the angels and the humans, narrowly averted wars provoked by the humans, and artfully reduced corrupting influences in the surrounding nations. Unfortunately, she did not accurately perceive the quality of her leadership, and stepped down from the throne at age 15 to let Astraea become queen. Gwen was a very popular and charismatic leader, and she left a strong legacy that Astraea must live up to.
Lately, Gwen has been disappearing on random days, growing more serious and depressed after every trip.
I'm starting to get bored of the family dead story, but yeah, it's cool. Vote yesh!
Can Xindao be accepted? I think that app was pretty good by my standards(as a rough draft, not as an app, that's for you to decide...). I promise I'll be one of the better characters(as in building good character foundations) and I'll try not to screw stuff up with my crazy twists. Please *-*