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Wed, 07/03/2013 - 22:24
#301
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
@Thin

Is Seatus supposed to timewarp alpha squad in then? Also I'm sort of stuck on where Axis should be going from here, I want him more involved with the fights, but he was more introduced in a political manner.

Wed, 07/03/2013 - 22:34
#302
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Gzilla

Actually, Axis is perfect where he is. It's fine that he's in a political situation right now, because since this is an origins story, we can explore how he became the villain he usually is.

Also, Alpha Squad still exists, so there is no need to teleport them. The reason they stuck around for several hundred years was the simple fact that they were in stasis on the Skylark for about that long while it traveled.

The events of RtC were made possible by the invention of the FTL drive some time after the events of Spiral Knights. Before then, travel was a good deal slower and required that the crews be put in stasis during the journey.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 00:08
#303
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
WAIT!

Seatus, we weren't supposed to have read any of that second post you had? Well, at least it turned out I was right in the end.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 00:20
#304
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Lol

It doesn't matter now. It never happened, nor is going to. I have to tone down on my story, or it'll turn too intense and explode everything.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 04:09
#305
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Wait...

Could this final fight with diablo occur after a time lapse, preferably about 4-6 years later? Astraea still has to mother Ikaros (don't worry, none of that will be in the RP) and if she dies now, how can she?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 05:30
#306
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Pics?

Seatus1(Kind of)

Nai(Kind of)

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 04:32
#307
Nai-Chan's picture
Nai-Chan
@seatus

hehe nice plot twist you did there :P
also...
naaaii-ce *////* darn...len kagamine is so handsome---

*fangirl death*

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 05:31
#308
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
fixed

link

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 08:41
#309
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Well, I had a bit of spare time, so...

Here's some Gwen art

I'll post something on the story thread soon. You guys post story posts faster than Astraea and Kirito can reply to them... >.<

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 12:36
#310
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Liminori
Soooo uh. . .

I don't know if I can keep up with all the posts. I was going to have a small part of plot revolvivng around Dagoon, because "Hey, do you know what cradle is? (Other dude:) Isn't that something to carry a baby? (Dagoon) No! It's a inconveniently named planet, and most of it is mechanical! (Switchswitch boom)
Well, you could try talking to the town elder (Yeah that's a thing) Good Luck, whoever you are."
The reason I haven't been posting recently: A youtube channel called TableTop, and a Minecraft Modpack called Hexxit.
Soooooo. . . Dagoon's more or less a side character. Dagoon's up for grabs, If anyone is willing to do her story.
-----------------------------------------------
Oh Noes! (awkward zombie link)

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 12:55
#311
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Liminori

It's not too late, Liminori. Just introduce Dagoon and get going.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:10
#312
Travid's picture
Travid
Quick question

Is it alright if I add a lost soul as an unofficial member of Euclid's squad?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:13
#313
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Travid

What does it add to the story?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:17
#314
Liminori's picture
Liminori
. . .

I kinda sorta did, but I'm not sure what to do from here.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:21
#315
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Liminori

Find Dragoon's role, or niche, in the story. Why is she here, and what are her goals?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:35
#316
Liminori's picture
Liminori
Isn't that obvious?

Do whatever she can to get home. Of course, time/space travel isn't very easy to accomplish, and therefore she'd only be able to leave at the very end, accomplishing this feat with a machine someone helped make, and the crystalizer. (Which of course, Dagoon won't be very pleased about)

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:30
#317
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
@Kaiju

From your last post you said Xindao and Gwen were the last Valentine's, but Axis and Diablo are still alive. So is it a specific grudge against Gwen's part of the family or the whole Valentine clan?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:36
#318
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Gzilla

That fact didn't escape my notice, either. I'm pretty sure it's against the whole Valentine clan, and Kaiju just slipped up. But let's wait and see how he/she reacts.

Darn it, Kaiju! I must know - are you male or female?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:37
#319
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Feline-Grenadier
LOL

Thin, eat your nectarines right now! :I

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:39
#320
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Oi, sorry!

Vogdammit, I just noticed that problem! Sorry, I'll edit my post.

@thin; *wink* I don't usually give info over the Internet, but I'll just say that you should easily be able to figure it out if you investigate a bit.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:47
#321
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer

@Vinnydime: I ate 'em already. I'll be fishing stuff out of my teeth all day now. xD But they were quite delicious.

@Kaijuhunter: I already did some investigation, but between your focus on female characters and your other username deathscythe###, I still can't figure it out. :P

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 13:52
#322
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Hmm, really? Still can't figure it out?

Its somewhere on my DA profile... but if you still cant figure it out... Can't help you there. Although i must inquire; for what reasons doth thou require such information about my gender?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 14:02
#323
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Kaijuhunter

I inquire so I don't have to keep calling you he/she/it/DARNITWHATGENDERAREYOU/transgender/Kaijuhunterwithanametoolongtospellallthetime/Kaiju/Kihunter.

@everyone: Nai-Chan modified my photo of Gwenyvier. She is now summoning a fireball! Do you like it? :D

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 14:06
#324
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Hmm

Fine. I'm a boy. I'd prefer if you just referred to me as Kaiju-San, though

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 14:18
#325
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Kaiju-San?

Thank you, that helps. If my own gender is unclear to anyone else, I'm a guy.

Kaiju-San takes a little longer to spell than Kaijuhunter; am I understanding you correctly?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 14:41
#326
Travid's picture
Travid
@Thinslayer

He'll probably just stick around for this one time, then leave. Once everyone's out, Hegrand's gone. He is, in fact, a lost soul. Travid will probably just give him directions to the nearest graveyard and be off.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 15:03
#327
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Travid

Okay, as long as he stays a minor character.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 15:23
#328
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
(Just to be clear, Seatus

(Just to be clear, Seatus looks like his human form, besides the Snarbolock Wings....and his photo.....I'm changing it again...Here and ignore the pencil neck, and try to imagine a bit better of a build...and the tinged hair...and you got Seatus)

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 15:49
#329
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Seatus

Have you seen these ones?
Not bad, right? A bit young, tho.
This one doesn't strike me as being Seatus, but it kinda fits the bill.
This one even has your theme on it. I like this one.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 15:58
#330
Nai-Chan's picture
Nai-Chan
hmm

so does that make me the only girl around here?? XD

*forever alone*

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 16:01
#331
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Lol

Seen the first two...the second one intrigues me....which reminds me. I have to go pocture hunting, even if it means I have to dig to the bedrock of tumblr...

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 16:07
#332
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Nai-Chan

You're a girl?? Today is just getting weirder and weirder...

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 18:01
#333
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
@Thin

Is Diablo going to reply to Axis' call about Seatus appearing? Edit: spelled Seatus' name wrong

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 17:11
#334
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Lol

These ones are closer
Seatus1
Seatus2
Seatus3

FIXED! Forgot to add that little "=" sign XD

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 16:31
#335
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Gzilla

Darn it, thanks. I'll have to address that now. Gimme a few minutes.

@Seatus: the links are broken.

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 21:16
#336
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Waiting or bored?

Is everyone waiting on someone, or bored of the story?

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 21:23
#337
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Well...

It is the 4th of July....

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 14:59
#338
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
@Seatus

Um, Kirito was the one that said that there is only one god, not Astraea. In fact, Astraea hasn't talked at all since she threatened Seatus

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 15:07
#339
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Whoopsie

I just. woke up...sawwy *_*

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 15:15
#340
Nai-Chan's picture
Nai-Chan
lawl

thin: yeah! XD everyone keeps mistaking me for a guy @a@ (not the first time though) do i act so much like a guy? X'D, also i'm having a bit of a writer block+ i usually get bored on long speeches/council meetings in every single story (in mangas and animes i always tend to skip them if there arent any plot twist statements such as (("i am your father!" or..."we found out that person A is a traitor!" or such..)) so yeah! also i've been a bit busy lately ~drawing and such~ so sorry if i'm not posting as much this past couple of days XD

seatus: i'm going to sleep lawl ~.~

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 17:28
#341
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Nai-Chan

Actually, it's not your actions that make you seem boyish as much as it is the gender of your character and profile picture. But I must say that your style of writing was rather unusual for a "guy," though. xD

You should be seeing quite a bit of drama and tension in this council meeting, so I find it quite unfortunate that it bored you.

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 19:07
#342
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Callis-The-Wicked
@Thinslayer

I think it's time for some chaos, don't you? Attackers, tanks, something that disrupts the Council meeting.

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 19:21
#343
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Serious Thin

We gots to insert conflict, or a clue, OR SOMETHING! This story can't die o.o

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 19:39
#344
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Seatus

Don't worry, there's some action planned. The council is almost done; if they approve Gwen's proposed plan, the action will resume.

But we could still interrupt the council with some action, if you want. I have a few ideas;
*Diablo could respond to Axis's call and come to the council building.
*Servants (hitmen) from the Valentine clan could abduct someone.
*The Triumvirate or Rogue Valkries could launch a counter attack to eliminate those who know of their operation.

Any other ideas?

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 19:45
#345
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Mmmh

*Disruption from an armed assassin entering the Council room.
*Lockdown within the Council building, causing mayhem.
*Revelation reveals tunnels under the Council Building, causing chaos and distrust.
*Diablo locks down building and enters to behold the Game Changer via killing a few guards within a surveillance room.
*Betrayal of a Council member.

Anyone else up for some brainstorming...?

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 19:54
#346
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Oh man...

I just had a positively wicked idea.

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 20:07
#347
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
:D

Well, get on with the wicked. I feel like the story is losing value unless the characters get their chances to prove something.

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 20:11
#348
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Seatus

I wrote it down on the story thread. You're up first!

[assuming you've read it:] Can you guess who it is?

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 20:21
#349
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Well of course

Gwenyvier, the Finder. But I assume all of this can be done, since the Star Dragon can patch up the mess Seatus is bound to make...

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 21:13
#350
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
Twilight is best pony!

Man I'm bored. Unfortunately, I can't post anything because there is really nothing left to do. If you had gone with the armed assassin idea, it would have been perfect, as the Triumvirate could have sent Otto to eliminate everyone that had something to do with the attack on the storage facility. They wouldn't have known he was part of it and that plan would've worked in his favour. But I digress, the current storyline is cool.

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